Silver spent the rest of the week studying the book of the magic alphabet, getting school assignments done, and even finding a bit of time to be friendly with his clique, which Tumble now appeared to be a full member of. As Luna had promised, his computer was gone the next day, desk and all. She left his chair behind, to his bittersweet discovery. At least he'd have that uncomfortable chair, thank the heavens.
There was no time to worry about the computer. Any time he would have spent playing a game was instead time spent trying to get down the letters, which proved as frustrating as ever before. Ready or not, the first representative of an academy arrived at the school. The mare wore a cloak covered in constellations, and her hooves were perpetually on fire. Silver raised a brow at this, wondering if this was specifically to impress the students.
"Hello class," she said, standing at the front of the room. Miss Butter Scotch sat at her desk, surrendering her class to the academy mare. "It's nice to meet you all today. Since I am the first of the week, I will take some time to explain things to everypony, unicorn or not. Attending an academy is a wonderful experience for a unicorn, learning to use their magic beyond the basic intuitive tricks of illumination and force, to being able to do anything at all with enough skill." She lowered her head and her horn let loose a small ball of light that exploded into a glowing panorama of the city of Canterlot, floating in the air. "Teleportation, illusions, elemental control, and even lofty feats like shapeshifting are possible for those special unicorns with the drive and ability to reach for them." She suddenly vanished, replaced with a pop of blue energy, to appear several feet to the left in another sphere of blue.
"Power does not come free," she said in a warning tone. "Academy unicorns must study long and hard to learn true magic. They must study with all the passion that a pony feels towards their special talent, which is why most academy unicorns have a magic-related cutie mark." She turned to show off the cutie mark that was embroidered onto her robes, displaying an opened tome with a ball of fire coming out of it. "Are there questions?"
A pegasus raised a hoof. When he was called on, he asked, "Why aren't there pegasus academies or earth pony academies? We have magic too, right?"
The unicorn nodded her head, "A perfectly valid question. The answer is simple. Most pegasus and earth magic is unconscious. Nopony has discovered a language for their magic, so they are limited to what their cutie mark gives them, though it can be amazingly, wonderfully, powerful. Without a language, how can anypony call for magic that was not given to them?" She pointed at the pegasus, "Show us your cutie mark."
He did so, revealing a cloud with rain pouring freely. "There. You will find convincing clouds to release their precious water easier than most, but how can another pegasus learn from that? You can't switch cutie marks, so there is no pegasus academy." The pegasus settled back into his seat, not looking entirely satisfied with the answer, but not prying further. "Of course," said the instructor, "If some clever earth or pegasus pony wanted to be remembered through all history, they could discover the language of their magic. I would delight in seeing that, but I fear there may be no such thing. Any other questions?"
The rest of the questions were pretty tame, and soon enough she moved to go outside, "If the hopeful unicorns would follow me."
Those who had passed the light and weight test followed, which numbered only five, including Soft Blush and Silver Lining. She gathered them into a line and began by first having them all turn to the side and examine their cutie marks. Silver was the only one without one, and she frowned at him. "That is a mark against you, but not a fatal one. Even the Princess Twilight Sparkle was without a cutie mark when she first applied. What is your name?"
"Silver Lining," said Silver, "Ma'am."
Her frown deepened, "Son of Rough Draft, ward of Trixie Lulamoon?"
Silver blinked, "That's me."
She waved a hoof dismissively. "The academy has no use for such troublemakers."
It was like someone threw a bucket of ice water across his face. "What?"
She leaned forward with narrowed eyes, "Did I not speak clearly? You are not welcome. Begone."
Silver opened his mouth to protest, but could think of no good thing to say. Screaming at her certainly wouldn't improve his odds. "Sorry..." He walked stiffly back into the class room, to the judging eyes of his classmates as the test went on without him. He settled heavily in his seat and buried his face in his hooves. What if all the academies had already decided to blacklist him? Why did they insist on going after that crazy mare? Anger mixed with his frustration and he slammed a hoof down on his desk, then slumped, flopping over the desk. Butter Scotch glanced over at him, but opted to not call him out on his outburst and instead continue with the class.
When school was over, Silver moved to head directly home, but was intercepted by Soft Blush. "Oh, hey Soft... did you pass?"
Soft snorted softly, "But of course I did," she said as if it were obvious, "I declined. I'm not here to discuss that dull affair. I'm here to speak my support for you. That was simply dreadful the way they shut you out."
