Glad to see this update again. I really liked this chapter, sad as the flashback parts were. I knew it was coming, but it still hit me hard, which only goes to show that you've got a real talent for bringing out characters' emotions. Loving the story, and keep up the great work!
Is she trying to make me lose my mind? She was totally showing off her butt!
Hahah, gotta love Dash sometimes. I'm very intrigued to find out if she's got the iron grip to resist Rarity or if she's gonna fail miserably and curse herself for it, JD style.
Shits gonna get hectic.
Hectic, how? I thought this chapter was gonna be hectic (and it was but not the kind I thought it would be)
Wow, This hit right in the feels man. The writing is great slow burn and that bit with Toby was intense! I do wish you post more often because I really cant wait to read your chapters. Please keep this ship sailing hahaha. This is too sweet it could give me diabetes
It updated!!! Man, those flashbacks broke me a little. Poor Toby and poor Dash for that matter... Anyway, nice chapter! You really are a good writer, keep up with this 'cause is great!!
Glad to see this update again. I really liked this chapter, sad as the flashback parts were. I knew it was coming, but it still hit me hard, which only goes to show that you've got a real talent for bringing out characters' emotions. Loving the story, and keep up the great work!
That was fantastic. And heartbreaking. Heartbre-tastic?
RIP Toby
She died for our ships.
Is she trying to make me lose my mind?
She was totally showing off her butt!
Hahah, gotta love Dash sometimes. I'm very intrigued to find out if she's got the iron grip to resist Rarity or if she's gonna fail miserably and curse herself for it, JD style.
Hectic, how? I thought this chapter was gonna be hectic (and it was but not the kind I thought it would be)
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I know I say that every chapter, but this time I mean it. :P
Wow, This hit right in the feels man. The writing is great slow burn and that bit with Toby was intense! I do wish you post more often because I really cant wait to read your chapters. Please keep this ship sailing hahaha. This is too sweet it could give me diabetes
It updated!!!
Man, those flashbacks broke me a little. Poor Toby and poor Dash for that matter...
Anyway, nice chapter! You really are a good writer, keep up with this 'cause is great!!
You.... You motherbucker..... WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS!?
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That's not a break
I've read multiple stories where guys get all the girls but not one where a girl gets all the girls yet.