Going to comic-con. Didn't think I'd end up in equestria that for sure. Can't eat food, Can't drink anymore. Hell I can't even sleep. Well I guess that not true I do sleep but only for two days a month.
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well looks like this will end in a gigantic war.
THE WORLD WILL DROWN IN BLOOD AND FIRE!
Sorry XP
Nice chapter good to see it ain't dead
5785918 lol it okay things will get crazy
5785936 not likely just take me some time to work everything out
5786302 oh i cant wait XD
your stories are quite entertaining please keep up the good work
5787715 thank you ^^
The stories rather good but you really need an Editor. Also, with Lord Toruk did you mean Lord Tirek?
5793896 no lord Toruk is like the main bad guy in the warmachine universe. He is also the one who made the Cryx army's. I thought it would be cool if he was trapped with in the void and is trying to get out into the world of the living.
5793896 his also a demigod dragon.
5786351 I have to agree, while it is a good story there are so many spelling and grammar errors it just makes it hard to read.
For example, you had this Poison character hear this, "HE IS HERE TO STOP YOU, DO NOT LET HIM ENTER FEAR". Fear?... I think you mean Here. This is just one of the many errors that can be found, not only in this chapter, but in the rest of the story as well.
If you need help finding an editor just go to the groups tab and search 'proof readers' or 'editors'. There are many groups with thousands of people willing to help you out. You need only to look and you shall find.
5818534 I meant that as one word but had no idea how to spell it.
5818742 'enter fear'...I do believe you mean interfere...
The Idea of the story is good. But please you should get somebody who can help you fix the spelling errors.
Really liked the story, it has soul. But the delivery is terrible, too many typoes and since i am using text to speech it kills it dead. Also it is quite confusing how the POW jumps about so much.
I'm guessing you based Poison blade off Mouratorba?
6695405 The what?
Poison most cute, nobody hurts Griffies and lives!
Hmm, fewer errors than in the pervious chapters, a marked improvement.