One heck of a good story you got here. I really love raribow. i think their goal oriented ways of life gives them a lot more overlap than most people would expect. The way you edge the two together is very slick and natural. You really are taking the proper time to develop the relationship before setting it off. Altogether a well rounded, fun to read fic. Keep up the good work.
Actually, I agree with Mayor Mare. All that kissing is unnecessary! Keep it to light pecks in public, and keep the deeper stuff in the bedroom. Wait, she's scorning them for their sexuality? For shame!
6635313 6635341 I actually didnt mean to publish this chapter yet. I have taken it down for last minute revisions, some things here and there need fixing. I guess you two got in early.
Sweet chapter, I'll be waiting for more.
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Uh oh, do I sense an intruder on my ship? See you next chapter ^^
One heck of a good story you got here. I really love raribow. i think their goal oriented ways of life gives them a lot more overlap than most people would expect. The way you edge the two together is very slick and natural. You really are taking the proper time to develop the relationship before setting it off. Altogether a well rounded, fun to read fic. Keep up the good work.
Actually, I agree with Mayor Mare. All that kissing is unnecessary! Keep it to light pecks in public, and keep the deeper stuff in the bedroom. Wait, she's scorning them for their sexuality? For shame!
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Haha, Its supposed to be Queen. You can probably tell I wasn't trying too hard to come up with puns. :P
Huh, mayor mare as the conservative half-wit. Its a take I can't say I've seen much.
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I actually didnt mean to publish this chapter yet. I have taken it down for last minute revisions, some things here and there need fixing. I guess you two got in early.
It will be back up in an hour or so.