Tommy Oliver the original green Mighty Morphin' Power Ranger finds himself in another world filled with anthropomorphic ponies. When a new evil arrives in the peaceful land of Equestria he must take up the mantel of the green power ranger once again.
i would have Tommy do what he did in Dinothunder when he had to fight his past ranger forms to fix his dino crystal, after getting his butt handed to him by Atir's son and also how in the hell did they get to equss
“I don’t really know. It would have to do with mainly politics and technological advancement and stuff like that. I’ve never really thought of the reason why they were created. Luckily they’ve never been used.” I said.
Luckily they’ve never been used.
*smashes the author in the face with a history book* They were used, twice, by the United States in order to force the Japanese to surrender at the end of World War 2. The two nuclear bombs were dropped on the Japanese cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki.
“On average most ponies live to be up to 800 or even 1000.” Twilight said sadly.
... I don't even... Why...? Why is this a thing? To what purpose does this serve?
7068975 i can do u 1 better he have to fight all his past rangers forms so he can uptane their combine powers from mighty morphing to dinothunder which allows him 2 transfom 2 each 1 at will and said forms zords and weapons
On one hand, I'm off-the-walls excited that it finally updated and it's got a lot of great development since it's such a long chapter.
On the other hand though, there's quite a few grammar mistakes throughout the whole thing (No doubt being attributed to its length) as well as a few parts where terms are repeated like the department of redundancy department specializes in. Overall I didn't get taken too out of the story, but it certainly could use a bit of a second-run through on the editing.
OK, I got to say that I'm happy to see this story again. The fact that Tommy is actually friends with the real Sailor Moon and that you actually managed to convince Fiddlesticks to allow you to use Blade Dancer from the Bridge is awesome. I really liked how the mares reacted to the copper coins and how they all got an attraction to Oliver, particularly Barbara (I somehow picture her looking like Inuyuru's version from Ask Spines) who is trying to rationalize her new liking towards Oliver and Blade Dancer who is probably going to be flirtier and sexier than in the Bridge. The fight scenes and the past scenes, especially the funny racist Zordon line, were interesting. Still, I recommend that you get an editor as there is a lot of repetitive sentences and grammar mistakes that can distract readers from the story. Anyway, thanks for the chapter. Hope the next one comes soon to see how BD will act around Tommy.
7068935 KO AWESOME chapter, hope to see Tommy fighting and having some harem time with the mane 6, Dancer Blade, and the Princess. Also can't wait to see the other stories next chapters as well.
Great to see this story back! I would hold off on Tommy getting his powers back for now, as he would need a reason to be carrying around his old power coin and have noticed that it was being recharged. The girls getting captured and then the coin being discovered would feel better as you can send him on his rescue mission with a recharged coin and make it all heroic. You will still need to explain how Dragon Ceaser got there as well. Also love how you inferred that the Salior Scouts where also Power Rangers! I wonder if Gatchaman was an affiliated group as well?
7069022 That would be too Gary Stu. The idea just turns my stomach and if it did happen within the story, would ruin it. I would definitely stop reading if it did come to pass.
7069382 It's not the first time that a fanfiction author used extended lifespans. It's been done a few times before. A couple of those stories are considered some of the best on the site. I really don't see the issue with it. It's mostly a non-issue. And then there is the "series canon". I would really like to know what rule was passed within the fimfiction community that says that you need to stick to series canon. It's a crossover so it already deviates from series canon. Just my two cents.
7069408 Fanfiction doesn't need to adhere to such things, that is true, but all of these stories have the same 'anchor': canon.
If you make a divergence like this, then you have to adjust things so that it makes more sense. Fridge logic brings up a fair few issues like how one handles what would have to be KNOWN factors like the Crystal Empire, Discord, and Nightmare Moon, since those long life-spans can make it easy for these so-called 'legends' be proven fact that cannot be easily hidden.
Other factors are to be considered as well, but, well...
7069487 Don't worry, I've been working on that, it won't break the story (At least I hope not). Besides, I've talked to others who have done similar types of stories when it comes to lifespans. They have some good advice.
7069494 That's good. While I still ask 'why' you did so, so long as you can make it work, I won't complain. I've seen more ludicrous things in fanfics before that worked out just fine.
