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Celebrates and overlords abound, but no overmind?
Also, what does "roll a hand/hoof" mean?
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Just for you! Yes, that is me.
I am getting the feeling this story is going to be long.
I am liking the way this is all coming together it is showing to be a planet of pony and human working to gather in the end, or a smoking crater only time will tell.
Harts Fire
I suppose since Cindy was spawned from the corrupted essence, rather than changed by it, she could hold on to some of the knowledge mingled into it? *shrugs*
Crystal is a good pony. She has the right mindset for both sides to survive. Hopefully the ferality is just an early generation thing and not one that is a constant.
Holy shit, this is weird, and I'm not one to use that word lightly. Fave'd.
I'm liking Liz and Crystal, though honestly Crystal sounds like who the long description of the story was actually describing, considering that William has no family that we've seen and just one friend so far. Still, I like the hint that all the 'special' ponies aren't affected mentally like the others. Well, beyond having a second head that can insert thoughts into yours.
Cindy is so quiet, so considerate of letting William ask all the questions.
First usage of teleport seen. I wonder if William and Cindy will be able to immediately add it to their repertoire upon seeing it, or rather being 'reminded' of it. I guess we can assume that the 'essence' included ingrained knowledge, which is why complicated spells like teleport are there. Never said Crystal had a horn, so either she does and it's not mentioned, or there is hornless ways of casting, or something else cast it using Crystal as the area of effect target.
Considering Crystal's estimate of rarity of duchesses/dukes and princesses/princes, I think it's the biggest hint so far at how far reaching the pony epidemic has gone. William really had been living in a cave if all that was happening while no one in the city had a clue.
Interesting. A middle ground between the commoners and the princesses. Hadn't expected that. And my earlier comment on winning the lottery was more accurate than I knew. If the statistics hold out, there'd be only six or seven royal ponies on Earth. Given the sheer degree of morphic diversity on display, meeting the council should be fascinating.
Also, changelings are cheating cheaters who don't play fair very often.
There's a typo among Clarity's subjects:
"Me," unless that was a moment of self-alienation.
6002617 Fixed, and it's true. Oh look at me, I can get my hands back whenever I want! Phah, cheating changelings.
This is just me, but peace between ponykind and humanity may not be a viable option at the moment. His escape would immediately put him on the top of the KoS list. (Kill on Sight) That and the ponies who are spreading the infection aren't going to paint a good image of their race. Including when the minority of ponies don't want to spread it as the majority do. This is going to stur up hate and anger among the human population and lead to war.
Also, I would personally like to see more action (not that kind of action) and battles between humans and ponies. Despite the ponies numbers and abilities they are still out matched by human forces. Even if it's just a human militia, though this depends on what nation their in and what region, I would like to see some more fighting. If they are in America and in the Southern portion of America (Texas, Tennessee, Arkansas, etc.) there is defiantly going to be well-armed militias. A Militias first priority is gonna be securing a base of operations, which is most likely going to be one of the many abandon military bases. (well, that would be me if I were part of a militia) Through this they can gain tanks, aircraft, and even more weapons. They can use the bases food and water supply as well.
I think William's main threat is going to be those militias who KoS anypony on sight.
"Awaken my child, and embrace the glory that is your birthright. Know that I am the Princess; the eternal will of the Herd, and that you have been created to serve me."
Hmm... Intresting concept; I'll have to read some before I make an actual comment
6003119 Welcome to the adventure!
Still a great series, I like it
doh, this story is so WIERD in SO MANY WAYS. BUT IT'S AN ADDICTING READ AT THE SAME TIME!
6004342 Dare I ask what the weirdest part is?
6004354 umm... everything?
So if there's roughly one S-class per billion ponies, and the army is aware of three total (including William)...
Humanity is already nearly half-wiped out.
It's no wonder they're desperate.
I like Crystal. She's got the right idea.
I wonder what William's pony name will be, since it's apparently an inevitable part of the transformation process?
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I'm fairly certain the 'one in a billion' was more descriptive for 'really, really darn rare' rather than accurate statistics.
Could be wrong, though, given the whole 'Gift Over-mind' thing. Crystal can seemingly teleport after a few days, so who knows what other magic stuff has 'leaked' through?
But, yeah, the horse apples have seemingly rather thoroughly hit the global fan anyway, so I agree with that bit.
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I would not be so sure about that immunity. After all Sandy became a talzpony shortly after Cindy frenched her.
ohoho you know if people are turning into changelings that means there're changelings hidden somewhere among the guards that were drained by the dimensional jizz sucker.
I thought it was only one doctor, Richard?
became
You would be suprised
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