For as long as everypony can remember, Blueblood is a jerk. But one day, something between two beings changes everything.
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hmmm interesting, mostly because Nightmare Moon in a way wasn't never real, and was more of a 'persona' like a split personality that was born out of the hatred and sorrow of princess Luna, and there for is not actually…well 'alive' like in Yu-Gi-Oh with Marik, but you are telling me that gods here are so strong that a split personality can actually become a real living being that can die, and live? because that is awesome, I imagine Nightmare can't go to Luna, since she no longer has those dark feelings, so she will had to find a new host. Oh I will laugh so much if she ends up as some kind of ghost, and by accident ends up possessing one of Mark maids.
Also, spirt training inside the mind, I loved it, and like Luna say it sounds gentle and a good way to start their training, I can't wait to see what else do they have on their sleeve
Bru! Love the story! Waiting for next chapter!
P.S. You know? Sometimes I wish I didn't have this problem of making faces when I try to stiff a laugh in school. Being the 'always-deadserious-bored-sleepy-nonhappy-biggeroftheclass-hulkoftheschool-dontlookathimbad-weird-guy' it mades many people want to take a peak at what the fuck makes me smile so much-or tries to- xD.
You should have seen it!. Me being on the second floor, stick to the window reading when I hear a sound behind me, when I turn I saw the raising head of one of my classmates and when I saw him he was seen by the teacher cause it was weird of me moving out of place if not for going to the bathroom. Then called to the principal office and finally got like three moderate negatives.
Mein god, my life is weird. But I like it xD
So yeah, love your story. It makes people climb walls to see it? xD
its always easy forgiveness never like "ok i forgive you but im watching my back"
its always the same when the protagonist fucked over
No problems except for one thing, why was he so forgiving!!! I mean, he was essentially used and seduced by the wife of his new friend on orders from the princesses just because they expected him to stick his key in her ignition to prove a point.
I'd expect him to be cold for a couple of chapters to show how insulted he was.
It would be a good opportunity to focus about life in the mansion, have some interaction with the maids, introduce new characters and show he's a great deal better than the previous prince.
But this is your story, I just offered my feelings for this chapter.
Why is Death being a dick and unleashing something uncontrollable that might potentially kill a world and reveal 'Blueblood's' origins, ending the agreement just to 'test' him? If he gets found out because of something death did, that seems like going against the spirit of the agreement to interfere like that.
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Simply put, for fun.