Just watch your step, stuff like this can easily crash and burn.
7069507 Thanks, I've given the 'life-span concept' a lot of thought way before I even put it in.
Originally I was going to use this in another story. (I still am.) But the point is I gave it a lot of thought. I get what you mean, I have seen a lot of good stories go down the drain because of someone putting something in due to a spur of the moment impulse. But like you said. Other times things work out.
I made sure that it can work with the story. I like to take at least a week to think about how I should write a chapter and if it will benefit me or hurt me in the long run of the story. I try to make sure not to write my self into a corner.
7069535 I know I can be harsh, but I love reading. I love fanfiction, I read it more than I do original fiction.
If there's one thing that drives me up the wall, however, is good stories being hampered by poor execution, horrible spelling and/or grammar, and/or poor decisions.
7069587 A thousand sheep can bleat praise 'till the sun sets forevermore, but the most important one of the bunch is the one black sheep that calls you out.
I hope it gets covered if Tommy lost his powers in this universe the same way he did in the show. Although Lord Zedd gets a mention we have no clue on how drained the dragon coin actually was at this point. Keep in mind that at least in the show canon I believe that he knew of Zordons death and the events surrounding it.
Hah okay i really like this but bad things first the aging...i think everyone has egged you enough on that, but here is my problem with it. You set it up like it was Going to be a BIG point in the story, but the NEXT SECOND you banished it. Even if we suspend that the main six and EVERYONE age like Elves or Vulcans, this could have been an interesting point to have for say...2-3 chapters. The girls trying to find a solution to a problem that to Tommy does not seem to be That big until he realizes that he will out age his students.
Another thing, i had a problem with was ..blade dancer Nothing wrong with her but she just came out of no where, and she looks to be a main player maybe. and again not that big a problem until she Immediately hits on Tommy. I don't mind sex or relationships in a story but come on. lets build up first before there is any looks of hunger (not the exact wording in text but implied :p)
Now to likes. I loved the crystal mishap in the beginning. Crystals react differently in Equestria than on earth, could be more to this later. The coin thing was actually funny if not random (especially the comment about paying the national debt {to on nose}) mmm I would think with Tommy being a teacher that he would know more about Albert Einstein and the Regret of the bomb, BUT it would be understandable if he kept the knowledge of the bomb AWAY from anyone.
Finally. This chapter was a good read, also i found interesting that you took a darker path with the rangers.(Personally i always thought of the Tenga/Tengu Warriors s the strongests). The thing that was really interesting, i wasnt expecting the whole 10/20 mares for 1 stallion here, also the whole long lifespans............. just wow, well atleast Tommy is a human.
Im not gonna lie. The only thing i dont find myself invested is in barbara aka fem.Spike.
In power rangers continuity, the dragon zord is one of the few zords to survive, maynly the ones based on animals and that are alive like the galacta beasts and wild zords
“W-Well, we were curious about you so the doctors took some sperm samples.” Celestia said nervously. Honestly, I know they were curious as to what I was and wanted to take samples but I still didn’t appreciate them practically violating me. “I-I am sorry, the doctors were just trying to be thorough.” Celestia stuttered. She was right. They were just trying to make sure that I was safe and healthy. “You’re right. Sorry about that.” I apologized.
Whoa, whoa, whoa! What? The doctors essentially sexually violated you in you sleep, and you let it go just like that? For gods sake, they didn't even tell you about it! WTF man!? I would be beyond pissed if I was in Tommy's place right now. Heck, I'm pissed right now from just reading about it.
It also showed that humans can last longer than stallions in bed.” Luna explained.
Uhhh.... This overused trope again. Why did this take such a sexual turn in the plot?(no pun intended)
“Don’t worry, due to your maturity you can still get a mare.” She said.
Tommy: "Oh my god! Will you just shut up about me getting laid already?! I heard you the first time, you broken record!" *stomps away angrily* "God!"
This was great! I've been waiting for this for so long! Tommy is going to have a good fight on his hands.
Something Important that I need to know. Should the Changling attack happen and Tommy gets his green ranger powers back in the next chapter or do you think that would be rushing the story too much. Tell me what you think in the comments below.
