7 human beings are sent to Equestria one night. With no known way to return, they could be stuck there. How will they fit into the storyline?
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yeeeeah
*insert Spider man's up side- down kiss somewhere*
7200405
there are so many mistakes.... :
I was requested at Sugarcube Corner for a job with repairing a new furniture.
*the
I just up and left Sugarcube Corner.
*got
I had chose to go to Sugarcube Corner to pick up more granola bars.
*chosen
Twilight had long sense went her own way
*since
Keep up the good work tho
7201010 Thanks for pointing them out, but I believe I asked in one of my authors notes to inbox me the mistakes from now on. That would very much be appreciated if you started doing so too.
And two of those aren't even mistakes. Let's not mistake improper grammar for dialect.
what you have in mind for next chapter?
7202234 ah ok
7202615 If I tell ya, it'd be spoiling it. Worry not though, I won't be all that busy this week so it shouldn't take as long to start popping out chapters. Although I might be taking more time to script so it would take even less time to type out the chapters.
Mind if I ask why there's an M rating?
7207037 I uh, kinda do mind. Not gonna risk spilling out spoilers.
I don't really like this episode... But as you used Xavier and his "inner troll" for the creation of Mare Do Well, it becomes quite acceptable.
7210581 I figure it would be more or less an opportunity to bring back the inner troll and reference jokes that everyone loves so much.
I love this fic! It has almost everything I like in it. Can't wait to read more.
7294011 Ask yourself. What do you think would've happened if Jeff shot the chief's daughter? Or better yet, what do you think would happen if Jeff shot Xavier and killed him over a gun, besides making the story harder to write with the main character dead?
But if you wanna skip that chapter, or stop reading because taking a gun from a triggerhappy guy to avoid causing a bigger issue triggers you, fine.
I'm enjoying this story keep up the good work
''and like Fluttershy's other animals, I noticed they too could make readable facial expressions, but barely. Por que não estou surpreso?''
Well, we have a problem https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TL32F5nkziE
And in previous pages, fluttershy was giving fish for humans to eat ... erh, I hope in your MLP universe there are intelligent fish and unintelligent fish.
Do not take me as boring, your story is incredible the way it is! this is just an observation =)
Funny, how adding a little extra detail turns terrible episode of the show into something actually enjoyable.