As for the chapter (7), nicely done in the subtle(r) portrayal in how things are starting taking a Dark(er) turn, yet also still keeping within the Romance theme (but in the darker sense).
5625631 I didn't think you were. I meant emotionally. Pinkie is a self-sacrificing pony, so while she wants Carrot she wouldn't want Mrs. Cake to lose her husband and be sad, so the answer is a threesome.
... Unless the Pinkie/Cakes story arc can be guaranteed a happy ending - and no emotional explosions - I'm going to have to skip future chapters involving it.
A shiver ran along Pinkie’s body as the sausage in her hands twitched in her hands.
A little bit redundant, don't you think~? Anyways Jumbled, nice to see you're not dead... If you need anything, then feel free to message me as I'd be more than happy to help. xD
5638857 Well, the thing is that the potion isn't even really effecting her now, nor would it make someone stalkish.(better throw up spoilers) What has happened is that Pinkie, who has suffered rejection after rejection for not being a good mate, or very sexy, or too random for anyone to like, suddenly has the stallion who she adores the most telling her that she would be a perfect mate. In her head, she sees (for now) no problem with this and therefore is trying to do all she can to get his attention past the father daughter relationship they have always had. Hence why she researched and then acted to make him see her as a sexual icon again. I hope that makes you feel a bit better, or worse, about what I've done with Pinkie.
5638877 Oh, I wasn't comlaining. I was givng my interpretation of whythe pony who lives to give smiles might be wiloing to hurt Mrs. Cake.
(As a veteran CakePie lover, I vote for a happy bisexual triad!)
Obviously, you have a bit more to say here than I do. ;)
Though now I picture Pinkie serving Cup a cupcake made with Very Special Ingredients from the part of the basement where they keep the rat poison and saying something like: "I make so many other ponies smile... it's my turn now."
5639024 Wait her first name is Cup? I will have to remember this. Like I have said in the past though, I will not do Pinkamena in this. Simply isn't the nature of the story and I think my current idea is more interesting.
5625631 Wait, since when did Pinkamena mean murderous Pinkie Pie? I mean, I always took it to mean depressed, slightly unpredictable Pinkie Pie, but never murderous! Is this Cupcakes on the brain again?
Also, I need to clear one thing up about this universe: is this potion ever going to cause a stir? Because it seems like it's been out there for over a week, and it's all over Equestria. I'm just wondering if anyone higher up plans to take any action to stop this happening. I mean, Celestia must give a shit, mustn't she? She can't seriously not know.
5646062 I suppose that is true. When I say Pinkamena, I am talking the murderous deranged Pinkie. Depressed Pinkie is a very real possibility. Sorry for the confusion.
Comment posted by NebulaNyx deleted Feb 28th, 2015
5620156
Good to see this story continue.
As for the chapter (7), nicely done in the subtle(r) portrayal in how things are starting taking a Dark(er) turn, yet also still keeping within the Romance theme (but in the darker sense).
I know this is clop but Pinkie would never want to hurt anybody. I think she would work to get Mrs. Cake to accept a threesome.
5625629 I tried very hard to make sure the end wasn't leaning towards Pinkamena. I am not going murder route, promise.
5625631 I didn't think you were. I meant emotionally. Pinkie is a self-sacrificing pony, so while she wants Carrot she wouldn't want Mrs. Cake to lose her husband and be sad, so the answer is a threesome.
...
Unless the Pinkie/Cakes story arc can be guaranteed a happy ending - and no emotional explosions - I'm going to have to skip future chapters involving it.
A little bit redundant, don't you think~? Anyways Jumbled, nice to see you're not dead... If you need anything, then feel free to message me as I'd be more than happy to help. xD
5625652
I think she's being manipulated by the potion more than she should be.
5638744 Just to check, what do you mean by that?
5638766
The potion shouldn't be making her obsessively stalkery, but she's well on her way!
5638857 Well, the thing is that the potion isn't even really effecting her now, nor would it make someone stalkish.(better throw up spoilers) What has happened is that Pinkie, who has suffered rejection after rejection for not being a good mate, or very sexy, or too random for anyone to like, suddenly has the stallion who she adores the most telling her that she would be a perfect mate. In her head, she sees (for now) no problem with this and therefore is trying to do all she can to get his attention past the father daughter relationship they have always had. Hence why she researched and then acted to make him see her as a sexual icon again. I hope that makes you feel a bit better, or worse, about what I've done with Pinkie.
5638877
Oh, I wasn't comlaining. I was givng my interpretation of whythe pony who lives to give smiles might be wiloing to hurt Mrs. Cake.
(As a veteran CakePie lover, I vote for a happy bisexual triad!)
Obviously, you have a bit more to say here than I do. ;)
Though now I picture Pinkie serving Cup a cupcake made with Very Special Ingredients from the part of the basement where they keep the rat poison and saying something like: "I make so many other ponies smile... it's my turn now."
5639024 Wait her first name is Cup? I will have to remember this. Like I have said in the past though, I will not do Pinkamena in this. Simply isn't the nature of the story and I think my current idea is more interesting.
5629275 I can only guaranty a happy ending and no Pinkamena. Past that, where would the fun be?
5639079
Can you guarantee no emotional explosions, no divorce, and no broken hearted Pinkie?
5639065
I'm pretty sure that's been established in canon, yeah. Back in some of the earlier episodes where she shows up with Carrot.
Could be wrong, but Cup is what virtually everybody calls her at least.
As for the Pinkamena bit - agreed, no Pinkamena is just dandy.
5639095
I'd think emotional explosions of some sort are almost guaranteed, honestly.
5625631 Wait, since when did Pinkamena mean murderous Pinkie Pie? I mean, I always took it to mean depressed, slightly unpredictable Pinkie Pie, but never murderous! Is this Cupcakes on the brain again?
Also, I need to clear one thing up about this universe: is this potion ever going to cause a stir? Because it seems like it's been out there for over a week, and it's all over Equestria. I'm just wondering if anyone higher up plans to take any action to stop this happening. I mean, Celestia must give a shit, mustn't she? She can't seriously not know.
5646062 I suppose that is true. When I say Pinkamena, I am talking the murderous deranged Pinkie. Depressed Pinkie is a very real possibility. Sorry for the confusion.
5629275
Same.