7 human beings are sent to Equestria one night. With no known way to return, they could be stuck there. How will they fit into the storyline?
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They're going to be attacked and the humans are going to use the magic powers of not having magic to withstand stuff and save everyone.
6688131 Ah, okay, out of curiosity, what model was the handgun?
6688138 Smith and Wesson SD9
6688161 Yeah, that'll do it, how good of a shot is Xavier? Like sniper good or just regular good?
6688167 Given his perception skills, his good eyes, and his ability to focus, I'd say he's a pretty good shot. Almost 'aimbot' good. I wouldn't say he's 'sniper' good though. I think Traevon will take that title. He's more focused and perceptive than Xavier will ever be.
Those "said" seem to annoy the writers more than the readers. Nothing's wrong with "said".
Coloured sentences have been tried before. Some like them, some hate. I've never seen coloured quotes, they seem less annoying to me. But what colour should Rarity's quotes be? Can this site use white with black outline?
Ah pretty clever using colored quotes for the mane 6, and I hope Xavier and Rarity never become friends. By that I mean they have a constant hate for one another, but "try" to tolorate each other for their friends sake. Also I would have made those chump pegasi spend the day picking their teeth off the floor, with broken wings
You know, this fix gives a reason to hate rarity. Good job!
Don't mind me, just pointing out some very minor mistakes:
1) Rainbow and i still hang out together.
2) ...i mean he doesn't have wings.
Otherwise, another great chapter. And Xavier's on going hatred towards Rarity and her antics, priceless. At this rate, even if she saves his life, he'd probably still hate her.
I feel that there is the Slimmest chance those two will ever get along, let alone be friends. Would be funny if she winds up in his herd later on.
6688464 Fixed
6689296 Great. My work here is done.
"Just smile and wave boys, smile and wave"
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I wonder how Xavier will react to Mare Do Well.
6693810 Probably laugh at the name first.
This is great. Can't wait for more!
6699678 Eh, I kinda liked the first cornered version better, but that's just me.
And yeah, since earlier this year I got caught in watching let's plays.
How Xavier gonna react towards Blueblood-Rarity "relation" during Great Galloping Gala ?
6700519 If I were him, I'd give Blueblood a round of applauds
6688192 I get that I'm late for the party. As for coloring the quotes vs. the entire sentence, I say to color the entire sentence. I don't know about anyone else, but having just the quotes colored was jarring to the story's flow and detracted from my immersion into the story.
Bill; hey names bill cipher what are you a pony!
Rarity; yes of course darling!
Bill;no you're the dressmaking fancy stereo type on a child's entertainment show!
Rarity;wha-
Bill;reality is a illusion the universe is a hologram buy gold bye!!!!
Wait, Jeff seeming upset after Rarity's attention is brought to him? Do I detect shipping, or did I leave my shipping goggles on?
7022541 You may've left your shipping goggles on. Jeff is against human x pony relationships.
I am calling it now, Rarity threw the vase.
Fuck Rarity.
Luna is best pony.
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