This ends on a surprisingly sad/serious note.. but then again, this entire bloody fic has been full of twists. It's a rare clopfic that not only includes a decent plot, but also one with the originality present here. I love Vinyl's nickname in this too, Veve is cute and I could totally see Octy using that. I wonder what the repercussions for the reveal would be. Does Granny lead a lynch mob to the library? All in all, you did a remarkably good job breaking out of both Twi's and Pinkie's paradigms while still staying true to their character. You even did it in a believable manner. But wait, is it over? Its still marked as incomplete. Soooooo moar?
1108866 yes my friend, there is 'Moar' to come. and you might be right about granny leading a lynch mob to the library, or you might not... this site really needs a applejack 'I lied' emoticon, just for this. also, thanks for the props.
please tell me fluttershy and pinkie pie get help in the future to both have there problems dealt with and there life made better. also i see applejack and amy both being the type that can love each other without seeing each other much. but pinkie and flutter need somepony to be with......maybe each other?? (i do like pinkieshy) so i think it could work out. or maybe the princesses decide they could so better then a one-night stand.....any way story has been great!
"Finally!" Luna cried, tearing off the last bit of fabric between her and her prize. Pinkie arched her back for the regal mare as the Lunar goddess dived down, barely able to contain herself. She wasted no time in formalities, and just licked the pink mare's dripping mound from tip to clit, making the enthralled mare whinny.
Can I just have 1 chapter of a fic to read in class that isn't clop or 15K+ words? IS THAT TOO MUCH TO ASK!
Poor Pinke Pie...
ohhh noooo thats so low noo they didnt ... that ending
Sooo..fluttershy's a bitch,Pinkie just got used,Vinyl got humiliated.,and my bucking Celestia I love this story
Wow, so much to handle.....Loved it.
1065388 yes it is mi amigo. You win a pony
This ends on a surprisingly sad/serious note.. but then again, this entire bloody fic has been full of twists. It's a rare clopfic that not only includes a decent plot, but also one with the originality present here. I love Vinyl's nickname in this too, Veve is cute and I could totally see Octy using that.
I wonder what the repercussions for the reveal would be. Does Granny lead a lynch mob to the library?
All in all, you did a remarkably good job breaking out of both Twi's and Pinkie's paradigms while still staying true to their character. You even did it in a believable manner.
But wait, is it over? Its still marked as incomplete. Soooooo moar?
1108866 yes my friend, there is 'Moar' to come. and you might be right about granny leading a lynch mob to the library, or you might not... this site really needs a applejack 'I lied' emoticon, just for this. also, thanks for the props.
i just read it for the plot
but i ended up quite surprised with the depth put into it
have some moustachios on the house
EDIT: just got the doctor who references feel like a derp
please tell me fluttershy and pinkie pie get help in the future to both have there problems dealt with and there life made better. also i see applejack and amy both being the type that can love each other without seeing each other much. but pinkie and flutter need somepony to be with......maybe each other?? (i do like pinkieshy) so i think it could work out. or maybe the princesses decide they could so better then a one-night stand.....any way story has been great!
"I want to thank my Dad, Cosm...
...center stage.
Always skip speechs
"Finally!" Luna cried, tearing off the last bit of fabric between her and her prize. Pinkie arched her back for the regal mare as the Lunar goddess dived down, barely able to contain herself. She wasted no time in formalities, and just licked the pink mare's dripping mound from tip to clit, making the enthralled mare whinny.
Can I just have 1 chapter of a fic to read in class that isn't clop or 15K+ words? IS THAT TOO MUCH TO ASK!
Damn you and your doctor who references! (It's my favorite show)