Hmmm Well if he is going to get his Green Ranger Powers in the next chapter then it should happen when he is fighting and is somewhat getting his ass kicked. That way he won't just go.
HENSHIN!!
And bam he has his powers back. That is the only thing I can think of. Other then delaying the Changling attack one more chapter after the next one.
7069376 ur kidding right? I have to disagree i mean come on tommy has been 3 other color of rangers along with being the green ranger i say tommy should get the other 3 ranger powers sure not at the same mind you he have to obtain through some cliche/not so cliche challenge but i am not going into an arguement to each their own
Love this story. I believe taking your time and letting Tommy get a bit more accustomed would favor the story more than him suddenly having his powers back and inevitably being revealed as the green power ranger to his friends. I honestly believe that his identity should be found out by them before he gets his powers back. But that might just be me.
Now, this something more of a personal dislike, but I don't dislike the story anymore for it. But I don't get why some stories support all ponies having ridiculously long lifespans. Celestia and Luna I can understand, but everyone else? Not something I see as possible.
But otherwise, I'm loving the story and awaiting more. Even though I've never watched the Power rangers at all I still find this awesome.
7070525 I'm not kidding. If you think about it, the Green Ranger powers were his most powerful, even after he went good. And I'm serious about the "only one form" issue. Giving Tommy all his forms would be like giving someone Goku's powers, Natsu Dragneel's powers and every other super heroes powers. IT'S TOO MUCH GARY STU!!! And that will ruin the story. No villain will be able to match up to someone who can change their power set at the drop of a pin. In order for the hero to have a "true victory", the hero must have some adversity. Tommy having all his Ranger forms would be a cheap victory and quite frankly, the personality and attitude of Tommy Oliver would not allow that.
well, took you long to update, but i'll let you slide for now. I wonder what you have plan for tommy to have a harem? I also know what chryistal thinking gonna once she have the mare6 and meet tommy in power ranger from?
7071482 think about it faust said that the threat or whatever their going to face knows tommy so i can think of afew threats tommy had faced personaly like rita repulsa and lord zed with their minions or it could be the other villains tommy help defeat i don't have the best memories but anyways and if memories serves me right tommy and his fellow rangers at the time lost a few battles and a couple of zords here there or lost the ability to summon them against either powerful enemies or enemies become even more powerful than they are or against enemies joining forces like in the case of rita repulsa and lord zed for instance
I say let him get into trouble during the Changeling attack and then get a vision similar to Dino Thunder's having to fight the green, white and red past versions of himself, only with just his green self, ending with regaining his ability to transform. What exactly happens during that is up to you, just throwing it out there.
And can't wait for Dragonzord/Dragon Caesar to rock out.
Curious though: Will he have access to the others? The rangers HAVE called upon the others' zord before. And I'd love to see a "Oh crap!" moment an enemy might upon seeing the "More Dakka" Ultrazord...
Yes, they did lose a few battles to Lord Zedd (Rita Repulsa was a dunce imo). Either way, that is the adversity I am talking about. Because of that, they came back even stronger than before. Giving Tommy all of his forms just feels cheap to me. All Tommy needs is his Green Ranger powers and Dragonzord and he will kick badguy ass all day long. Tell me, do you want Tommy to be God-like powerful? More powerful than the two sisters combined? Because that is what you're suggesting with giving him access to all his form and quite frankly, is story breaking. As it is, with just his Green Ranger powers, he will be on par with the two sisters if not just slightly more powerful.
Now, I've said my piece and my opinion. I'm done with this discussion.
I've waited a long time for this! So glad you updated! I'm really excited for this! Keep up the goos work!
7068908 thanks, what did you think of the part were applebloom asked what was the weirdest thing Tommy ever did?
7068935 I nearly fell out of my chair laughing!
i would have Tommy do what he did in Dinothunder when he had to fight his past ranger forms to fix his dino crystal, after getting his butt handed to him by Atir's son and also how in the hell did they get to equss
*smashes the author in the face with a history book* They were used, twice, by the United States in order to force the Japanese to surrender at the end of World War 2. The two nuclear bombs were dropped on the Japanese cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki.
...
I don't even...
Why...?
Why is this a thing?
To what purpose does this serve?
