Why. Why is this happening to me? I didn’t want this. I don't want this, do I?
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Ask and you shall receive.
'I was just helping out a friend.
So why am here In Equestria.'
I do believe my friend there is a missing eye in that there introduction. I lack the ability to tell one why am is anywhere at all.
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That's embarrassing.
A valid point.
I don't think that quite scans.
Ha! He said it!
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Nah, it happens. Trust me, I write for a living, I'm not perfect, you're not perfect, so why not be unperfect together?
Oh season 1,what fun you were...
That anger though, signs of trouble!
Har, eh? Not Harvey or Mony? Could be worse names we suppose. 😇
What's amazing and totally expected is that the girls totally missed his point, but it's fine because he can fix their views, right? 🙃maybe, we'll see...
Hah! This hurt my thighs imagining this!
Mice to hear from you again and welcome to the club, on the autism spectrum stuff, I know what you are going thought. It was nice to see you addressing real life racism and prejudice show the parallels your protagonist and the show showing the problem on both spectrum, as well as pointing out that it is all used a distraction form the rich to pit different groups and social classes against each other. It was nice that you didn't just put the RGRE only arbitrarily and actually explore the subject of unconscious biases on gender roles, and showing the slightly more pervasive side of what a lot of woman go through, and not just the stereotypical casual stuff . For Twilight, I found that her role in the episode was the message that you are not immune to propaganda or prejudice, no matter your level of education it can still seep in; by the way I loved that the dude actually tried to read the book showing how wacky the material in it wasn't much better and added an extra layer of confusion to him, and that his easy armchair solution he tried to used backfired on him, which help to show brony show knowledge/speculation isn't going to be that much help for him. I also like that the dude realized that his snark didn't help in his friendship with the others and that he might have to learn to curve his tongue more in the future. I also think it might be a good idea that your skim over episodes if they aren't really contributing to the actual story plot and just a simple overview that could ties in to the theme of the chapter in some way could help out better in the long run. Great chapter dude keep it up.
Nice
Lol
Tis was nice to see another chapter. As for your AN one hope ya figure all that out an get it sorted so good luck with that an two I’d say make the story as ya want sure follow the plot line of the episodes but make it yours not just a copy with added variables. Don’t get me wrong I’m loving it an it’s good but there is a reason why episodes aren’t released so quickly an close together, the writers need brakes an they got to animate it among other things so don’t feel like you have to follow it episode for episode do what you want an make it your story!
Anyways tangent over so keep it on writing it how YOU want to and again I wish ya luck in getting all that personal stuff sorted! Keep on writing and don’t feel bad or like you have an obligation to give us chapters episode for episode, I wish ya an early marry Christmas and hope you find the time to enjoy writing as ya did at the start of this, for it is a good story indeed.
rainbow sexist confirmed? or was it just her trying to one up... either way not cool, man
A bit ironic, wouldn't you say?
I believe what you were going for was: "You really should work on your language."
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Putting that small thing aside, it's great to see more work from you again! I chuckled at several moments in this chapter alone, and it is good to see the character growth from these actions with our resident human.
And I do agree, random unexplained tumbleweeds must be looked into!
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Thanks for that. That word gets me every time.
I wonder when the transformation will be complete.
Then again perhaps the transformation does not happen in the first place.
Wait, why didn't anything happen to him, wasn't he in the flowers too? Or did he just get near them but not touch them?
And as for sending a letter to Celestia he should have done that ages ago, asking or outright demanding she expedite turning him back to fully human.
You can get over ADD
how is the next chapter going? still ways off or closing in on something readable?
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Kinda in the middle. I've been busy with my mental assessment and work. The chapter is planned out and I have started writing it.