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Snake pony. Well.... that was certainly different
Ummm... Different much?
...Huh.
Did not see that —pardon the pun, coming.
...Wonder if Jack is venomous? That could be worth it, once he gets used to the rest of the package. If not and he's now more of a constrictor that means he's basically one big 'tube' of muscle, so I guess the same goes for that.
Still, going to be a really harsh thing to get used to. I'll grant that.
bringing One closed to his prize
Lone closer?
...Wait, wait, wait.
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Guys, maybe I'm wrong, but Jack might have struck a... well, jackpot.
Of course, if the same goes for the rest of the world is quite different story entirely.
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Not to rain on your parade, but how exactly would that be worth it when everypony's spit is already considered an extreme biohazard?
Unless you mean corrosive, especially if only corrosive to non-flesh. That'd be interesting, that kind of spit can't be blocked by a hazmat suit and could eat through armor, walls, barracades, and other things in moments.
Except I wonder if this is the kind of story where that would be useful in.
Maybe Jack could be augmented into a flying pony snake?
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Making all three of them fliers, once William learned how to do it.
I think one of the more interesting things is learning that William and Cindy have a kind of control over The Gift. Though exactly why a snakepony is a bit of a headscratcher.
I doubt Paul will let Jack, his companion just go. I hope that gets resolved without any terrible incidents
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Shit, I think you're right.
God, if alicorns are S-class, what do you think that makes the Draconequii?
Hopefully he's just a lamia. Having a draconequus running around could quickly push things even more out of control.
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I was thinking personal 'cool' factor for Jack himself rather than actual utility.
Sure, seems like a nice guy, but given how quickly he jumped at being mutated for the rest of his life because 'horses are cool...' Well, his WIS score could stand to be raised a few points, is all I'm saying.
Still, he got (at least) a boyfriend out of it that seems (for the circumstances) rather faithful and decent a sort, so I guess there have been worse life decisions made.
Oh yeah, now that would be cool!
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Well, William rather proves there's a difference between having abilities and instantly knowing how to use them. If so, long-term that might be a problem and/or asset, but short term it probably won't mean near anything.
You know, the more I think about it and reread, the more I see the little things I missed in this story.
Lets get the first bit out of the way:
The closest so far Cindy and William came to an argument about anything. It's not quite clear why, but I'm guessing it's because Cindy asked for permission to do something, and William asked for clarification and didn't give an answer, and Cindy went ahead and did it anyway. Cindy, while willing to respect other people's choice, has no hesitation on spreading and modifying the Gift for those who already have it, or wish to have it.
Actually, I kinda think Will was in the wrong there, he didn't outright deny anything and Cindy is allowed to use her magic as she sees fit so long as it doesn't conflict with Will, just like he can. It's the one thing they have independent control over. I think it's the first time Cindy is asserting that she has an independent will and desire beyond just Will +1. She's going out of her way to convince and inform Will of things, and almost none of that is going the other direction.
The next thing ties with that:
It's obvious in hindsight, Cindy was getting aroused by the action, and that feeling was unconsciously affecting William, who probably would have tolerated it but not been that aroused (at least until his head changes more, I think, and he gets familiar with his new mare parts).
Cindy, being a fully Gifted mind, seems to have no reservations whatsoever about sexy times, or propriety. She may defer to William a great deal, and willingly works together with him almost all of the time, but ultimately has just as much control of the body, and is in turn affected by the body as much as William is, such as when Richard was examining Will's horn, and she got aroused by that too.
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Well, while I could believe that Jack was secretly some kind of bestiality guy with a horse fixation that never got to express it and didn't want to miss the opportunity that fell into his lap, I'm actually wondering if he wasn't affected by The Gift somehow. Scents that just appeal and affect certain people, clouding judgement, maybe? He left his partner for Lone Wing pretty quick for a whim, unless they didn't get along.
This was....different. Definitely a good read, but still different. Pacing could be better though; the whole story seems a bit rushed.
6014210 I agree. Part of the reason our protagonist suddenly found himself alone, and basically a few steps back.
well shit if you could become a snake pony sign me up.... just give me a kiss I rather keep my butt hole a virgin
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6014366 He's working on the arm part. Poor guy.
hum interesting and a bit shocking at the same time.
6014486 I think we had the first one already, no?
*still waits for awesome battle with tanks, jets, explosions, and humanity fuck yeah*
This is why you shouldn't catalyze the mutation process in the middle of coitus. What did Cindy expect to happen with Jack so focused on a trouser snake?
That...that right there is funny!
Cautious these two might me be scoping for a bounty on mutants? Reading on.
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Willy/Cindy, "mental note: Next human that wants to mutate, maybe fill him in on possibly what they should expect"
Meh, ya know what, Fluttershy wants in your pants, living with Twilight sparkle is weird, and the Lyler archives pretty much numbed me to the bizarre and depraved. So while their little scene isn't my cup of tea, I'm not even bothered that it happened. Onward to more... well whatever this is.
So cum spreads the infection. What the actual fuck?
Also I get the feeling William is actually Princess Celestia, but the human version of her. Alternative realities could account for that, so he may be a incarnation of Celestia, but very different.