7068975 i can do u 1 better he have to fight all his past rangers forms so he can uptane their combine powers from mighty morphing to dinothunder which allows him 2 transfom 2 each 1 at will and said forms zords and weapons
I'm not the only one who thought of that!
I... have mixed feelings about this...
On one hand, I'm off-the-walls excited that it finally updated and it's got a lot of great development since it's such a long chapter.
On the other hand though, there's quite a few grammar mistakes throughout the whole thing (No doubt being attributed to its length) as well as a few parts where terms are repeated like the department of redundancy department specializes in. Overall I didn't get taken too out of the story, but it certainly could use a bit of a second-run through on the editing.
It's been so long...
OK, I got to say that I'm happy to see this story again. The fact that Tommy is actually friends with the real Sailor Moon and that you actually managed to convince Fiddlesticks to allow you to use Blade Dancer from the Bridge is awesome. I really liked how the mares reacted to the copper coins and how they all got an attraction to Oliver, particularly Barbara (I somehow picture her looking like Inuyuru's version from Ask Spines) who is trying to rationalize her new liking towards Oliver and Blade Dancer who is probably going to be flirtier and sexier than in the Bridge. The fight scenes and the past scenes, especially the funny racist Zordon line, were interesting. Still, I recommend that you get an editor as there is a lot of repetitive sentences and grammar mistakes that can distract readers from the story. Anyway, thanks for the chapter. Hope the next one comes soon to see how BD will act around Tommy.
7068935 KO AWESOME chapter, hope to see Tommy fighting and having some harem time with the mane 6, Dancer Blade, and the Princess. Also can't wait to see the other stories next chapters as well.
Great to see this story back! I would hold off on Tommy getting his powers back for now, as he would need a reason to be carrying around his old power coin and have noticed that it was being recharged. The girls getting captured and then the coin being discovered would feel better as you can send him on his rescue mission with a recharged coin and make it all heroic. You will still need to explain how Dragon Ceaser got there as well. Also love how you inferred that the Salior Scouts where also Power Rangers! I wonder if Gatchaman was an affiliated group as well?
"starts reading this and sees my name" I"M IN THE STORY!!!" (No you don't, you dumb ass) "FUCK YOU... also who said that?"
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Oh my god! What the hell! This is too funny!
7069017 The two bombs that were dropped in japan during ww2 were atomic bombs. I've always thought that they were different than nuclear bombs.
Also for the other part some stories do that, I kind of like the idea of extended life spans.
7069022 That would be too Gary Stu. The idea just turns my stomach and if it did happen within the story, would ruin it. I would definitely stop reading if it did come to pass.
7069368 Those are nuclear weapons, the first weaponized iteration, but still nukes.
Also, the extended lifespan doesn't make sense in accordance to series canon. It throws everything off to a rather massive degree.
7069382
It's not the first time that a fanfiction author used extended lifespans. It's been done a few times before. A couple of those stories are considered some of the best on the site. I really don't see the issue with it. It's mostly a non-issue. And then there is the "series canon". I would really like to know what rule was passed within the fimfiction community that says that you need to stick to series canon. It's a crossover so it already deviates from series canon. Just my two cents.
7069408 Fanfiction doesn't need to adhere to such things, that is true, but all of these stories have the same 'anchor': canon.
If you make a divergence like this, then you have to adjust things so that it makes more sense. Fridge logic brings up a fair few issues like how one handles what would have to be KNOWN factors like the Crystal Empire, Discord, and Nightmare Moon, since those long life-spans can make it easy for these so-called 'legends' be proven fact that cannot be easily hidden.
Other factors are to be considered as well, but, well...
7069382 I fixed the part about the nuclear bomb part. I'm afraid of making more inaccuracies.
But I am very thankful for you pointing that out.
Thank you.
7069474 And now all that's left is finding a way to make it so that the ridiculous life-spans of ponies doesn't completely break the story.
7069487 Don't worry, I've been working on that, it won't break the story (At least I hope not). Besides, I've talked to others who have done similar types of stories when it comes to lifespans. They have some good advice.
7069494 That's good. While I still ask 'why' you did so, so long as you can make it work, I won't complain. I've seen more ludicrous things in fanfics before that worked out just fine.
Just watch your step, stuff like this can easily crash and burn.
