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I know this is being a grammar nazi, but wouldn’t it be “Naofumi couldn’t care less”? Because if someone from the wave world visited him at this point in time and said he could go back to his old world if he helped them, I’m pretty sure he’d say yes in a heartbeat.
Edit: This comment is before I’ve read the story, so I’m just guessing when it specifically takes place.
Naofumi started out good. THEN THOSE BASTARDS WHO CALL THEMSELVES HEROES CAUSED HIM TO END UP WITH A INDUSTRIAL SIZED DUMP TRUCK OF MANURE!!!!!!!!!! GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
Just read it, and you definitely nailed how the three canon fodder act. And I hope Naofumi doesn’t get screwed over like in the previous world.
The king probably would’ve paided them even if they didn’t show up at all, but told him they did.
Finally, you got the princess’ name wrong, it’s Bitch (or Slut if she’s adventuring). Other then that minor thing, 10/10. You’ve got my like.
Definately going to shove this into my 'read it later shelf and wait for it to get a few chapters along.
Kinda disheartening to see the forest of 'on hiatus' stories on yours though.
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Oh that’s only because I was doing Basic Training for the Army, got to fix that. Don’t worry, I’m gonna start uploading more chapters starting this weekend. I’m gonna make a post in the morning about what stories are getting updated in what order, so fret not friend.
... I love this already
But Equestria doesn't have a slave trade for him to support.
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That perks me up a bit. Grats on the army thing. Done some time myself in that regard, so I know what it's like. As of now, I'm no longer military, but I do work on bases. Got my RV parked on Camp Robinson right now.
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Slut. Whore.
Depends on the translation. ^_^
Or rather, translation plus mouth movements taken into account.
I am happy to call her either.
The story playing after the full storyline of the Manga would be better.
That one hell of a character than.
Were would your story start?
tactics
Early on in this chapter, you stayed that all four of the Cardinal Heroes are from different time periods in Japan, however, in the first episode of The Shield hero, they compare historical figures and events and find out that they are different. That means that they are from different alternate realities or versions of Japan. Maybe it's different in the light novel or manga but that's how it is in the anime.
{Rin: Hey, remember that time a crazy pope tried to kill us all, and it was only because of Naofumi getting our heads out of our respective asses that we were able to work together and survive? Can't we do the same against Glass since we're not unconscious this time around?
Itsuki: Yeah, but this story borrows aspects from the anime, so we don't have any character development.
Motoyasu: Guess we'll just let him die then, lol.}
Oh, well that's nice, looks like she had a change of heart after all, lol.
There's like a huge gap between "The" and "Cursed" for some reason. Also, didn't the Wrath Series of Shields first pop up when he realized after Malty made him lose against Motoyasu in that stand-off, and it was only until the zombie dragon that he was first able to use it?
Blasphemy, it's a recurring gag that Naofumi can't comprehend that Raphtalia feels romantic love for him, especially this soon in the story.
That one's officially known as the Voice Gengar shield.
Incanted. He only said it once.
Ah, shaddup, princess Bitch.
I almost forgot that she was re-named.