Another voice joined, Meadow Leaper, "That was so uncool."
Lily Jump joined in, "I just wanted to give you a hug! You looked so sad!"
Tumble snorted, "Want me to beat her up?"
Silver looked around. When had his friends all just... shown up? Oh god, was he losing his situational awareness? Maybe this was some kind of friendship magic. "Uh, thank you all." He gave a light smile, "I'm glad I have friends like you." He looked to Tumble, "No attacking ponies! She's a wizard even. You don't want to be turned inside-out."
Tumble grunted, but didn't argue. They all moved together on some unseen cue and Silver was embraced between all four of them. His worries retreated and a smile came to him. It really was nice having friends. He decided to share his worries, "What if they're all like that? I'll fail before I even get a chance to try. What if they let me, but quietly fail me anyway, no matter how good or bad I do?"
Lily Jump tilted her head, "Have you tried making up with Carrot Plate?"
Silver blinked. "But..." No, that was actually genius on some levels. He plopped down on his haunches. "I don't know if she'd even want to at this point. And she's... the one that attacked me."
Lily shrugged a little, "I dunno... It was just an idea. If she's not mad at you, her parents won't be mad at you, and then everypony else will calm down."
Meadow Leaper and Tumble seemed against the idea. Meadow shook his head, "You shouldn't have to apologize when you didn't even do anything wrong. They're being big, rich, brats."
Soft extended a hoof, "I'm afraid I simply must point out that this city is full of 'brats', and they stand side-by-side on any matter that involves the lower-born." She pointed at Silver, "You are a commoner. I don't say that as an insult, but you are, and they will ally against you without reservation."
Silver raised an ear, "I'm a squire of the court, does that help?"
All four stood still. Only their blinking eyes proved they were still alive.
"What?" asked Silver.
Meadow recovered first, "No way! You're too young. What would... No way!"
Soft glanced at Meadow and looked back at Silver, "I must agree with our friend. That is simply impossible. Whom do you serve?"
"Luna," said Silver. Warmth flowed through his body as he thought of her, bringing a strange sense of security and chasing away some of the despair.
Tumble laughed, "You are full of surprises, little colt. Why don't you get Luna to bust her chops then?"
Silver shook his head, "She tried..." A soft sigh escaped him and he rose to his hooves, "I should get home. Thanks everyone."
Waves were exchanged, and he continued on his way, though Tumble trailed behind. Silver looked over his shoulder, "If you're hoping to play games, we can't today."
Tumble raised a thick brow, "Why not? Too sad? It'll cheer you up."
Silver shook his head, "Luna took the computer to examine."
Tumble snorted, "Guess being a squire isn't all good. Want some company anyway?"
Silver smiled at Tumble, "Thanks... but I think I need some alone time." They parted ways and Silver Lining reached home without further incident.
Ah, the wonders of administrations. Can find out who his guardian and tutor is, apparently know a polarized court case, but can't find out that he's a Squire of the Princess and likely someone they would want to tack their name on.
5712702 No announcement was made of any kind about him becoming a squire, is the thing. The court case was public enough, to say nothing of Carrot Plate's parents likely fuming about it loudly at every social gathering they attended. Nopony but Celestia and Luna, of the court, know of his title.
I'd change that last part to be "which Tumble now appeared to be a full member of."
His computer "was" gone the next day.
The use of tense in this sentence is odd. I'd change the middle to "...was instead time spent trying to get down the letters..."
A "magic-related" mark. I'd also change "mark" to "cutie mark."
It seems better if you don't abbreviate "cutie mark" to mark. I can't say why, but that's the impression that I get.
Same thing here.
And here.
And here.
Ironically enough, I don't believe "ice water" is hyphenated.
They stand "side-by-side."
I see Soft as saying "whom" here.
Stylistic choice here, but shouldn't he say "Thanks everypony" instead?
No need to capitalize "squire" here.
5712715 You stay away from me with your logic and sense!
Also... isn't it... kinda wrong to deny someone the chance to even apply to a school because of a court case they filed?
5712721 Fixes applied! I rate most ponies as 80% 'anypony' and Silver is around 30%, rising up if he thinks he's being judged harshly on getting it wrong.
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There is a pegasus academy, run by the Wonderbolts
In a situation like this, where the nobility is allied against him, he might be wise to seek help from Fleur de Lis and Fancy Pants. They probably would have more power in this context than the princesses.
