If one were to visit Melromarc at the right time, they would be subject to a great many things; the beautiful landscape, the wonderful and flavorful food, and in this particular instance; the king of the land being thrown of the castle and into a nearby lake.

If one were to visit Melromarc at the right time, they would be subject to a great many things; the beautiful landscape, the wonderful and flavorful food, and in this particular instance; the king of the land being thrown out of the castle and into a nearby lake.

''NAOFUMI DID WHAT?!!!!''

Even when he’s in another world he’s still being blamed for shit in Melromarc.

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IRC, it was the same in the OG, where they were from differing versions of Japan

Naofumi never gets a break, does he.

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He will, in time.

*sees the title of the story*

.......

Either way, Noafumi still picked at her and laughed every opportunity he could. He thought about demi-human and what he and the rest of his party had been through before coming to Equestria; dealing with the corrupt nobles of Melrormarc, the monsters from The Waves Of Calamity, the 3 useless heroes, and so much more.

Misspelled Melromarc.

''Huh, this bed actually isn't too bad,'' Naofumi commented, noting the dimensions being so different from that of a human that Starswirl had to gather 3 to 4 beds and stack them side by side and have them turned to face lengthwise to the wall so he and Raphtaila could actually enjoy their slumber for the night. In all, the fabric was pretty comforting and there was not much to complain about. ''And of course, you're still sleeping.'' Raphtailia snored a tad as she was cradled up to Naofumi's left arm with a trail of drool on her face.

From here to the group introducing themselves to Celestia, you started misspelling Raphtalia.

''I only hope that you all can do your best in helping us with this. . .I would be lying to myself if I did not say that this is something beyond the range of my ability. The Chains Of Paradox are something I constructed with the aid of others to ensure the imprisonment of Nightmare Moon and to prevent her group from freeing her and bringing about the eternal night. But the power that it holds is not so easily protected.''

Italicized word is missing.

''If there is a high enough concentration of the opposing magic the was used to form the chains, it can shatter the chains and have catastrophic results if done,'' Celestia lowered her head trying to think about what exactly. ''And I hope I need not remind you of the grand scale of destruction that will follow if even one or all of those chains are broken.''

That.

''Jealously?'' Naofumi asked, curious of the internal motive of why this happened. ''And why did you imprison her in the moon, of all places?''

Jealousy.

''The Night Order Of Nightmare Moon, or more commonly known as the Night Order, is a collective of ponies that devote themselves to the study, ideology, and return of Nightmare Moon to this world. To their own twisted minds, they wish to make the world be born anew, with her as the sole ruler. The point that turns those to the cause will be blessed the promise of power, wealth, and a hoof in the destruction they have predicted to happen,'' Starswirl recollected what he was able to gather from sources and seeing first hoof some of the things that they were indeed committed to in the name of their dark ruler.

Two missing words.

Naofumi, outside of Tyrantlestia stories, Celestia is constantly more like the Queen of Melrormarc than King Trash.

''HUUUUAWH.~ Good morning, everyone,'' Melty said, looking over to the tray on the other side of the room. ''Is that grapefruit?''

No. It's a pumello.

The gaze in her eyes softened before she spoke. ''Hello, all. I am Princess Celestia, the humble ruler of the land of Equestria, and I would like to personally offer my thanks in your assistance in this matter in these times that we are uncertain.''

All hail best princess!
yay

''If there is a high enough concentration of the opposing magic the was used to form the chains, it can shatter the chains and have catastrophic results if done,'' Celestia lowered her head trying to think about what exactly. ''And I hope I need not remind you of the grand scale of destruction that will follow if even one or all of those chains are broken.''

I am getting a serious Pendragon vibe.

''NAOFUMI DID WHAT?!!!!''

Oh, no. No, you didn't!

The anime is one hell of a good show and story. I love it, and I'm sure this is only just the beginning of something greater.
Also, Dub is better, Chang My Mind.

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i agree