Twilight makes a deal with Molestia: Allow Molly to experience life though proxy in exchange for all the goddess' knowledge and power. What happens next is entirely expected.
I have a strong feeling that as long as the work continues to be of the same quality or greater; you will always be featured. Also I must give you all a hand for making a Molestia fic that doesn't make me groan in disgust *Gives a round of applause*
I squealed from the RD scene; I blushed and started imagining further at the talk scene, and I came from the clop scene. All I'm wanting now here is more... good work.
5987862 Thank you! And to be honest, I was worried that people would get mad that I'm trying a new take on a character as well known as Molestia. I'm happy that it seems to be the opposite 5988022 Well, in arc two of the story we're going to be 5987991 Thats what I set out to do 5988175 A bit, but its nice to know that people enjoy my work
With all the rapey, grimdark, sad, tragic, melancholic or bittersweet fics there are (and don't get me wrong, I still like a lot of those), I fucking LOVE this feel-good style fic. Amazing work.
5988409 Maybe towards the end I might mention it, but impregantion isn't a large fetish of mine so I don't think I'll include it. 5988353 This story is going to be entirely a feel good story, I prefer to write stories like that.
Damn this is fun. After reading the first chapter, I expected there to be growing tension between Celestia and Twilight followed by an inevitable confrontation where Celestia reclaimed Molly. Overall, I would say that Molly's explanation made me feel better about the situation and now I'm a lot less worried. I relate the feeling to a driving experience that I had a couple days ago. I thought two cars were about to get into a horrible wreck until I realized that there were actually two lanes in front of me. That feeling of, "Oh shit!" followed by, "Wow, not only is that not a problem, it never was. I just didn't see it before."
So, is she now a shemale or a hermaphrodite? I hope the latter, as she could then have her harem give her a double orgasm and a horn job and also some intensive wing- and ass care. One item for each of the five other elements...
I laugh at these kinds of stories way more than I should, and the fact that I do that makes me laugh even more.
5988488 Feel good story is right, ponies are going to feel good whether they want to or not, thanks to that aura. Also, good to see I'm not the only one who thinks of alicorns as having some kind of passive aura. With that much power, there's gotta be some seepage, right?
5989668 around about where her balls are described to be the size of grapefruit and onward. Then there the jiggling bloated belly, the rain of cum and her fur changing color. Also, while i know, "Cum sprayed from her body" isnt meant to be read literally it gave a disturbing image of her skin spraying cum everywhere.
5989922 aye , i read the list and thought id be fine as ive read similar stories before and not had any trouble. Believe me i went in eyes wide open. I just didn't expect to react so poorly to it.
5989221 Wat. I have no idea where you suddenly got the idea that Twilight is a 'guy with tits'. That doesn't even make any sense, since she had her female parts the entire time, and nothing exactly indicates that she is for some reason male. Just growing a dick makes her a female with a dick, but definitely not a 'guy with tits'.
Ok, so IDK if you planed on it or not but what are your feeling on impregnation? Will there be any of her friends wanting her babyz? Pregnancy sex is so awsome, even if it's not for everyone.
5991923 Hmm, I guess I failed to notice that particular ban. I can't say I'm not disappointed but the fact that not everyone can shares the same fetishes and interests is what makes a story unique.
I hope she keeps her cock that size (would like ot know her actual size right now)...but her balls will need to be even bigger..after all shi's going to need alot of cum for all her harem mares~
5989248 I never said it was antrho. Unless you took the "tits" part as indication of it being antrho. I just see the tits/teat/mammaries as interchangeable, as people know what's being referred to, and some just prefer more familiar terms. And well, going with the description, and that I talked to someone that read this, Twilight apparently gets gender swapped in the latest chapter. (At least according to genital detail and how it's written compared to when they were female) Which as said: Is a incredibly common and recurring thing in pony R34. Especially for Twilight.
