Dat cliffahnger! . Who is Fluttershy's crush? Who is masquerading as the Mysterious Mare do Well? When is Twilight going to go off the deep end and turn her parents into cacti?
On a side note, there was one error I noticed in the story: when Rarity first addresses the Duke she refers to him as "Your Highness". Rarity would have the courtly knowledge to know that he should be addressed as "Your Grace". Not a big deal, and most people won't even notice, but it's one thing that has always annoyed me. Feel free to ignore it if you don't feel like changing it.
Doomed. They're all doomed. Rarity's high, Pinkie is likely to go off at any moment (most likely she'll do something at the party), and Rainbow knows who Fluttershy has a crush on. I'm beginning to think the Comedy tag may apply to this fic.
751572 I actually did not know that, and google had for once proven unhelpful, so thank you very much.
752292 Thanks, and yes, Vinyl was random, but I just wanted to establish her character, because she has no pint in cannon history to draw from, so I made some.
"They went to see Rainbow Dash, I told them I had this," Rarity gasped as she returned to normal for the polite introduction. "As for who I am, I am Rarity, fashion icon and," She said stepping next to Twilight and intertwining their tails, "Twilight's marefriend."
is it bad that I did a fist pump to the air after reading this line?
Granny worships Jupiter? She's a Romanesque Pagan? She should be all about the gay.
Edit: Just noticed the "Princess' Word." Y'know, the problem with having a living, breathing deity that you can talk to is that it's terribly difficult to get miscommunications like that. Because your living, breathing, chatty deity can just tell you to fuck right off about your opinion.
Dat cliffahnger! . Who is Fluttershy's crush? Who is masquerading as the Mysterious Mare do Well? When is Twilight going to go off the deep end and turn her parents into cacti?
On a side note, there was one error I noticed in the story: when Rarity first addresses the Duke she refers to him as "Your Highness". Rarity would have the courtly knowledge to know that he should be addressed as "Your Grace". Not a big deal, and most people won't even notice, but it's one thing that has always annoyed me. Feel free to ignore it if you don't feel like changing it.
Doomed. They're all doomed. Rarity's high, Pinkie is likely to go off at any moment (most likely she'll do something at the party), and Rainbow knows who Fluttershy has a crush on. I'm beginning to think the Comedy tag may apply to this fic.
751572 I actually did not know that, and google had for once proven unhelpful, so thank you very much.
752292 Thanks, and yes, Vinyl was random, but I just wanted to establish her character, because she has no pint in cannon history to draw from, so I made some.
A nice little set of chapters, one that I will be paying attention to in the future.
Faved and liked!
753707 Yeah... that actually sounds kind of good, chocolate chips in a strawberry shortcake... Damn you Clonetrooperkev, you made me hungry!
This chapter was gold!
One slightly over used word ,MOAR!
Flutterdash, GO!
"They went to see Rainbow Dash, I told them I had this," Rarity gasped as she returned to normal for the polite introduction. "As for who I am, I am Rarity, fashion icon and," She said stepping next to Twilight and intertwining their tails, "Twilight's marefriend."
is it bad that I did a fist pump to the air after reading this line?
By Jove?
Granny worships Jupiter? She's a Romanesque Pagan? She should be all about the gay.
Edit: Just noticed the "Princess' Word." Y'know, the problem with having a living, breathing deity that you can talk to is that it's terribly difficult to get miscommunications like that. Because your living, breathing, chatty deity can just tell you to fuck right off about your opinion.
Hark, is that the shattering of the universe I hear?