Discord tricks Apple Bloom into getting a dick in the middle of estrus season. Hilarity ensues.
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The fun continues~
and more fillies made happy~
for a few days.
All I see in this story is a bunch of adults that need to suck it up and explain stuff to kids before somepony ends up hurt. (also Ill ship it)
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Indeedy! Though I can only speculate on how long it takes for fertilization to proceed enough that it begins to suppress estrus. It definitely will be some time before they have solid evidence of what their bodies are doing, if none of the adults ever manage to catch them.
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That is definitely the truth. Unfortunately (or fortunately) adults in this story don't always make the right decisions.
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I can't blame the adults entirely... a lot of it is simply their upbringing and past abuse, and the ridiculous coincidences cropping up as if some ...author wanted a bunch of foals to get away with unprotected sex. It's sort of a perfect storm.
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Technically for Apple Bloom it would be satyriasis. It's funny how their group dynamic is sort of shifting to Sweetie Belle as the leader.
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Oh, ponies are stretchy, don't be morbid. You'll be fighting a losing battle anyway, if you try to keep the fillies safe and just let the colts run around all willy nilly. Perhaps ponies evolved protective feelings for colts, so that in protecting them they would keep the fillies from dying. Doesn't have to make sense, just has to work.
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I've said before that I had sex ed that didn't teach anyone where babies came from. It does happen. Though, with the Internet it's pretty much impossible in our world for kids not to figure it out by the time they hit fertility. Haven't you ever seen all those high school dramas about the clueless and flustered teacher unable to properly teach sex-ed? And that's high school, not grade school! Why should this story be held to a different standard?
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She certainly hasn't had any tea on-camera... and she did mention having problems with buying it...
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While my society certainly isn't what you'd call normal, I don't think it's less realistic than most stories about love and romance. What about the society where men are inexplicably uncaring and aloof and unconcerned with sexual desires, so the female protagonists can freely fawn all over them without consequences? That's pretty unrealistic, but how many actual novels conform to it? What about fetish stories, where the protagonist goes and ties up and rapes like a million women who are all helpless waifs who are traumatized by sex, and nobody stops them? Heck there was a story here I was reading where Twilight got a dick and that was awesome, but then it mind controlled her and made her wax poetic about putting women in their place for like 3 chapters while all of her now nonsexual friends all end up in contrived circumstances to get raped into submission? Nobody was yelling about how unrealistic that was. There was another story recently where Bon-Bon announced surprise I'm pregnant with twins, and everyone's immediate reaction was to cry with tears of happiness. Who even does that?
Alright, I'm not complaining. Just saying that I don't understand why my story might feel too jarring to enjoy, if those have no problems. I am fairly sure it depends on the reader's predisposition to assuming certain behaviors as normal.
It's setting the bar a bit too high for a comedy, I'd say. I do my best to keep things consistent, but it's not hugely important that I give a dissertation on why worried granny ponies won't do a rigorous background check, before dragging in strange foals to try to coax her granddaughter out of a funk. It's already long enough, and some things are better left to connotation.
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I loved that part.
Mac's had a long, frustrating history of trying to keep the reins on Applejack during season. I'm fairly sure his reaction to catching Apple Bloom would be a LOT different.
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Oh please, by all means do not be aroused by that scene. I sure wasn't. It's fascinating trying to write an immersive scene about an act of joy, that you find joyless and repulsive. Instead of trying to find words for how beautiful it felt, I had to find words for how beautiful it didn't! And um... you're the first person to figure it out I'm so happy! I thought I wrote it wrong, and nobody could tell what Filthy was doing.
Thank you for the several comments! I may have sounded like they hurt me or made me angry, but I assure you I am absolutely elated that you'd offer me so much help here. I might not take your advice, stubbornly sticking with my weird idiosyncracies, but that's my problem not yours.