oh, this is new, i was like "THAT'S IT?!"... now gotta wait.. this is a good start though, i like it when writers actually setup a plot with a good pace that has room to be a little slow, i'd rather it be slow than to be rushed, because rushing plot is not a good thing (right M.A. Larson?!)
The mayor doesn't like you, Rainbow Dash. After everything you've done for this town she still thinks you're a menace to society, If Twilight did a rainboom the mayor wouldn't bat an eye, but not you Rainbow Dash. Besides do you really think your stunts are only reason she thinks you're intolerable?
That's because she has privilege. You don't. Nothing bad it's just the way things are
First!!!1!
So when are going to update?
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I will be starting on the next chapter today.
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oh, this is new, i was like "THAT'S IT?!"... now gotta wait.. this is a good start though, i like it when writers actually setup a plot with a good pace that has room to be a little slow, i'd rather it be slow than to be rushed, because rushing plot is not a good thing (right M.A. Larson?!)
but yes, i will follow this yay
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That's pretty much my thoughts exactly, I cant imagine this ship ever being fast paced. It'd be some real tricky writing to pull it off.
Thanks for the comment!
Curious, why is cloudsdale taking action on a house in ponyville? Isn't that the mayors jurisdiction?
That's because she has privilege. You don't. Nothing bad it's just the way things are