Dyslexic Engineer & writer of poetry / short stories
This is kind of the fourth in the Pony Poets series, except that I never plan that far ahead and this is a normal short story with no poem.
The little filly nicknamed 'Fish' is very excited that an air show has come to her village. By the end everypony has had a turn around the sky!
I wonder if she may be heading for a more exciting life than farming?
The title art is by Fia94
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=SkIYreKuD0w
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Hey! I just read them, what a lovely story :D
Really really good!
xx
Thankyou, and thanks again for the art. It makes it look like a proper story now!
Neighrator Pony liked the Pony Poets series, so I was very pleased to have 'Fish in the Clouds' in need of a VA (Already having that sweet title art)
It has a lovely deep tone to it and I urge you to go and have a peep, even if audio books arn't quite your 'thing'.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=SkIYreKuD0w
"playing at pegasi" is the best thing :D
Yeah, good giving them some more characterization. That said, these stories could really stand to be edited more than they are. You might want to enlist someone to help with that.
Cut Glass puts a fair amount of time into helping me rationalise my gibberish, which I point out because I wouldn't want anypony thinking I was this good :o)
It astounds me how much editing can be done. We put down hours on 'My Little A.I." and I could still see errors! I can see the difference in my skill over the six months of writing though. I have had to up my game even more for 'Love is Love' and it will be interesting to see what folk make of it. (Still editing it at time of writing)
I wonder about running through uploaded work, but then it might not follow the audio version on YouTube?
Thank you for commenting :o)
Those two pegasi are awesome! I loved how you described the epic flights. I guess all pegasi but Fluttershy are true daredevils...
Hi Elkia, This one flowed so well. The three pony poets were really good fun to write by sneaking a poem into fimfiction :) But this was a step change into a new era for me. I love the pegasus charectors, they write themselves when in their natural environment :D And Fish is a delight to write, both in this and the next one. She has a refreshing outlook on Adventure ^-^