Discord tricks Apple Bloom into getting a dick in the middle of estrus season. Hilarity ensues.
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Innocent, needy CMC threesome is best threesome.
Applejack really shouldn't have dodged the question. The repercussions should be quite interesting in the end.
I noticed how close the adults keep getting. Let there be closure, don't just end the story with AppleBloom getting caught.
He looks like this:
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2013/135/e/b/r63_apple_family_by_gray_gold-d65bkjf.png
First Liza, now I bet Sweetie and Scoots are truly knocked up (they have been rutted twice). Applebloom's still a colt because of Discord (let's just face facts, I bet the Mane 6 took their time to go to Canterlot due to royal orders, and basically Discord fucked all of them and the Royal Sisters, but let the Mane 6 go back to Ponyville, leaving Discord to stay at the castle for the following week as the Sisters' royal living walking cock).
I'm also starting to think that Cheerilee is getting affected by colt Apple Bloom being around. And we can see that estrus is still in the air with Rarity basically rutting every stallion that stops at her boutique, Applejack still trying to hide her own estrus from colt Apple Bloom (probably incest issues), and Rainbow Dash thinking about getting plowed on a cloud, for starters.
And still the grown-ups are still basically ignoring or just not telling about what the fillies are going through because the mares are doing it too....
What is it gonna take? Every filly that has been through colt Apple Bloom showing up pregnant? Colt Apple Bloom getting caught in the act by another filly? What is it gonna take??
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Closure by... her not getting caught? Not sure if I follow. I did have a good idea for closure though. And yes, the CMC are like three peas in a pod. <3
Ohh, yes I wasn't planning on ending the moment she gets caught. That would mean finishing this story though, which would mean working less on the one that people actually like.
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Yes, that's right. At such a young age, girls know (poorly) how girls work, and boys know (poorly) how boys work. That's the idea, at any rate. Though, even about their own sex, some have a bit more knowledge than others. I tried to keep it subtle, like how Sweetie Belle is the one who heard you can call it a "cunny" (and thinks that's adorable), whereas Scootaloo was the one who learned the shorthand for "clit" and only through her did the other two pick it up. And maybe some... more significant things too...
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Don't forget about Archer, and Aura!
Oh no, she invites them over. It's all very clinical.
They've still got the school week ahead of them, then a weekend, and then exams! That's what it's gonna take for summer vacation to start. Oh wait, were you asking what it's gonna take, to pull the adults' heads out of their own rear ends? That might take some doing.
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He's going to love everypony in the yay including Featherweight
5805114 YEah, i was kinda vague, sorry.
I mean, don't just leave it with, 'OMG, Applebloom how many fillies have you got knocked up?' 'What's, knocked up sis?', The End. Don't just have Discord show back up and magical UNDO the whole story. Don't just have a 'well that happened', The End.
How do ALL the adults react? Will Applebloom take 'responsibility' if she does get a filly pregnant? What kind of family group will Applebloom have?
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I'm afraid that 'Bloom is probably sterile. All the fillies are going back into estrus, and Discord is supposed to be reformed andd merely mischievous rather than a dick (ahaha), so...
But on the bright side it might mean that in the end, after the adults are done scolding the kids and ask Discord what the hell, he might explain, and then offer to do the same for the adults. Leading to a Ponyville-wide orgy!
"So what's the moral here?"
"Don't have unprotected sex. Unless you made a deal with Discord, then you should have as much as possible."
...That or it's just the Moon Tea aftereffects.
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I think the story itself has the evidence that Bloom can impregnate mares and fillies. Case in point: Liza. Her symptoms and feelings are almost textbook for somepony that is pregnant. But to be fair, no one even said that any of the fillies found out to be knocked up, to the jury's out.