Why. Why is this happening to me? I didn’t want this. I don't want this, do I?
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Yay! His slow pony transformation progresses! I can't wait to see which pony type he becomes.
Well this was an interesting chapter
I was honestly surprised that the meet up with Celestia was so soon, but you managed to do made the reunion between without making it feel forces. 50 years elapses time after they meet each other in the right Equestia was actually a very good margin of error for the guy, so he can count his lucky star that it went so well for him. I do like that his assumptions of what he expects to happen reveal themselves to be wrong on his part, that he can't rely on his shop knowledge to be of any real help for him.
I think staying in the Everfree Forest and doing activates in Ponyville will be a lot more damaging for the timeline then if he had went to Canterlot With Celestia. Still, I think it might be for the best that he stay in the Everyfree while Celestia is tending with her reunion with Luna for a while, it would be a very emotional period for the both of them and dividing Celestia's attention between his needs and Luna won't help matters. And that's not even to mention what a magically saturated area like Canterlot could do to accelerate his transformation too. I wonder what was that sphere all about what is it's origin and what was it still the castle after it had been abandon or the rest of all the stuff for that matter?
I wonder if Celestia might be able to place wards that could prevent magic form seeping in a confine area for him?
I don't think he will be ANY completion for AJ, as wild apples usually are very sour and wouldn't be able to gather enough to to make it forth selling them even at a massive discount. And it would take years of careful tending to grow saps into apple bearing orchards.
Despite looking like she is taking a lot of dangerous risk for changing the the time line to be more prepared for the crisis that Equestria might face in the show's run time, which is all based off an adaptation of the 22 minute format show for children, I think Celestia might have went about way more smarter with this then the guy giving her credit for and gleamed way more from it then anyone could possibly could imagined. I think she probably understood that the show limited everything in Twilight's and the show cast's perspective and that everything she saw was way too condensed to so what actually happened, or the time spans for that matter, and look a of liberties in how she could intemperate the situation, and none of what she saw should be taken as the gospel truth. I think she might have come to the right conclusion that she can't micro manage everything herself in what happens in the show and only bothers with the broad strokes and take initiative in the situation anyway as well as letting Twilight
Still, I wonder What she did with Sunset Shimmer in this story? Did she still took her in as her student, did she try to fix the mistakes that her show self did in trying to become a perfect model student or did she went along with the EQG movies and just prepare Sunset the best way she could in facing the challenge of going to that world?
I wonder what she might have foreseen with the Changeling Invasion, would she let things turn out as they did in the show, have defeated by Chrysalis or could she has scene something else also happening in the mean while that she could spare or inform the Royal Guard to do anything about it?
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Thanks for the advice. I added a whole new scene that ended up adding a little more the background story amongst other things.
I hope Celestia actually does try to fix whatever curse the EoH put on him and send him home. You can't really expect someone to abandon everything they've ever known on a whim, even for a good friend. And Celestia not helping him would mean that she has betrayed their friendship.
If that much time has moved between her and him entering the portal, he has no chance of going home.
Hrm, running some napkin calculations, they have his whole lifetime to get back, since the portal... Wait, then why did Celestia's absence go unnoticed? A month is a lot longer than a dozen seconds.... Something fishy is swimming around....