For as long as everypony can remember, Blueblood is a jerk. But one day, something between two beings changes everything.
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7491354 That's not a bad idea.
You should wear this often.
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Well, I enjoyed reading it.
Gosh dang it! We need to know what Blueblood did to them! U can't let it stop like thiiiiis
P.S. Love the story! Moar!
P.S.S. When will we see his love back in Ponyville again?
And oddly enough, he wasn't lying with that explanation.
didnt knew flurry heart is a four winged alicorn
7492314 What?
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Corrected, thanks.
Grief, because literally the person in front of them is a ghost. The person they remember is essentially dead. It's literally another person wearing a dead man's skin. Celestia and Luna seem to be overlooking this aspect of Blueblood personality change.
What about Flurry? I demand him to holding Flurry at least once!
And he better do funny faces in front of Luna, lets see how she react when he doesn't give a damn about making funny faces.
7492739 So that would make him a Ghost in a shell.
7495223 nice reference, and yes. He isn't the person they knew. Even hated. Sure a nice Blueblood is a improvement but he isn't Blueblood. He's a stranger on the same body. So yes, grief is appropriate on there part. Luna and Celestia are so long lived I think that a new personality for Blueblood is almost like having met another pony who looks like Blueblood after the original died.
7495416 Still, Celestia and Luna are pretty wise. Luna may eventually find the truth in Mark's dreams and Celestia could easily see the way the real Blueblood would speak and the way Mark speaks, some people use that to differentiate each other. So it's pretty clear that their just looking at a new person in a different body rather than the real one. They either knew already about it and hid it or their just dense.
Found this on a random search and read the whole thing in one sitting.
My first and overall impression is that this is a great story. And let me say "thank you" for writing it.
Here are some other thoughts.
First, english is apparently not your first language. Your word choice is poor and sometimes can get unintelligible. I recommend you get someone more familiar with the language to go through this and translate it to english.
Second, I normally do not recommend for anyone to ret-contheir work, but Redheart's claim of rape pisses me off to no end. Redheads was not raped. She just regrets sleeping with an asshole. Rape is a horrific crime where a person is sexually violated against their will. It destroys a person's sense of self, security, and trust. When pent ration is involved, it causes bruising and internal tearing. To Redheart, who willingly, probably even enthusiacticly, had sex with Belublood, a rape victim is a terrible insult to each and every person who has actually been raped.
Third, slow down. Too much is happening too fast. Let things at least start to settle before tossing the next curve ball into the story.
And finally, I'm not sure if I like the direction the story is taking. I REALLY enjoyed this as a slice of life with Mark as Blueblood. Just dealing with the issues involved there is more than enough for a great story. I'm not sure that this will translate well to this adventure plot that you have been hinting at.
Hmmmmmm
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Yeah I would say, she could end up traumatised