Going to comic-con. Didn't think I'd end up in equestria that for sure. Can't eat food, Can't drink anymore. Hell I can't even sleep. Well I guess that not true I do sleep but only for two days a month.
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That ending fills my mind with curiosity. The bp battle was awesome and Rin seems like an interesting character.
6117392 thanks ^^
6117392 Thank you :) I'm also glad you liked the fight. When we were working on it I was worried Rin's tactical way of fighting was making it go too quickly, especially at the end.
6117532 I got the same feeling to but I didn't want to drag it out going on and on, I also didn't want to just fill it with just the two displaced killing a endless horde so ya. ^^
6117705 lol! Sorry but that's just how Rin is. She's a puzzle solver and uses strategy over brute force. Though to be honest with all the hype about that thing I thought that last move would have badly damaged it but left it more vulnerable to attacks so it wouldn't take forever. But still fully capable of fighting. Didn't think it would be the finisher. XD
6117784 Who know the skull's of hate could possess someone and try to get back to Ax world.
6118876 okay what was spelled wrong?
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6528142 Thanks for that.
Shit, Deathjack! KILL IT! KILL IT WITH FIRE!
6696258 Or ice. Or stones. Or Russel Wilson.
7616575 or chuck Norris ;3
That was fun.
I see that Asphyxious polished sister's gears, eh?
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How about Cluck Norris? Because he exists in real life too.
First off, if she imprisoned him, shouldn't the plot convenient incompetent version of Celestia be responsible for his wellbeing while under her jurisdiction?
Second off is fair trial, and the fact that solitary confinement is an inhuman punishment that has no place in civilized society, let alone the 'idyllic utopia' that is Equestria. ALSO, the 'misunderstanding' trope is filth, and you should feel bad about yourself for using it.
Third off is suing Celestia for what she did. Not forgiving her so
easilyunreasonably."You ask me to give up on my hatred of the person who ruined me. Tell me, what exactly are you willing to give up in return?" is one possible thing Ax could have responded with. Of course, giving her a good deconstruction would be in order as well. Verbally tear her world apart, make her feel like the reprehensible embarrassment she is.
Also Luna should have been more disappointed with her sister when she confronted her after finding out the truth. A lot more disappointed.