5991705 "Guy with tits" is a futa archetype, a archetype incredibly many confuse as "chick with dick", when there's nothing female about said character aside from their looks/voice. Which is the case for around 85> % of all futa. (in porn) And something most use in order to avoid "it being gay". Granted, there are a few futa that actually identify as female or even herm, but those are almost never heard of. At least not properly, most just confuse the "female looks, male identity" ones for them. Anyhow, just because a character starts off as female doesn't mean they can't change on a dime. Heck, that tends to be the main plot of most "futa" fics. They start off female, add magic, inexplicably male. They often just disguise it as "female" for the prior mentioned "It's not gay" reason. Now granted, I can admit I haven't read the whole thing. But a friend of mine read it thoroughly twice, and they confirmed it comes off as pretty standard gender swap. Considering the amount of genital detail+focus, along with what personality is used by them before and after.
6002804 I generally associate "tits" with anthro, and "teats" with ponies. And I never said that Twilight was gender swapped, she only gets a dick. It was a decision on my part to focus on Twilight's male genitalia over her female genitalia, as I felt that Twilight would be much more enthralled with her cock at that point in time.
As for personality changes, I have no idea as to what you're talking about. I think I managed to stay in Twilight's, at least as she is portrayed in this story, extremely well.
6002804 a herm, trans, and futa are different things. A futa is still fully a girl who has just a dick, no balls. A herm has both fully functional sets of reproduction organs. A trans is a male, female that identify with the opposite gender and usually does there best to look like one. They still are male/female and still have the reproduction organs of their original gender. A gender swap is a total change in gender including reproduction organs. Many people confuse herm and futa, and it should be noted that twilight is NOT a futa at this point, she's a herm. And at this point, I doubt she will go all the way because she has the best of both worlds.
6002804 That's bullshit because of a very simple reason: The AUTHOR writes the character, and whether you perceive the personality as a character as feminine or not doesn't matter. If the author writes Twilight Sparkle as a female then she is one, and she doesn't have a 'male identity' unless that is mentioned inside of the story. Don't get me wrong, I get what you mean, but you confuse the character itself with your perception of her. If the author writes her as a female, then she is a female, your perception of her doesn't really matter. The furthest you can go is claim that she is a female with stereotypical male characteristics or badly written -- that's all. She stays female, no matter what, it's pretty much the decision of the author, and as long as he still refers to her as 'her' she remains female. Another point: Twilight's personality is pretty much the same as in the first chapter and was influenced by Molly's. Does that mean she was male in a female's body back then? The fact that she has a dick hardly really matters, unless you would argue that curious and sexually charged females would be incapable of enjoying the prospect of having one, which is absurd.
Comment posted by rail885478544 deleted May 22nd, 2015
no wonder stallions play with themselves all the time
Capitalize and end with a comma.
its an amazing feeling!
"It's"
Drool and precum drip down from Twilight’s mouth
"dripped", pre-cum usually has a hyphen in it too.
and you did it only after seeing me do it once” she extended her hoof and wiped a long strand of cum from Twilight’s bloated stomach before licking it clean with her hoof,
Comma after once and I think hoof is supposed to be mouth.
was fun chapter to work on...
and we are featured again
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I have a strong feeling that as long as the work continues to be of the same quality or greater; you will always be featured. Also I must give you all a hand for making a Molestia fic that doesn't make me groan in disgust *Gives a round of applause*
I squealed from the RD scene; I blushed and started imagining further at the talk scene, and I came from the clop scene. All I'm wanting now here is more... good work.
Wait, what? I don't even want to know that detail.
....... Prayers have been answered. Thank you so much, fine author...
5987991 I know we are all doing it but TMI dude seriously.
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Thank you! And to be honest, I was worried that people would get mad that I'm trying a new take on a character as well known as Molestia. I'm happy that it seems to be the opposite
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Well, in arc two of the story we're going to be
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Thats what I set out to do
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A bit, but its nice to know that people enjoy my work
With all the rapey, grimdark, sad, tragic, melancholic or bittersweet fics there are (and don't get me wrong, I still like a lot of those), I fucking LOVE this feel-good style fic. Amazing work.
