One poor soul just wanted to have fun at the annual Comic-con. That poor soul also just so happened to like Alex Mercer. It's too bad that creepy Merchant wants to play his manipulative games and shipped him off to face horror for his amusement.
6003393 pacing in the first few chapters is not a problem as you need to get the story started. Work on it as you go along and I'm sure it will turn out great
Oh thank the lord, I thought I was the only guy left that was still writing new prototype crossovers in FimFic. Have an up for re-establishing Prototype relevance.
Okay, so off the bat I had doubts about this story, those being 1, the premise is someone who gets the powers of someone he dressed as at a convention and 2, it's a BiE story. Normally I hate these types of stories but I'm a huge Prototype fan so I decided to give this a shot and... so far so good. I'm not going to rate it before I read more as I still don't like BiEs or "cosplay powers" but I'll read the next chapter when it comes out.
Was wondering when someone would use Prototype for the displaced. The lore of the prototype franchise doesn't have to follow the rules of the 'game'. The came has some pretty cool moves, but it won't be as effective if you were to apply the abilities to 'realistic' application.
What to do when fighting . . .
-in game: strategically use whip, blades, and hammer fists to kill enemies.
-'realistic' application: Why the fuck should i even try? *crunch, consume* *screams of fear* I'm magic proof!!! I'm the juggernaut bitch!!!
The displaced should not be limited to what is available in the game. Like consuming a unicorn and gaining the ability to use magic.
I just finish reading the first chapter. 'Grassy' doesn't have to worry about becoming Alex Mercer, or Blacklight. In the game lore, Mercer did not survive. The virus just took his memories and etc., not what ever made mercer who he was. 'Grassy's' situation has become a combination of mercer and heller. He has a daughter, a living weapon, emotional issues. why can't he get any pony poon?
6004835 Let's just say that right now Jacob thinks he can't get any pony poon because he has become the blacklight virus like Mercer. And because of that sex would be pointless. Of course his situation is like Heller and Mercer combined but he just hasn't put that part of the puzzle together... yet.
He still has his human mindset so it would take many more pony consumptions for pony attraction to take effect, because he aint a clopper. At least in this story it will, if I would actually bother to put that kind of stuff in. Also he doesn't have a daughter since he isn't actually 'Grassy', he's just playing the part of parent out of guilt. You know that right?
6005532 >neck beards don't know >neck beards continue to call it fedora >tfw you realize neck beards are literally fashion dead >fedoras/trilby are dead now
There is no love, there is no life, there is only the neck beard, of which can never die. We are powerless to stop their ways, only to slowly and surely succumb to deaths sweet embrace, where we are truly free
I've been waiting for something like this for so long. Thank you kind sir or madame. *tips hat*
I like it.
The pacing could use a bit if work though.
you done goof'd boyo!
6003284 *Tips hat* You're welcome
6003290 Agreed, pacing is a problem of mine
6003393 pacing in the first few chapters is not a problem as you need to get the story started. Work on it as you go along and I'm sure it will turn out great
6003500 That is true, starting a story with perfect pacing is very rare and even more so very hard.
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May wanna get your super strength under control first
6003706 Lol, I know right?
Oh thank the lord, I thought I was the only guy left that was still writing new prototype crossovers in FimFic. Have an up for re-establishing Prototype relevance.
Okay, so off the bat I had doubts about this story, those being 1, the premise is someone who gets the powers of someone he dressed as at a convention and 2, it's a BiE story. Normally I hate these types of stories but I'm a huge Prototype fan so I decided to give this a shot and... so far so good. I'm not going to rate it before I read more as I still don't like BiEs or "cosplay powers" but I'll read the next chapter when it comes out.
Tracking.
6003742 Prototype rules, needs more stories on here.
6003766 What does BiE stand for?
6003781
Bronies in Equestria
6003831 Ah, ty
6003909
No problem, always happy to help!
tracking prototype fimfictions r the best.
You sir have made my hit list...of ansome stuff to follow!
Was wondering when someone would use Prototype for the displaced. The lore of the prototype franchise doesn't have to follow the rules of the 'game'. The came has some pretty cool moves, but it won't be as effective if you were to apply the abilities to 'realistic' application.
What to do when fighting . . .
-in game: strategically use whip, blades, and hammer fists to kill enemies.
-'realistic' application: Why the fuck should i even try? *crunch, consume* *screams of fear* I'm magic proof!!!
I'm the juggernaut bitch!!!
The displaced should not be limited to what is available in the game. Like consuming a unicorn and gaining the ability to use magic.
6004173 Completely agree about the realism vs game thing
6004197
With powers like these, the only limit is your imagination. The 'protagonist' can probably go toe-to-toe with a shoggoth, maybe more.
6004197
I just finish reading the first chapter. 'Grassy' doesn't have to worry about becoming Alex Mercer, or Blacklight. In the game lore, Mercer did not survive. The virus just took his memories and etc., not what ever made mercer who he was. 'Grassy's' situation has become a combination of mercer and heller. He has a daughter, a living weapon, emotional issues. why can't he get any pony poon?
6004835 Let's just say that right now Jacob thinks he can't get any pony poon because he has become the blacklight virus like Mercer. And because of that sex would be pointless. Of course his situation is like Heller and Mercer combined but he just hasn't put that part of the puzzle together... yet.
He still has his human mindset so it would take many more pony consumptions for pony attraction to take effect, because he aint a clopper. At least in this story it will, if I would actually bother to put that kind of stuff in. Also he doesn't have a daughter since he isn't actually 'Grassy', he's just playing the part of parent out of guilt. You know that right?
6004253
heck, he's a shapeshifter... why limit himself?
he could be part this--->
and part this---> (1:54)
6004925
Yep. Like I said earlier, he's probably limited my his imagination, and maybe some willpower.
6003284
>le fedora tip
6005212 weknowmemes.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/03/trilby-vs-fedora-know-the-difference.jpg
Saw the first paragraph introducing Jacob... made me groan at the 90000th HiE character. Then I saw the second character,
The Merchant may have saved your story, bro.
6006483 Lol, guess he's good for something at least
This is a good start! have a Like and a fave
This is great! Can't wait to see more!!
This aught to be good. He'd likely be best to contact the princesses, asap, considering he knows about the show and all.
6005532
>neck beards don't know
>neck beards continue to call it fedora
>tfw you realize neck beards are literally fashion dead
>fedoras/trilby are dead now
There is no love, there is no life, there is only the neck beard, of which can never die. We are powerless to stop their ways, only to slowly and surely succumb to deaths sweet embrace, where we are truly free
6012029
Well that's depressing...
I can see this guy using some tactics burrowed from Emerald from Oskar Osäker: True Omnivore
Great start, by the way. Though, could use a bit more proofreading.
6012029
I need to shave now.
Will the Mane Six or the Princesses get involved at all in this story? I kinda wonder how that would go.
On another note, DISPLACED MERCER FTW!!!
Welp, say good bye to the city, and hello ground zero.
They dont have a Blckwatch equivalent so that means that they are going to DIEEEE