Love the work you put into this chapter. I love the interpersonal dilemma you give Dash. It's quite interesting how you string together the logic of her pass to the current present of her mental state. I appreciate how one form of reasoning out ways the others specially when given the opportunity. Ah the heart is quite a fickle thing. So far the story turning out great! I hope to see more soon and that you finish as strong as you started
Spectacular job. I loved this story the whole way though and I truly hope it is completed someday. The story and plot is fantastic, the characters are spot on and wonderfully done, and the chapter per day idea is amazingly applied. This has been one of my favourite fimfictions reads ever. The quality and care is very noticeable with the only problem for the entire story being occasional grammar errors. I supremely enjoyed myself from the first chapter to the (hopefully not) last. Awesome job :)!
Love the work you put into this chapter. I love the interpersonal dilemma you give Dash. It's quite interesting how you string together the logic of her pass to the current present of her mental state. I appreciate how one form of reasoning out ways the others specially when given the opportunity. Ah the heart is quite a fickle thing. So far the story turning out great! I hope to see more soon and that you finish as strong as you started
I'm so glad to see this story continue; the emotional turmoil is real.
Here's another one for the next chapter!
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It was worth the wait! Good RariDash fics are hard to find, and I've had my eye on this one for a good while. So, keep up the good work!
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Maybe I should start editing my authors notes....
Thank you so much for the kind words, it really means a lot! :D
So, I found out that mature content was disabled in my setting and I just read this
Pro: I saved two weeks of waiting for pt. 2
Con: I could've read this chapter two weeks ago
Spectacular job. I loved this story the whole way though and I truly hope it is completed someday. The story and plot is fantastic, the characters are spot on and wonderfully done, and the chapter per day idea is amazingly applied. This has been one of my favourite fimfictions reads ever. The quality and care is very noticeable with the only problem for the entire story being occasional grammar errors. I supremely enjoyed myself from the first chapter to the (hopefully not) last. Awesome job :)!
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Amazing story!
I still miss this.
I had my own place at 21 so 19 isnt that far off