Niamh-pony, is that you?

I love this story.
I read it when it was originally posted on Dropbox and I'm glad to see it make its way here.

It's cute and sexy while having a fun story.
Plus it has Applejack dealing with her ever expanding boobs.
What's not to like?

A very good job!

59,538 words.

...Wouldn't it have been slightly easier to make that into a few separate chapters? Both for you and the readers?

Still, think I'm going to give this a chance since the premise sounds fun, but just thought I'd mention I did a double take on the above. Single largest one-shot I've seen so far.

Great piece of art, only problem is you should consider splitting them into smaller chapters.

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Ah'm sorry, first time postin' this here. Should I have? Ah mean, ah can, ah just didn't think to. Can ah get away with just cuttin' it in half? Or should ah divide it up even more?

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Still reading so don't have any good suggestions on cuts, but yeah, that's how its usually done around here.

Even so, since the story is finished and stand-alone I personally think its fine. Just odd and rare enough to comment on, so no need to worry about it.

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Not uncommon for longer one-shots (or some huge serial stories) to be in the size category of yours.

Ho damn, 59k words all at once? Wow. Easily the longest fic I've seen thus far centered around this kind of thing, and all in one go, to boot. Breaking it up a bit would've been nice, but I really can't complain, because this was well-written. Loving the story that went along with it, too.

Fun, funny, just enough drama and conflict through the last half to keep it interesting, and plenty of unf to go with it along the way. All in all, despite the length, it's one that I've enjoyed sitting through. Nicely done.

I rate this fic nine barrels of "naturally-produced" cider out of ten.

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You could probably divide it into four or five chapters.
1. The setup
2. Berry Punch
3. The intro of the main antagonist and setup of the main conflict
4. The main conflict and resolution
5. The epilogue.

But I don't know what the rules are on dividing a story after you've posted it and I had no problems reading it in its longer form.
I'd check with the admins and see what the rules are on splitting it up.

6433747 find natural stopping points and break the story up there. 60k words is a hell of a lot of words, and i can promise you most folks prolly don't have that kinda stamina.

hot dang those tags tho

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Alright, if it'll make things any easier. Just gonna haveta give me a bit!

Edit: Wound up breakin' it into 11 pieces. Now I'm hopin' /that's/ not too many.

Awesome! Still, I read it when it was all one chapter, so...
Meh. Still well written, and I'd read it again!

'Just remember, AJ. This is gonna see th' farm well past Cider Season.' is what she tried to tell herself. Instead it came out more of a 'Hrrmmgfffgmble..."

At length, she stumbled out of bed. With all the grace of a zombie set out to thaw, she made her way to the restroom, to relieve herself in more ways than one.

MY SIDES!!!

Well, this is, weird, an interestingly funny adult sort of way. This is how it opens I can't imagine what's to come later on.

If ah'd known that well had a sense o' humor she mused to herself. Ah woulda bucked it clean int' last Tuesday.

....why do I get the feeling that either Poison Joke or Discord were involved with that well at some point?

'If ah'd known that well had a sense o' humor' she mused to herself. 'Ah woulda bucked it clean int' last Tuesday.'

Brings to mind...