Good luck.
7069507 Thanks, I've given the 'life-span concept' a lot of thought way before I even put it in.
Originally I was going to use this in another story. (I still am.) But the point is I gave it a lot of thought. I get what you mean, I have seen a lot of good stories go down the drain because of someone putting something in due to a spur of the moment impulse. But like you said. Other times things work out.
I made sure that it can work with the story. I like to take at least a week to think about how I should write a chapter and if it will benefit me or hurt me in the long run of the story. I try to make sure not to write my self into a corner.
But I'm very thankful for the advice.
7069535 I know I can be harsh, but I love reading. I love fanfiction, I read it more than I do original fiction.
If there's one thing that drives me up the wall, however, is good stories being hampered by poor execution, horrible spelling and/or grammar, and/or poor decisions.
7069567 I know what you mean, I'm the same way. I love fanfiction.
Whenever I see a good story going down the drain, this is my reaction.
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7069587 A thousand sheep can bleat praise 'till the sun sets forevermore, but the most important one of the bunch is the one black sheep that calls you out.
not gona lie i thought that said chickin first time i read that and also how in hell did you come up with the age thing man i need explanations!!
this. Was. AWESOME! INEEDMOREOFTHISSOOOOOOON!
7069251 Agree on waiting a bit and as for Caesar, well I'd say he was transported there along with Tommy but is in a hibernative state right now.
I really do hope Caesar does the Godzilla roar on them, that'll give them something to yellow themselves for.
I like how you brought up the unintentionally racism about the power rangers. Or was it unintentionally?
I'm so glad I didn't lose hope and kept the tracking on this story! I can't wait to see more! I love it so far, please keep going!
7069680
I hope it gets covered if Tommy lost his powers in this universe the same way he did in the show. Although Lord Zedd gets a mention we have no clue on how drained the dragon coin actually was at this point. Keep in mind that at least in the show canon I believe that he knew of Zordons death and the events surrounding it.
Also this is tied for the best story i have ever read tied only with ignis draco noctura by sketch d tail
Hah
okay i really like this but bad things first
the aging...i think everyone has egged you enough on that, but here is my problem with it.
You set it up like it was Going to be a BIG point in the story, but the NEXT SECOND you banished it.
Even if we suspend that the main six and EVERYONE age like Elves or Vulcans, this could have been an interesting point to have for say...2-3 chapters.
The girls trying to find a solution to a problem that to Tommy does not seem to be That big until he realizes that he will out age his students.
Another thing, i had a problem with was ..blade dancer
Nothing wrong with her but she just came out of no where, and she looks to be a main player maybe.
and again not that big a problem until she Immediately hits on Tommy.
I don't mind sex or relationships in a story but come on.
lets build up first before there is any looks of hunger (not the exact wording in text but implied :p)
Now to likes.
I loved the crystal mishap in the beginning.
Crystals react differently in Equestria than on earth, could be more to this later.
The coin thing was actually funny if not random (especially the comment about paying the national debt {to on nose})
mmm
I would think with Tommy being a teacher that he would know more about Albert Einstein and the Regret of the bomb, BUT it would be understandable if he kept the knowledge of the bomb AWAY from anyone.
Mmmm that all i got for now.
See ya next chappy
hmmmmm....
Faust and Ranger enemies coming in...
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its good to have you back
good luck 2 u and your endeverse
Finally. This chapter was a good read, also i found interesting that you took a darker path with the rangers.(Personally i always thought of the Tenga/Tengu Warriors s the strongests). The thing that was really interesting, i wasnt expecting the whole 10/20 mares for 1 stallion here, also the whole long lifespans............. just wow, well atleast Tommy is a human.
Im not gonna lie. The only thing i dont find myself invested is in barbara aka fem.Spike.
In power rangers continuity, the dragon zord is one of the few zords to survive, maynly the ones based on animals and that are alive like the galacta beasts and wild zords
Whoa, whoa, whoa!
What?
The doctors essentially sexually violated you in you sleep, and you let it go just like that? For gods sake, they didn't even tell you about it! WTF man!? I would be beyond pissed if I was in Tommy's place right now. Heck, I'm pissed right now from just reading about it.