You know, after seeing this chapter, I'm beginning to wonder of we'll see a chapter where Twilight knocks up her harem.
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Maybe towards the end I might mention it, but impregantion isn't a large fetish of mine so I don't think I'll include it.
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This story is going to be entirely a feel good story, I prefer to write stories like that.
Damn this is fun. After reading the first chapter, I expected there to be growing tension between Celestia and Twilight followed by an inevitable confrontation where Celestia reclaimed Molly. Overall, I would say that Molly's explanation made me feel better about the situation and now I'm a lot less worried. I relate the feeling to a driving experience that I had a couple days ago. I thought two cars were about to get into a horrible wreck until I realized that there were actually two lanes in front of me. That feeling of, "Oh shit!" followed by, "Wow, not only is that not a problem, it never was. I just didn't see it before."
5988488 That makes me so happy to hear <3
So, is she now a shemale or a hermaphrodite? I hope the latter, as she could then have her harem give her a double orgasm and a horn job and also some intensive wing- and ass care. One item for each of the five other elements...
Absolutely Amazing!!!! Please keep it up!
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hermaphrodite.
And the orgy for when she finally seduces the rest of the main six is going to be a fun one to write
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Yea, there is not going to be a whole lot of conflict in this story. Happy feels all around
Okay...
Wow...
You write really good blowjob scenes...
Please, I beg of thee, let there be a facefucking scene in this story.
~TOOWC
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Thats like asking if theres going to be anal, or double penetration, or absolutely ludicrous amounts of sexual fluids
I laugh at these kinds of stories way more than I should, and the fact that I do that makes me laugh even more.
5988488 Feel good story is right, ponies are going to feel good whether they want to or not, thanks to that aura. Also, good to see I'm not the only one who thinks of alicorns as having some kind of passive aura. With that much power, there's gotta be some seepage, right?
Man the amount of r63/guy with tits Twilight fics are incredibly popular xP
They've sorta always been on a roll for years heh.
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What? This story isn't anthro, and there hasn't been any r63 either
Whoa, for whatever reason this chapter went from fine to body horror for me. The descriptions just made me feel disturbed.
Also that aura is creepy as hell.
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During the clop scene? What parts specifically?
5989668 around about where her balls are described to be the size of grapefruit and onward.
Then there the jiggling bloated belly, the rain of cum and her fur changing color. Also, while i know, "Cum sprayed from her body" isnt meant to be read literally it gave a disturbing image of her skin spraying cum everywhere.
Hope that helps.
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Yea, I can see where your coming from, but I did list it all in the trigger list.
The fact that Twilight lost control so much, and made her cock and balls so big, was to segway into something for the next chapter.
5989922 aye , i read the list and thought id be fine as ive read similar stories before and not had any trouble.
Believe me i went in eyes wide open. I just didn't expect to react so poorly to it.
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so she iis going to have futa sex with r63 spike?
Isn't being submissive kind of a bad quality for a leader to have?
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Its not like she submits to everyone who says no to her. She still managed to run Equestria for a thousand years
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probably not
Is she going to have a dick the rest of the story, or is this going to be an on and off situation where you have her change between the two?
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On and off
Okay, holy shit, that was, and still is good. More please!
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Wat. I have no idea where you suddenly got the idea that Twilight is a 'guy with tits'. That doesn't even make any sense, since she had her female parts the entire time, and nothing exactly indicates that she is for some reason male.
Just growing a dick makes her a female with a dick, but definitely not a 'guy with tits'.
Ok, so IDK if you planed on it or not but what are your feeling on impregnation? Will there be any of her friends wanting her babyz? Pregnancy sex is so awsome, even if it's not for everyone.
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There is a trigger list in the author's notes that has all the fetishes this story will and won't have, you can find your answer there as well
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Hmm, I guess I failed to notice that particular ban. I can't say I'm not disappointed but the fact that not everyone can shares the same fetishes and interests is what makes a story unique.
