... Really? I know he wants what's best for her, but to go through all that and leave without a proper kiss? It's a small thing, but still, every moment counts.
Sweetie's 'bad girl' side is more adorable than sexy to me and still loving this story. Please tell me that stallion at the end wasn't Flash. If it is at least keep it as only the 'stallion' with no names. It would unfortunately put me off this story heavily, but at the end of the day its your choice. Hope to read more and carry on with the good work.
5980772 it has to do with age really. Spike is about as old as Sweetie Belle, Rarity is at most fifteen to twenty years his senior both age and mentally. Spike may grow bigger but mentally he will always be younger. He grew bigger when his hoarding instinct kicked in but it seems his IQ lowered heavily to basic cunning animal instinct. Course it worked for him. But in reality Sweetie Belle is far more appropriate age wise. Rarty will just have to find herself someone, then again I kind of doubt she ever will. He is a baby dragon after all.
5981099 I don't think Rarity is 15 years Spike's senior. The Cutie Mark flashback episode shows Rarity was in elementary school when Spike was born, and Twilight was just getting into magic school. At best Rarity is likely somewhere between 6-9 years older then Spike max.
6570387 We have no clue as to actual ages for the girls but as getting Cutie Marks is supposed to be a analogue to puberty. Generally at least between 10-14 years of age. So low side Rarity is still 10 years older than Spike and Spike has a much slower maturation rate. Plus the girls ages is spread at least a year apart. Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie are a year apart after all. And I have always thought Rarity might be the eldest of the Mane Six.
6570432 I too believe that Rarity is the oldest, and I also think Twilight might be the youngest since she was just entering school while most if not all the others were already in school. It's also why I don't think using cutie marks as an analogue for puberty is a good idea, since again, Twilight got her mark when she was just entering school.
6570630 True, but all the others were in school as near as we can tell when they got there marks. Twilight may have been a early bloomer, the quintessential 10-year old puberty. Plus she may have had earlier schooling before she tried joining Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns. You don't just send a student off without the basics after all and expect them to pass a entrance exam! The others were a year or two older making them analogues to age groups 11-13, a more normal age bracket.
This still places the girls physically at least a decade older than Spike and with shorter lifespans. Spike himself has a much longer lifespan. Good money when Spike hits his Teenage years, the girls will be Mrs Cakes Age and mothers of there own.
YAY!!! update!!!!
... Really? I know he wants what's best for her, but to go through all that and leave without a proper kiss? It's a small thing, but still, every moment counts.
A small kiss? He almost rutted her like he was a cat in heat earlier! She has that little memory to remember. Good chapter, look forward to more!
Sweetie's 'bad girl' side is more adorable than sexy to me and still loving this story. Please tell me that stallion at the end wasn't Flash. If it is at least keep it as only the 'stallion' with no names. It would unfortunately put me off this story heavily, but at the end of the day its your choice. Hope to read more and carry on with the good work.
5980772 it has to do with age really. Spike is about as old as Sweetie Belle, Rarity is at most fifteen to twenty years his senior both age and mentally. Spike may grow bigger but mentally he will always be younger. He grew bigger when his hoarding instinct kicked in but it seems his IQ lowered heavily to basic cunning animal instinct. Course it worked for him. But in reality Sweetie Belle is far more appropriate age wise. Rarty will just have to find herself someone, then again I kind of doubt she ever will.
He is a baby dragon after all.
Spike and Sweetie are so close that every recess they fooling around like it's their job.
5981099 I don't think Rarity is 15 years Spike's senior. The Cutie Mark flashback episode shows Rarity was in elementary school when Spike was born, and Twilight was just getting into magic school. At best Rarity is likely somewhere between 6-9 years older then Spike max.
6570387 We have no clue as to actual ages for the girls but as getting Cutie Marks is supposed to be a analogue to puberty. Generally at least between 10-14 years of age. So low side Rarity is still 10 years older than Spike and Spike has a much slower maturation rate. Plus the girls ages is spread at least a year apart. Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie are a year apart after all. And I have always thought Rarity might be the eldest of the Mane Six.
6570432 I too believe that Rarity is the oldest, and I also think Twilight might be the youngest since she was just entering school while most if not all the others were already in school. It's also why I don't think using cutie marks as an analogue for puberty is a good idea, since again, Twilight got her mark when she was just entering school.
6570630 True, but all the others were in school as near as we can tell when they got there marks. Twilight may have been a early bloomer, the quintessential 10-year old puberty. Plus she may have had earlier schooling before she tried joining Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns. You don't just send a student off without the basics after all and expect them to pass a entrance exam! The others were a year or two older making them analogues to age groups 11-13, a more normal age bracket.
This still places the girls physically at least a decade older than Spike and with shorter lifespans. Spike himself has a much longer lifespan. Good money when Spike hits his Teenage years, the girls will be Mrs Cakes Age and mothers of there own.
Hm... it seems like Sweetie knows more about Spike's insecurities, and what's holding him back. than Twilight.
Not that that's that surprising, but it is surprising that Twilight thinks it's about Sweetie and not about Spike.