After Rainbow Dash is forced out of her home, she has only one friend to turn to.
Great chapter, seeds of conflict, interesting foreshadowing. Rainbow doesnt hold a grudge against Toby, it fits her character, but it points to a sad situation. Sadder situation? Not sure. Still, good work
I love where this is going!~ Bi Rarity is Best Rarity!
Wow, wife material.
Also...
The journey to happiness starts with a step back.
This so deep I can see Adele rolling in it... Oh well.
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Thanks guys! >‿‿◕
I have so much feels for this fic TT^TT
6733567 Thank you![。♥‿♥。]
But... How DO you wash wool?! I need answers, Voyna.
I love you
6785002 I actually have no idea, lol.
I love you.
I love you too. ╰(◡‿◡✿╰)
Thanks for the comment!~
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When's the new chapter coming out? That cliffhanger's been poking my kidneys all week
6807465 Haha, soon, don't you worry.
My life is a bit of a mess at the moment so its taking its time. ●︿●
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taking its time.
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Stranger things have happened.
I'm sorry, but all I could think of was: strang things have happened here, no stranger would it be, if we met at midnight by the hanging tree
Allright, I had enough of this. Once may be a typo, but this is constant thing in this fic, and it murders me.
Rarity is into mare's...
Apostrophe means contraction or posessive. Plural does not require apostrophe.Unless Rarity is into something that belongs to a mare, it's "mares".
Sorry to be a grammar nazi here, but this just keeps bugging me.
Great chapter, seeds of conflict, interesting foreshadowing. Rainbow doesnt hold a grudge against Toby, it fits her character, but it points to a sad situation. Sadder situation? Not sure. Still, good work
I love where this is going!~
Bi Rarity is Best Rarity!
Also...
This so deep I can see Adele rolling in it... Oh well.
6701874
6714352
6715566
Thanks guys! >‿‿◕
I have so much feels for this fic TT^TT
6733567
Thank you!
[。♥‿♥。]
But... How DO you wash wool?! I need answers, Voyna.
I love you
6785002
I actually have no idea, lol.
I love you too. ╰(◡‿◡✿╰)
Thanks for the comment!~
Toby
rs780.pbsrc.com/albums/yy83/MusiknLove/n7a.gif~c200
When's the new chapter coming out? That cliffhanger's been poking my kidneys all week
6807465
Haha, soon, don't you worry.
My life is a bit of a mess at the moment so its taking its time. ●︿●
6811418
kidneysdisease.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/10/Kidney-pain-1.jpg
I'm sorry, but all I could think of was:
strang things have happened here, no stranger would it be, if we met at midnight by the hanging tree
Allright, I had enough of this. Once may be a typo, but this is constant thing in this fic, and it murders me.
Apostrophe means contraction or posessive. Plural does not require apostrophe.
Unless Rarity is into something that belongs to a mare, it's "mares".
Sorry to be a grammar nazi here, but this just keeps bugging me.