An all-powerful Underworldian dragon is laying waste to Equestria. Is laying waste to one mare in particular, hated by him above all others. Her guardian, trapped in the human dimension, is powerless to help.
What will come of this situation?
This is a part of Project Improv: a series of improvised pieces of writing sprouting from writing prompts given me via PM by my followers. It is PIECE #2 in the series. Pieces of writing in Project Improv are in no way, shape, or form interconnected with each other.
See the previous piece HERE.
This prompt was provided by myself, PL4SM0D1UM, but inspired by the Portals series by my good friend The Derpy Doctor. This piece is written as an alternate return of Blizzard Blast and Sunset Shimmer to Equestria during Bellus' conquest, the one I feel represents my character a little bit better. Here's the book it ties in with.
Okay, good imagery! This one's very good. How long ago did you post this? I didn't get a notification.
But seriously, I think it was clever how you introduced each detail as far as describing the scene goes. That was a nice touch.
6182416 OK, thx! How were the emotions? Regulars in my writing haven't been quiet lately about my biggest weakness in writing: communicating the emotions of my characters. My characters are very feely folks, and I seem to be having trouble inscribing their emotions to a depth that my audience will feel my character's emotions. On a 1 to 10 scale how'd I do here?
And to answer your question, just a day or two.
6182613 The imagery helps describe the area, but not exactly in a lengthy description. The way that you right it, is great for the types of stories that you write, however if you were going for a super emotional, inspired, go and show the world why you are the total boss of everything and everyone that is good and awesome, then you'd probably want to do it through character attribute description rather than their surroundings. In doing that, you punch life in the face and ya say: "Submit!" and life shall be your house monkey.
No, I'm not on drugs. Why do you ask?
6182631 Anyway, what do you think about this happening in the Portals series? That was also an objective. Granted the difference in our writing styles, is it believable this could happen in Portals 5?
6210751 It was a bit reverted from most things that I'd right. But I don't write everything perfectly and it's the difference in writing styles that makes it all the better.
6216343 Yes. As is customary. What I meant was, can you see these events taking place in Portals? Maybe not in the same way I wrote it, but what actually happened?
6217938 no, but my perspective is assuming that things happen after the fifth book, yours isn't. So it doesn't matter that it ends differently the entire series