Another good one. Keep 'em coming--pun intended
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I hope she keeps her cock that size (would like ot know her actual size right now)...but her balls will need to be even bigger..after all shi's going to need alot of cum for all her harem mares~
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I don't know how she could walk around with a cock that size.
But this size cock will be returning eventually, but for now futa-twilight is going to be a bit more proportional
5998712 easy to walk, get it its own bra/harness...a sexy bondagy harness....
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Or just magically create it when the situation demands, much more convenient.
5999290 MOAR#!!!!!!!!
5989248 I never said it was antrho. Unless you took the "tits" part as indication of it being antrho. I just see the tits/teat/mammaries as interchangeable, as people know what's being referred to, and some just prefer more familiar terms.
And well, going with the description, and that I talked to someone that read this, Twilight apparently gets gender swapped in the latest chapter. (At least according to genital detail and how it's written compared to when they were female) Which as said: Is a incredibly common and recurring thing in pony R34. Especially for Twilight.
5991705 "Guy with tits" is a futa archetype, a archetype incredibly many confuse as "chick with dick", when there's nothing female about said character aside from their looks/voice. Which is the case for around 85> % of all futa. (in porn) And something most use in order to avoid "it being gay". Granted, there are a few futa that actually identify as female or even herm, but those are almost never heard of. At least not properly, most just confuse the "female looks, male identity" ones for them. Anyhow, just because a character starts off as female doesn't mean they can't change on a dime. Heck, that tends to be the main plot of most "futa" fics. They start off female, add magic, inexplicably male. They often just disguise it as "female" for the prior mentioned "It's not gay" reason. Now granted, I can admit I haven't read the whole thing. But a friend of mine read it thoroughly twice, and they confirmed it comes off as pretty standard gender swap. Considering the amount of genital detail+focus, along with what personality is used by them before and after.
6002804
I generally associate "tits" with anthro, and "teats" with ponies. And I never said that Twilight was gender swapped, she only gets a dick. It was a decision on my part to focus on Twilight's male genitalia over her female genitalia, as I felt that Twilight would be much more enthralled with her cock at that point in time.
As for personality changes, I have no idea as to what you're talking about. I think I managed to stay in Twilight's, at least as she is portrayed in this story, extremely well.
6002804 a herm, trans, and futa are different things. A futa is still fully a girl who has just a dick, no balls. A herm has both fully functional sets of reproduction organs. A trans is a male, female that identify with the opposite gender and usually does there best to look like one. They still are male/female and still have the reproduction organs of their original gender. A gender swap is a total change in gender including reproduction organs. Many people confuse herm and futa, and it should be noted that twilight is NOT a futa at this point, she's a herm. And at this point, I doubt she will go all the way because she has the best of both worlds.
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That's bullshit because of a very simple reason:
The AUTHOR writes the character, and whether you perceive the personality as a character as feminine or not doesn't matter. If the author writes Twilight Sparkle as a female then she is one, and she doesn't have a 'male identity' unless that is mentioned inside of the story. Don't get me wrong, I get what you mean, but you confuse the character itself with your perception of her.
If the author writes her as a female, then she is a female, your perception of her doesn't really matter. The furthest you can go is claim that she is a female with stereotypical male characteristics or badly written -- that's all. She stays female, no matter what, it's pretty much the decision of the author, and as long as he still refers to her as 'her' she remains female.
Another point: Twilight's personality is pretty much the same as in the first chapter and was influenced by Molly's. Does that mean she was male in a female's body back then? The fact that she has a dick hardly really matters, unless you would argue that curious and sexually charged females would be incapable of enjoying the prospect of having one, which is absurd.
Capitalize and end with a comma.
"It's"
"dripped", pre-cum usually has a hyphen in it too.
Comma after once and I think hoof is supposed to be mouth.
MY GOD, WHY DOES THAT COVER ART EXCITE ME SO MUCH!?