It's a very nice story, I wrote a fanfic similar to this and it got thrashed pretty bad. one thing i suggest would be using Enter to break it up a bit more, so it's not an intimidating wall of text but I really Like it, and hope that you continue it
>> Skyguy66 Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately, the app I use to type force closes and erased any and all work so far if I double space. And as of now, I can only use my phone to write, due to a lack of computer to use.
I like this please continue
It's a very nice story, I wrote a fanfic similar to this and it got thrashed pretty bad. one thing i suggest would be using Enter to break it up a bit more, so it's not an intimidating wall of text but I really Like it, and hope that you continue it
>> Skyguy66 Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately, the app I use to type force closes and erased any and all work so far if I double space. And as of now, I can only use my phone to write, due to a lack of computer to use.