5712747 I didn't name her
5712725 Not exactly a random court filing. Some kid accused a well-established young mare of several severe crimes and had nothing to show for it at all. All his testimony sounded feeble and he had not a lick of evidence. Is it fair? Maybe not, but maybe the school doesn't want to risk some foal running off to drag one of their teachers to court over some imagined slight.
Troublemaker indeed.
5712754 Sexism! And classism! Sexy Classism! Wait... no, that's wrong...
But that's basically what it is. Just because he's not a noble it obviously can't be that she moved all the incriminating evidence.
5712803 Carrot Plate offered the sexy classism. All Silver had to do was thank her as he was whipped and she would have gladly reminded him of his low-born status while offering up sexy times.
So now we know the immediate effects of Luna's invasive soul-searching, to which the best summary I can give it this:
Congratulations, Luna. Your new name is Lyra Heartstrings.
Seriously, it's history repeating itself here. A mare finds Silver interesting (if flawed), she then decides to be "helpful" by casting invasive magic on him, and that magic results in him falling for her. Once again, he's been victimized by a female pony that just wants what's best for him. (I doubt Luna's magic is anywhere near as messy, but I have to wonder what this will do to his aetheric net now.)
Beyond that, it was interesting to see that the political fallout from Silver's attempt to prosecute Carrot Plate continue (even if it wasn't his choice). One can only wonder where it will stop, since I doubt any of the nobility will be too happy to hear that two of their own (Fleur and Fancy) are letting them live rent-free in their spring house. In the meantime, it looks like tutoring with Trixie will continue. That said, it's nice that Silver's friends are gathering around him - they're providing the necessary counterbalance for how bad things are getting.
In fact, it's notable how to some degree, everyone (Silver's adopted parents notwithstanding) seems to inadvertently make things worse for him, except for his new friends. Other than a Rough start with Tumble (see what I did there?), they've been available as friends unconditionally, representing Equestria at its best, as opposed to all of the crap he's had to put up with from everypony else.
5713037 In her defense, Silver is not filled with fantasies of starting a family and/or herd with Luna. She is still a big scary princess of supreme power that he should watch his words around, but there's something about her...
This actually has a lot less to do with her invasive magic than it does just putting her wrist up in his snout and having him sniff himself into a happy stupor. Trixie explained why this could be many chapters back in the last story, but nopony did much about it.
Luna is overdue to approach Celestia with her 'findings' and try to get a second hearing, but I think we're both on the same page with how successful that is likely to be. Luna also knows more about Silver and his old human ways than she likely wanted to know, though approaching Silver about them would involve first coming clean about what she did to get this knowledge.
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5713268 I was not aware of that! Go figure. Thanks.
5713290 she would probably handle him his own ass after that, with her being so much of a cunt? I'm not sure about calling her "cunt", but she did bad, real bad.
5713271 Heavy is credit to team!
5713855 The Heavy is a spy!
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Spiteful activities permeate even real life. If they can get away with it, they'll do it.
I like the way you think!! But even here the action tag comma gang are infiltrated.
Technical nobility. Luna and Celestia forgot...?
6814102 You can't forget what you never knew.
So Luna pinches the computer, with absolutely no idea how to use it, or turn it on for that matter.
First of what? Might want to explain who she is the first of, as I believe she's not first part of the week as it's now implying.
I'd recommend adding to be there, seemed to be against
Stupid nobles... Stupid Canterlot...
This broke my heart. I'm at the age where colleges start sending you letters to apply. Everyone I know has been getting tons of letters and I've only gotten one. When I asked they said it was because they had no interest in someone lazy. I showed them my test scores on the standardized tests, and my IQ, but they denied me anyways saying that because my freshman and sophomore years were really lazy, they didn't want me.
So I can relate with silver. Yet, he can fix that mistake....
OH, Wait! Hang on! I've got the perfect gif for this!
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In all honesty I am hooked on this story. It is now 12 minutes till midnight and I have been reading since nine. Well done sir!
At one point it says milennia instead of milennium which is an error that happens very often in stories.
Figures. The rich think they're better than everyone else. Burn all their money and have them start at zero with an average family to compete with and I know who will win.
Stay at one tense: use either "when did... show up" or "when had... shown up".
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I suppose you were looking for this. Or should have looked.