7 human beings are sent to Equestria one night. With no known way to return, they could be stuck there. How will they fit into the storyline?
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Awesome, are you going to give them a way to get fresh ammunition?
Shining's reaction was better then I expected
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great chapter as always man...I now have the urge to
killtroll someone, most preferably Shining Armor8123886 I love this chapter my friend so halarious and I can't wait for the next upload for this story I'll be waiting my friend
Why wasn't Jack invited from the start?
8124097 Jack and Jeff were invited to the wedding. They both rejected their invitation.
8124231 Constructive criticism please.
8123962 Sorry. Xavier already claimed him as a target.
8124443 I think now Celestia should at least try to make Xavier and Shining reconcile. Something along the lines "If I listened to humans, we could've avoided this mess" and "If I was more polite with ponies, my friends wouldn't have wasted as much ammo".
Not that they necessarily agree
Shining went Super Saiyan!
8124483 But Xavier likes getting under Shining's skin.
8124844 Yeah, and it looks like the perfect moment for Celestia to tell him to stop. Or at least to tune it down. Who will prevail?
The smuggness is so intense
8124999 You forget Celestia's a troll too.
Before I read this, what is the Gore Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
8125856 That is for you to find out on your own. :)
So catching up on this hurt me lmao as I read this next to my sleeping girlfriend I keep bursting out laughing of course every time I wake her she hits my side's but daamn this is a awesome story I love it
God my lungs hurt from laughing XD
8125111 Yep. And refusal will present a golden oppotunity for her.
8125856 So far: one of humans is very unhappy and occasionally shoots Equestrian creatures who deserve it.
That ending, XD!
poor shing, I feel sorry for him NOT
8128326 Here's the thing. Xavier trolls people that don't like him. They're easy targets, especially his style of trolling.
It took me two days to read all of the story, just got done right now reading all of it. I fucking love the part when Jeff is finally able to use the weapons on the changelings, and the part when Xavier was affected buy the poison joke, I was fucking Dying!!!!!!!. Please continue on with this amazing story.
Destiny rules over fate.
-Destiny_Ruins
Dammit, I thought that one of the humans would've got an opportunity to hit Shining right in the dick.
Anyways, I actually would like to see a scene when King Sombra tries to take back the Crystal Empire and reclaiming the crystal heart, he's already being hunted down in fear by a primal human from Farcry: Instincts or uh Evolution.
8178889 There's a fiction plot for you to write.
Unfortunately, I've played none of the Farcry games, therefore it'd kinda seem like an unfunny joke to throw it in my fiction. Kinda like trying to make a reference to a movie you've never seen (that's not the Twilight series). It just won't work.
8179742 Oh yeah I forgot that I could write that scene of hitting Shinning right in the dick.
Yeah, but still it could be kinda funny to see a villain getting a taste of their own medicine by running away in fear. Though I'm pretty sure there hasn't been a lot of stories with those kinds of scenes.
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Shining Armor fighting Chrysalis: She keeps kicking me in the dick! Why?! Why does she keep kicking me in the dick!!
Xavier: Wait. I think I might have a way to beat her.
Shining Armor: If you say hit her really hard, I swear to Celestia I'm gonna kick you in the dick!
Speaking of the Shining Saiyan thing, maybe when they face Sombra you can have Twilight and Xavier kiss right in front of him. The anger will cause him to go Super Saiyan and he will launch a massive blast from his horn, only it will be directed at Sombra ( think of it like a Kamehameha).
8208439 That was only supposed to be referential humor. No super saiyans will be in this fiction.
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HAHAHAHA!
Pretty sure that I'm not the only one laughing at this alternate scene.
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bruh i commented that 2 years ago
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Yeah, 2 years late. Besides, I already told him what fiction I found that did it before I did.
Will there be another chapter? I love this story so much!
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There will be in about 10 seconds.
I really don't get why he doesn't want to tell anything about his encounter with Chrysalis. At least Celly may recognize the name, but nope. Let's sit and smile like an idiot because... something? Feels forced even for trolling. And it doesn't seems like he's bothered by what happened to Twi like he knows it'll be alright and she's safe there, but how he could possibly know that?