Going to comic-con. Didn't think I'd end up in equestria that for sure. Can't eat food, Can't drink anymore. Hell I can't even sleep. Well I guess that not true I do sleep but only for two days a month.
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Man, Asphyxious really got lucky with that Celestia.
5898618 yes he did XD
0:53
5898692 yes it all in good fun ^^
Honestly, I don't know what the fk is going on! Where are these characters suddenly coming from, when did they arrive? When did the timeskips happen? I just got so lost, I keep thinking I missed a chapter
^chick
^His best
^not sure but shouldn't that be 'thy' or something?
^don't know which
how does a robot get laid?
5899504 Sorry about that I'll fix that when I have the time.
5899820 It Pinkie pie that all you need to know.
5899685 Thanks again for pointing those out. Some I did see before but I thought I'd just fix it later. As for 'thy' thing, I have no idea if that a real word. Anyway thanks again. ^^
5899504 Also this may help you understand where he whet and how he got back. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/215331/42/the-dungeon-master-of-equestria/celestial-retribution
5901243 but he dosint... how did maud do it to......how.......
We are sorry but brain.ex has stopped working plz return later and try again.
5901389 I don't know ever
5906820 Thanks for the info, I'm not all that good with details it kind of one of my weakness. But I will go back and explain what happened to them in the next bit okay. :)
Wha ha ha .... Brain.exe shutdown
Rebooting in progress....
Too many crossovers, just too many.
5901389 Pinkie pie does that.
Best chapter ever.
I sadly find this story to be an example of why one never should integrate displaced collabs in their stories.
OH SWEET MOTHER OF GOD NOT MOLESTIA!!! *PANICS*
Mmmmm, Molestia.
Honestly, I don't like such crossovers where the crossover characters act all high and mighty while treating the others around like idiots (Gilgamesh to the protagonist with the idiot remark or Crossover Celestia saying things like she can hardly believe this is a Luna counterpart of her sister). Worst are verbal smackdowns in my opinion. It just feels like if an almighty reader pops into the story to set the head of a character straight that hasn't a moral highground or made a mistake. It is jarring really and a bit irritating too. I mean, such characters that made mistakes in the past normally have a reason for it which either lies in a misunderstanding, but also simply in the need to have this character as an adversary for the story. It feels like it is actually taking away an important part of the story.
That is why I think one needs to be careful with crossovers. They can backfire, drastically.
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I've started to reread this story and it has come to my attention that there are way to many crossovers and it can be difficult at time to discern who is talking it is a great story but perhaps next time you make a story you should lessen the amount of crossovers. This is of course my opinion so you can take it with a grain of salt as I know this is one of your earlier work and as I have not read your other stories I do not know if you have changed this.