I was literally expecting the whole "Sweetie sees Spike with X female, cries, and then gets angry at him, therefore having a fight with him and then break up with him" Cliche', but this is 10x much better.
Its like "For Whom the Sweetie Belle Toils" but even more Cathartic and Ironic as a concept. Good work my man.............Good work indeed!!!!
Well, that was a unexpectedly refreshing surprise. Sweetie Belle is so nice. I do find it hard to believe that Spike genuinely believed what Sweetie said, it was just girly gossip after all. We joke and exaggerate all the time while doing that. Never thought that Spike would be the one acting immature there, especially after being suspicious of Silver Spoon.
A soundproof room is a blatant lie. There truly isn't one of those anymore. If you are gonna try to keep a secret, it seems to either be 100% in the open with your words, or don't say a damn thing at all....because in this day and age it only takes about two or three simple words to make shit go crazy.
And I'm with all that have seen this: This is a shocker.....At first glance, it looked to be the classic girl#2 trying to subtly seduce the boyfriend of her rival because she had looks for him as well. But then to completely turn that around so that Sweetie knows Spoonie needs some comfort and wants to be her friend....only to fuck that up with a statement that should have not slipped.
Sweetie Belle needs to talk to Rarity before she attempts to get Spike's trust back. If there isn't somepony else for Sweetie Belle to speak to other than her friends (honestly, AB and Scoots can make a issue worse--not their fault, though) it's her big sister, especially when there appears to have a huge messy romantic disaster on her hooves.
Thank you for not taking this the way we were supposed to expect it to go - I loathe those sort of plots.
This, however? This is very reasonable for Spike to get upset about, particularly since for as much as Sweetie knows he had the hots for Rarity... Spike also knows that Sweetie has been insanely jealous re: Rarity for just as long.
Didn't see that coming.
Wow..............................
I was literally expecting the whole "Sweetie sees Spike with X female, cries, and then gets angry at him, therefore having a fight with him and then break up with him" Cliche', but this is 10x much better.
Its like "For Whom the Sweetie Belle Toils" but even more Cathartic and Ironic as a concept. Good work my man.............Good work indeed!!!!
Well, that was a unexpectedly refreshing surprise. Sweetie Belle is so nice. I do find it hard to believe that Spike genuinely believed what Sweetie said, it was just girly gossip after all. We joke and exaggerate all the time while doing that. Never thought that Spike would be the one acting immature there, especially after being suspicious of Silver Spoon.
Blind-sided in the best way possible.
Good job mate.
A soundproof room is a blatant lie. There truly isn't one of those anymore. If you are gonna try to keep a secret, it seems to either be 100% in the open with your words, or don't say a damn thing at all....because in this day and age it only takes about two or three simple words to make shit go crazy.
And I'm with all that have seen this: This is a shocker.....At first glance, it looked to be the classic girl#2 trying to subtly seduce the boyfriend of her rival because she had looks for him as well. But then to completely turn that around so that Sweetie knows Spoonie needs some comfort and wants to be her friend....only to fuck that up with a statement that should have not slipped.
Sweetie Belle needs to talk to Rarity before she attempts to get Spike's trust back. If there isn't somepony else for Sweetie Belle to speak to other than her friends (honestly, AB and Scoots can make a issue worse--not their fault, though) it's her big sister, especially when there appears to have a huge messy romantic disaster on her hooves.
That one flew over my head, gg man, gg.
What a twist!!!! My sincere applause for you, this was incredible and completely out of the cliche
Jeep the good work
I didn't see that one coming. Nice twist, can't wait to see what happens next.
I wonder if pearl belle have something to say for this situation
Every couple has there arguments, and soon they cool off and have make up sex.
Thank you for not taking this the way we were supposed to expect it to go - I loathe those sort of plots.
This, however? This is very reasonable for Spike to get upset about, particularly since for as much as Sweetie knows he had the hots for Rarity... Spike also knows that Sweetie has been insanely jealous re: Rarity for just as long.
Noticed a few errors, biggest one being the use of quotation marks within quotation marks.
Now I expected this, but not like this. Well done!