Growing apples has been in the Apple family for generations, and Applebloom wants to become something more than a farm pony. She is about to realize her sister is already a lot more than that. Welcome to Madam Orange's Service, Applebloom.
5020124 I think I wrote her together for all my fics, and you are the first (counting my proofreaders) to point out that. The funny thing is, you are right!
5021540 Yes, you are right. This orange mare that has a Southern accent is totally believable.
Now for the serious reply. As I stated, the timetable is a bit forward opposed to the canon. Besides, if you give the story a chance until the next chapter, you might find it believable.
The pair enjoyed their dinner together, as even prince Blueblood began to lose his self-absorbed bubble, seemingly feeling safe in her presence. Madam always had a great joke to tell, and her body was a sight to be seen.
Hmm. Maybe I'm reading too much into this sentence, but that does kinda sound like his usual manner is a bit of a defence mechanism.
Just how close is Manehatten to Ponyville anyway?
5018678 They are actually quite far apart, according to most maps I've seen.
5018678 I'll tell you how close it isn't: Close Enough that you can Drive there in a single night.
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Then again, considering they have cars in this fic, it's possible they have Motorways & Express trains, so it's probably not that unlikely.
I really like this. Liked, favourited and commented. I can't wait to see what comes next.
don't do that
it's Apple Bloom
5020124 I think I wrote her together for all my fics, and you are the first (counting my proofreaders) to point out that. The funny thing is, you are right!
5020129 I used to do it all the time, don't sweat it
just fix it k
Yes! I have found another elusive applejack/prince blueblood fic even if it seems so far just revolved on him wanting her physically for now.
makes no sense for AJ's canon personality which you plainly reference, is totally unbelievable.
5021540 Yes, you are right. This orange mare that has a Southern accent is totally believable.
Now for the serious reply. As I stated, the timetable is a bit forward opposed to the canon. Besides, if you give the story a chance until the next chapter, you might find it believable.
5021289 He is a bit of spoiled brat... but he might learn a thing or two after we are done.
5021806 My avatar should tell you I will be happy with this.
Well, this shall be quite interesting to read. I enjoyed the first chapter and I will enjoy the remainder of the story. I'll be watching this.
More I need more
That awkward moment when I want to read more, yet I don't so that you'll work on your other fics.
Hmm. Maybe I'm reading too much into this sentence, but that does kinda sound like his usual manner is a bit of a defence mechanism.
5068716 Maybe...
Hmm....Okay, you have my attention....
hope u update soon
5078414 I am writing the next chapter, should be ready to be pre-read sometime in the first two weeks of October.
Excited for the next chapter