Dyslexic Engineer & writer of poetry / short stories
Two pony friends have worked together for years in an advertising agency. So it comes as quite a shock when they suddenly fall for each other! Before they really get to grips with their new situation they are off on a business trip to the countryside.
Art by Fia94
Audio Book; https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=bK6QIdzm32E
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I dumped the comments. A bro posted a spoiler.
Right then, own up? Who read this story and made it roll over from 69 to 70?
You have ruined the sanctity of comedy naughtiness.
(I think it stayed on 69 for 3 weeks?)
Brian Random has kindly narrated this story on his channel :)
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=bK6QIdzm32E
Yay :o) a " Vaguely Recommended " by PP. I'm well happy with that. It's the story I felt worked the least during writing? I was well out of my safe-zone. (I do have a few laughs at Brian's reading though. Some of the jokes are fun).
Shame PP can't review "Victoria Kitty", as it is another 'experimental'. It was written first-person from a child's perspective and was inspired by the dark fanfic Bubbles with a young Derpy. Victoria is older and off to school in an industrial landscape of dirt and danger, but is nieve to the risks. It's anthro furry not pony.
Anyhoo, I digress :o)
Thanks for the review PP :D
Huh.. kinda cool
Ah, the mystery is revealed. I actually noticed that you were preventing 'he said' and 'she said.' Halfway through the story I was seriously guessing at the two ponies' gender. Good one!
Thankyou ^-^ it was hard to write and even harder to edit. It was an experiment in non-gender and it only really works in text form. I love the narration, but it kind of gives the game away :o) That pub scene though. I might not of told my family that this one exists......