Uhhh.... This overused trope again. Why did this take such a sexual turn in the plot?(no pun intended)
Tommy: "Oh my god! Will you just shut up about me getting laid already?! I heard you the first time, you broken record!" *stomps away angrily* "God!"
7068935
lol your birthday is on the 24th and you are 24
Hu so your birthday is 3-24-1992
This was great! I've been waiting for this for so long! Tommy is going to have a good fight on his hands.
Hmmm Well if he is going to get his Green Ranger Powers in the next chapter then it should happen when he is fighting and is somewhat getting his ass kicked. That way he won't just go.
And bam he has his powers back. That is the only thing I can think of. Other then delaying the Changling attack one more chapter after the next one.
7069376 ur kidding right? I have to disagree i mean come on tommy has been 3 other color of rangers along with being the green ranger i say tommy should get the other 3 ranger powers sure not at the same mind you he have to obtain through some cliche/not so cliche challenge but i am not going into an arguement to each their own
Love this story. I believe taking your time and letting Tommy get a bit more accustomed would favor the story more than him suddenly having his powers back and inevitably being revealed as the green power ranger to his friends. I honestly believe that his identity should be found out by them before he gets his powers back. But that might just be me.
Now, this something more of a personal dislike, but I don't dislike the story anymore for it. But I don't get why some stories support all ponies having ridiculously long lifespans. Celestia and Luna I can understand, but everyone else? Not something I see as possible.
But otherwise, I'm loving the story and awaiting more. Even though I've never watched the Power rangers at all I still find this awesome.
7070525
I'm not kidding. If you think about it, the Green Ranger powers were his most powerful, even after he went good. And I'm serious about the "only one form" issue. Giving Tommy all his forms would be like giving someone Goku's powers, Natsu Dragneel's powers and every other super heroes powers. IT'S TOO MUCH GARY STU!!! And that will ruin the story. No villain will be able to match up to someone who can change their power set at the drop of a pin. In order for the hero to have a "true victory", the hero must have some adversity. Tommy having all his Ranger forms would be a cheap victory and quite frankly, the personality and attitude of Tommy Oliver would not allow that.
well, took you long to update, but i'll let you slide for now. I wonder what you have plan for tommy to have a harem? I also know what chryistal thinking gonna once she have the mare6 and meet tommy in power ranger from?
Great chapter and your welcome my friend. Hope to see more great chapters.
7071482 think about it faust said that the threat or whatever their going to face knows tommy so i can think of afew threats tommy had faced personaly like rita repulsa and lord zed with their minions or it could be the other villains tommy help defeat i don't have the best memories but anyways and if memories serves me right tommy and his fellow rangers at the time lost a few battles and a couple of zords here there or lost the ability to summon them against either powerful enemies or enemies become even more powerful than they are or against enemies joining forces like in the case of rita repulsa and lord zed for instance
Hey you are 24, just like me, except you dont have to deal We th a certain joke.
Wow, Power Ranger or not, Tommy will have a hard time dealinh with dem ladies.
Ps: Yes, im not the only one who goes by the difference in culture influencing the life stages of ponies.
I say let him get into trouble during the Changeling attack and then get a vision similar to Dino Thunder's having to fight the green, white and red past versions of himself, only with just his green self, ending with regaining his ability to transform. What exactly happens during that is up to you, just throwing it out there.
And can't wait for Dragonzord/Dragon Caesar to rock out.
Curious though: Will he have access to the others? The rangers HAVE called upon the others' zord before. And I'd love to see a "Oh crap!" moment an enemy might upon seeing the "More Dakka" Ultrazord...
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Yes, they did lose a few battles to Lord Zedd (Rita Repulsa was a dunce imo). Either way, that is the adversity I am talking about. Because of that, they came back even stronger than before. Giving Tommy all of his forms just feels cheap to me. All Tommy needs is his Green Ranger powers and Dragonzord and he will kick badguy ass all day long. Tell me, do you want Tommy to be God-like powerful? More powerful than the two sisters combined? Because that is what you're suggesting with giving him access to all his form and quite frankly, is story breaking. As it is, with just his Green Ranger powers, he will be on par with the two sisters if not just slightly more powerful.
Now, I've said my piece and my opinion. I'm done with this discussion.