Going to comic-con. Didn't think I'd end up in equestria that for sure. Can't eat food, Can't drink anymore. Hell I can't even sleep. Well I guess that not true I do sleep but only for two days a month.
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This chapter was great. I really liked the shenanigans Asphyxious got with Amy and RD.
5878265 thanks it was fun ^^
5878297 Thanks again for pointing those out to me ^^
I love the story, but the grammar is slowly killing me. Also would it be possible for you to post links to images of the warjacks you're talking about at the time?
5895077 Sure if I can find them, I'll get to work on that. ^^
You're shitting me. This crazy chick punches a guy in the face and then intends to grab a beer from his fridge? Wow, that is "fuck you" levels of disrespect. Amy's personality sounds like it was copied from a mental patient on tumblr and everything she talks about sounds as if it was ripped out of a masturbation fic. She has all of the mary sue-ness of Hellsing Abridgeds Alucard with none of the hilarity or macabre charm instead deciding to replace it with wet dogshit.
multiple personalities, drinks dash's blood which makes them both horny, literally fucking can't die, she's a mary sue in every sense of the word. But that would arguably be forgivable unless of course she contributes nothing to the plot. Replaying this entire chapter without her makes nothing change so yeah, she contributes nothing to the plot. Also if she's going to be performing miracles at the cost of memories then why does she need to stab herself? That makes no sense, especially when they are being fed to the being living in her head.
Also what happened to Asphyxious? He kind of turned into a walking Vagina in the last few chapters. I mean he can fight a fuck huge nephilim protector but a chick in a red dress is too much to handle?
Finally, and possibly most grating, is that Asphixious just said he needed an army last chapter and then just finds one? Just fucking FINDS that shit? "Oh sorry I guess i must've lost that army of sentient death machines, Whoopsie doodles!" Then they just turn right on like aging is nothing. Khador is a faction that has cortexes that are pretty old and the warjacks glitch into Khornate berserkers intermittently. Those cortexes are maybe a few hundred years old which is significantly less time than it would take for a new race to build up to power or even the 992 years that Asphixious has been caged.
Now instead if he found a Cygnar Stormwall or Khador Conquest that would make this a little more believable. Then he could refurbish it with his necrotech and still be a force to be reckoned with without having to find an entire army in one go. But I will ask this, why does he need an army? He can just summon a few displaced and then win any engagement.
Holy kraken! Eques and Iron kingdoms as one world?! Then what happened to Cygnar, Khador, and the rest of Immoram?
FLUFFY THE DESTROYER OF WORLDS
Interesting.
And I love that name, Fluffy.
I see the hellsing ultimate abridged reference
I’m just waiting for them to name it something stupid like bob so whenever they need him they just say send out bob
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oh my god
I'm pretty sure he doesn't have one any more
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you're right have a cookie. 🍪