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Yeah...
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I guess that explains happened to all the kids, but man, that's dark.
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Well, most of the kids. Even though I don't think they were ever shown, I do believe Crystal mentioned foals in her Crystal Caverns, no?
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6324712 Foals born of ponies live quite normally, as in growing up and such, no weirdness.
Kids who become ponies? Well, that's a bit more of a wildcard, like everyone else who becomes a pony, rather than being born as one.
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Wat?! I just......I don't even......how did.......WHAT!?!?!
Or they could split into separate entities.
So does this mean Dust Kicker is technichally a Pedophile?
6325343 And Sandra, and I seem to recall Will/Sandra. He's made the entire herd into pedos. Damn it, Dusk Hope!
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I reserve the right of 'I told you soo!'. I told you soo that something shocking going to come out of this! And I was right! But even I, with the typos or not, did not see that coming... Semi-dark...
There are also mentions of the merging... I don't remember which chapter I said it before, but I incline more into the merging ending of Will/Cindy happening more than separate bodies Will and Cindy happening as the time goes on... Which means my inclining didn't change direction at all...
Further imput at another time
6178596 Finally, after a while, I found the damn comment, if anyone is interested... And also a subsubsequent one for Wills willful will... 6179473 It's somewhere in the 56 chapter.
I want Will and Cindy to stay as they are. D:
Aww, poor Dusky.
In this case, they quite literally do grow up so fast!
there is only one word I can think of that fits this chapter.. Love.
i like to think that it's slowly happening anyway. Whether Cindy speeds up the process or not.....
must
I would like to direct them to the tale of Utopia, to the story of Vita and Lumi (or was it Luma?) somewhere within Sharing the Night, with a warning.
There's a trend I've noticed in your stories. It's galling at times, but not ever really enough to totally ruin the whole thing: glaring inconsistencies/in-continuities.
You seem to have forgotten that Sandra grew an ovipositor cock and inserted that egg into Neon :V
You've done this sort of "forgot what things were supposed to be, and now Imma retcon it" dance quite A LOT in "Uncommon Ground," too, and several times in this story up to this point. This particular instance is somewhat minor compared to other issues, but the persistent build-up of such a trend can reeaalllyy put a damper on one's ability to immerse themselves in a story when said story starts pilling contradictions on it ;_;
Your story-telling is praiseworthy! If you could work a bit more on consistency throughout the story's world & timeline, then I think you could become much better ;)
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What self-canon did I drop in Uncommon Grounds? Yes, that is much more interesting to me at this moment.