As the ponies of Equestria discover a new land... a new frontier, the Earth Ponies decide to make it their own, breaking the chains of slavery to the Unicorns and Pegasi.
The Element's fame has reached all corners of the globe. Drawing the attention of even the lowest individual. With forces moving to harm, Celestia has a certain knight to protect the Elements.
It's a very nice story, I wrote a fanfic similar to this and it got thrashed pretty bad. one thing i suggest would be using Enter to break it up a bit more, so it's not an intimidating wall of text but I really Like it, and hope that you continue it
>> Skyguy66 Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately, the app I use to type force closes and erased any and all work so far if I double space. And as of now, I can only use my phone to write, due to a lack of computer to use.
668198 I guess I miswrote that. The creator functions fine. But if I try to save the image, phone crashes. And I don't have access to a computer. So I'm stuck between a microchip and a hard place.
668209 I don't think I could do that. Simply because I'm kinda OCD, and I'd need to do it myself to get it right. I'm just weird like that. But I'll have access to a computer this weekend, so if nothing else I'll put a blog post up with the pic. I like my orange moon.
679153 I'm hoping you mean approximate time, and thats roughly 10-11 oclock eastern time. Possibly later depending on if I get the overtime shift again -.-
688859 But maybe somepony might........ With ponies of similar interests....... Ha ha. Now who might I be talking about? You win some sort of thingamajig if you guess right.
I feel even drinker than when I wrote chapter .5. I was freaking out, cuz there were no cooments or notifications, so I thought you guys hated and were silence treatmenting me. I didn't actually publish the chapter. FFFFFFFFFUUUUUU no more drinking and writing though. This shit is just weird.
Story itself is good. Read below to find my reaction to all the shipping.
When you scroll down, you will see a ton of images. These images were chosen because they best describe the overwhelming amounts of shipping that just pops up outta nowhere.
702775 Dude, its a clopfic. Shipping is there in excessive amounts in 90% of them. It's random pop upedness is because i suck at explaining shit before i publish. I'll go back with deatailed stoies and intricate long conersations about their feelinfs. I was under the impression i ahould keep that to a minimum. And I swear this isnt meant to be sarcastic. I'm dead serious about epic backstorues. Just give it time. The fuck that is this shit is a beggining fic, that wl be more developed later.
703650 Cragged you out? No idea what that means. But you pp honestly thought it was good? *grabs bottle of Applejack Daniels and chugs it* Chapter six will be just asHICCUPgoreatod
712943 And I apologise if withdrawals set in. I need ideas. I need to weave Fluttershy in. But I can't find a way............ But on a side note, Applejack beats eggs for pie like she beats Applebloom.
I like this please continue
It's a very nice story, I wrote a fanfic similar to this and it got thrashed pretty bad. one thing i suggest would be using Enter to break it up a bit more, so it's not an intimidating wall of text but I really Like it, and hope that you continue it
>> Skyguy66 Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately, the app I use to type force closes and erased any and all work so far if I double space. And as of now, I can only use my phone to write, due to a lack of computer to use.
The songs, are in order,
Halelujah, Rufus Wrainsright
Goodnight my Angel, Billy Joel
plz make more!!! soo lovely plz keep maing them?
663295 of course. I plan on at least 40 chapters. Probably more.
I like your profile pic. I also like this. magnificent work. Is Midnight Flame your OC?
666327 indeed he is. Basically exactly who I'd be if I were a pony.
666506 same as me, but I'm FireFlash, who is my profile pic :3
666545 Nice. Midnight would be my pic, but the pony creator doesn't work on my phone And the fact that I draw like a drunk Andy Warhol.
666553
You could always use a computer and generate the code
668198 I guess I miswrote that. The creator functions fine. But if I try to save the image, phone crashes. And I don't have access to a computer. So I'm stuck between a microchip and a hard place.
668207
Well i could do it for you if you want just give me your email and code
(dont worry im not an asshole who attaches viruses)
668209 I don't think I could do that. Simply because I'm kinda OCD, and I'd need to do it myself to get it right. I'm just weird like that. But I'll have access to a computer this weekend, so if nothing else I'll put a blog post up with the pic. I like my orange moon.
668363
Yea i agree it looks good
666553
Zeh moon, it has, zee magicks
why this is 22/11, idk. it should be at LEAST 30/5, if not better. you rule, sir!
677001 Thank you. But alas, I must go, chapter 4 needs me!
excessive emotes!!!!!
You got a proxy when the next chapter is coming?
679153 I'm hoping you mean approximate time, and thats roughly 10-11 oclock eastern time. Possibly later depending on if I get the overtime shift again -.-
Good chapter!
(could this lead to a potential threesome? Maybe?)
Was a bit sad though when twilight ran off
NO THREESOMES! THIS THING GOT CLOPPY ENOUGH WITH 69.
685393 Indeed. Threesome is a no no. This is a romantic clopfic. And I really doubt Twilight will ever agree.
685393 GOD IT WAS JUST A BUCKING JOKE, any way i know she would never agree
688859 But maybe somepony might........ With ponies of similar interests....... Ha ha. Now who might I be talking about? You win some sort of thingamajig if you guess right.
I feel even drinker than when I wrote chapter .5. I was freaking out, cuz there were no cooments or notifications, so I thought you guys hated and were silence treatmenting me. I didn't actually publish the chapter. FFFFFFFFFUUUUUU no more drinking and writing though. This shit is just weird.
Nice chapter bloke.
699253 Thank you. Not bad for being wasted while I wrote it.
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WOOT one of the five
Story itself is good. Read below to find my reaction to all the shipping.
When you scroll down, you will see a ton of images. These images were chosen because they best describe the overwhelming amounts of shipping that just pops up outta nowhere.
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702775 Dude, its a clopfic. Shipping is there in excessive amounts in 90% of them. It's random pop upedness is because i suck at explaining shit before i publish. I'll go back with deatailed stoies and intricate long conersations about their feelinfs. I was under the impression i ahould keep that to a minimum. And I swear this isnt meant to be sarcastic. I'm dead serious about epic backstorues. Just give it time. The fuck that is this shit is a beggining fic, that wl be more developed later.
700683 Was that WTF face for the chapter, the note at end, or the comment explaining my drunkeness?
God what a good chapter (you cragged me out of being emo again )
703650 Cragged you out? No idea what that means. But you pp honestly thought it was good? *grabs bottle of Applejack Daniels and chugs it* Chapter six will be just asHICCUPgoreatod
703691
Meant to say dragged
Pass some of that Applejack Daniels
703697 *passes bottle* Here ya go oldHICCUPpal! Jusht make shure you shave shome for me.
703709
HICCUP im dronk BURP HICCUP*Passes out, starts snoring* I luv ya manzzzzzzzzzz
703720 Hmmmmm. One passed out drunken pony+Shattered universe with millions of possible realities=idea for twisted ass one shot.
*the next morning* urgh wtf happened?
703338 it was a comment on that so few was Reading this
704627 Not a lot. Nightmare moon came back, raped you with her horn, i laughed. The usual.
707327
Ugh i dumped that bitch -_- imma go 'talk' with her now
I feel like I'm drunk on this story. and I'm having a hangover!
712943 And I apologise if withdrawals set in. I need ideas. I need to weave Fluttershy in. But I can't find a way............ But on a side note, Applejack beats eggs for pie like she beats Applebloom.
2:1 thumbs up vs thumbs down ratio! That's a win!
wedding? (may be a good idea for another chapter
735774 Maaaaaaybe.