"Ah'm a might confused though, Twi. Ah kissed a filly, and, and Ah liked it," Applejack said hanging her head. Is this an intentional reference to the song "I kissed a girl and I liked it" by Pink?
I must compliment you on the quality of your writing and story telling. I'm not really a fan of same sex stories, but this if more romance than clop and I'm a big fan of romance. It does seem a bit unlikely that all of the Mane Six would turn out to be bi, or gay, as the story seems to be going but I don't really mind
Personally, I'd not at all mind seeing a stallion tossed into the equation as well, possibly in partnership with two of the girls. in the real world stallions, given a choice and a chance will always have a harem. Horses are not naturally monogamous. Long term relationships almost always feature a stallion and several mares. A polygamous relationship offers all sorts of interactions, both mundane and sexually.
Keep up the good work, having lots of fun so far with the story.
So... You gonna go into some kind of detail about where this bizarre moral imperative against homosexuality comes from?
Cuz there's no religion to speak of in the show, and you're not TALKING about one. Celestia obviously doesn't give a shite, considering her treatment of Twilight so...
Yeah, those viewpoints don't arise in a vacuum. Where's this coming from?
Princess Celestia obviously gets lonely up in her castle...
this story is amazing. even if it was nothing but clop, or none at all, i would still totally read it. im hooked!!! great job.
Princess Molestia makes an appearance perhaps?
714599 omg i LOVE LA Noire based memes.
Anyway this is a great fic in EVERY possible way
Well written, but for one part:
"MMM, *pant pant* Oh my goddess *gasp*..."
This would be better worded as:
"MMM, oh my Goddess," Rarity cried, panting and gasping...
Or something to that effect. It would be more appropriate for a published work.
729247 I face palmed reading your comment, I was trying to think how to better word that, but thanks.
719066 Wait a couple, I'm bringing them back
"Ah'm a might confused though, Twi. Ah kissed a filly, and, and Ah liked it," Applejack said hanging her head.
Is this an intentional reference to the song "I kissed a girl and I liked it" by Pink?
No, I have felling for some pony else..." Fluttershy said.
Felling, huh? Well I guess that is logical, since Fluttershy wants to be a tree.
Poor AJ, such a close minded Pony
Great bit of writing as always
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>>Zorobak um... don't you mean Perry?
I must compliment you on the quality of your writing and story telling. I'm not really a fan of same sex stories, but this if more romance than clop and I'm a big fan of romance. It does seem a bit unlikely that all of the Mane Six would turn out to be bi, or gay, as the story seems to be going but I don't really mind
Personally, I'd not at all mind seeing a stallion tossed into the equation as well, possibly in partnership with two of the girls. in the real world stallions, given a choice and a chance will always have a harem. Horses are not naturally monogamous. Long term relationships almost always feature a stallion and several mares. A polygamous relationship offers all sorts of interactions, both mundane and sexually.
Keep up the good work, having lots of fun so far with the story.
So... You gonna go into some kind of detail about where this bizarre moral imperative against homosexuality comes from?
Cuz there's no religion to speak of in the show, and you're not TALKING about one. Celestia obviously doesn't give a shite, considering her treatment of Twilight so...
Yeah, those viewpoints don't arise in a vacuum. Where's this coming from?
The safeword is starlight, huh? That might get awkward, a few years down the line.