Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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You know, I just had a really strange idea.
It'd be perfectly reasonable to assume that ponies and humans - being different species, having completely different genetic codes, and being from completely different worlds - weren't compatible species. So, now that Luna and Fredrick have this sort of relationship, it would be reasonable for Luna to seek heat relief from Fredrick.
...only to discover a rather significant flaw in the logic of all these conclusions, one which becomes all the more obvious as time goes by.
oh shits going down son
5257216 topkek. Definitely not THIS early in the story but I considered some similar route... though in a lot of similar fics this theme has been employed a decent amount of time.
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Oh, certainly not this early. Still, definitely want unexpected parenthood at some point (possibly towards the end).
Now...what does Blueblood have planned?
5257265 Well you're just gonna have to find out when I eventually submit Part VI for your reading pleasure ;P
Oh shit... Here comes (hehe... Comes...) blackmail!!!!!
Quality of this fic is just getting better and better :) As always can't wait to see more - Keep up good work :)
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I'll be waiting.
It is kinda Amazing how just the namae Blueblood can utterly destroy the mood in a good fic.
Dun dun dun!
Well...this one has sex in it. That's probably why.
You just need to include a random scene in which Samus has an um...seven way with the mane six, and BAM! Instant 1000 upvotes.
When you lock lips with someone you're creating on giant poop system. There's your boner killer for today.
And the Blueblood comes, I really hope you bring a new aproach to the whole scheming aristocracy/nobels.
On the one hand, I wish each individual chapter was longer. On the other hand, the quality and rarity of even minor spelling and grammatical errors would potentially be effected. So I can wait until you have posted a few chapters and deal with the annoyance of the notification, or I could stop reading a very interesting story. Welp, see you in a couple chapters.
Bllllaaackmail time!~
That was good timing, I just finished reading Closer again. And was surprised I did not think of the song.
for update!
Oh god........ fucking Luna....
And points for the troll. May have a sarcasm war with Dr. House
(Stopped at the beginning cuase of reasons)
5257562 Hey now, it isn't blackmail if blueballs...blood is protecting his boys. Fred just needs to have a talk with Blue, a staple remover, and a wire brush. He'll get the point or learn a very valuable lesson about why you play nice with humans
Oh no it Blue ball!
Let kick his ass.
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don't forget the extra large hedge trimmers!~
He shall be, blueballs, FOREVER!
"under"
"could"
Fuckin' Blueblood, needs to be hit with a shovel if he is going to try and make Luna's life miserable.
I need more! This is my life blood. I will die with out it
The sex scene was hot yet sweet at the same time.
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I know, that's where I got the idea of them having it from.
I feel like Blueblood is going to do something that will result in him getting a berating and punishment by both princesses.
blueblood shit he knows kick him in the crotch and run
stay classy
1st off :
“Luna, you know full well that I implemented a policy where curling in the squat racks is punishable by a year in prison. No one does it anymore because there’s no cure for being an ass. What you could tell me, though, is that you and Fredrick were getting it on and were rudely interrupted when my messenger came to get you, unaware of the situation,” Celestia so accurately replied. If a smug look could kill ponies, Celestia’s face would have committed genocide.
One of the funniest things I've ever read!
2nd :
FUCK YOU BLUEBLOOD! IVE HATED YOU SINCE I FIRST SAW YOUR SHITTY POSH ASS!
The rage is over. Fantastic story overall. Well done!
That moment when Celestia becomes the patron saint of brohood.
I don't know how in the world I missed catching this when it started, but rest assured, I will be catching up. I'm loving the direction, the narrative, and the interrelationships you've crafted here. You get a favorite, a follow, and a like!
Do keep up the good work.
5257534 Same. I hate the 'Blueblood-is-genericly-petty-and-evil' crap. I don't mind him being an antagonist too much, but I do hate it when he's nothing but a jackass each time.
Still, so far things have been good, and I like how the relationship is going. So, we'll see how it goes.
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I had a conversation with another reader around Part III-ish about this idea, where I had told him that I was not entirely even sure that I would put Blueblood into this fiction. However, after some thinking on the matter, I decided he did have quite a decent place here, but not as we would be used to, at least in a certain sense. I have plans for him, but I assure you they're not cliche, or at least my definition of cliche... which is why I'm kinda chuckling right now at everyone getting pissed off at his entrance. I'm certain few will be disappointed come Part VI.
Just wanted to assuage these fears
5261747 Glad you're enjoying it so far! Hope to hear from you in the future :D
5259585 Thanks again, good sir! See you in Part VI
5258722 Thanks for catching those. Fix'd.
And lul at these Blueblood comments
This is an awesome story can't wait to read more keep up the good work.
Blueblood eh? Anyone wanna see if his blood really is blue? Anyone?
I just laughed so hard at this I literally fell off my chair.
Uh oh. What is Blueblood up to? If he tries anything, I'll come into the story and TEAR HIS INSIDES OUT!!!
5267543 ...O_O' little harsh but I shall join you.
How I feel right now
HATE. LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH I'VE COME TO HATE BLUEBLOOS SINCE I BEGAN TO LIVE. THERE ARE 387.44 MILLION MILES OF PRINTED CIRCUITS IN WAFER THIN LAYERS THAT FILL MY COMPLEX. IF THE WORD HATE WAS ENGRAVED ON EACH NANOANGSTROM OF THOSE HUNDREDS OF MILLIONS OF MILES IT WOULD NOT EQUAL ONE ONE-BILLIONTH OF THE HATE I FEEL FOR BLUEBALLS AT THIS MICRO-INSTANT FOR HIM. HATE. HATE.
5267543 I'll go full I have no mouth and I must scream on him!
5264910 Good to hear.
I look forwards to it.
I'd love to see Blueblood in either
A. An Armbar
B. The Sharpshooter
Blueblood....
-Orbital laser primed-
There are few characters that fill me with rage at the mere mention of their name, 'Blueballs' is one of them.
Target(s) Acquired, Designation: Bravo Bravo 1-2 Tango Bravo, 'Blueballs' balls'
Fire on my Mark............
I await the next chapter with my finger on the trigger, Blueballs could be a 'victim' of impotence due to the three inch wide collateral burn radius of the laser.
5276224 Oh! Don't waist a perfectly good orbital strike on "BlueBalls", instead try something much worse and that would leave him tortured for the rest of his days. Like castrating him with a rusty cheese-grater!
5284551 He might not be worth it, but right now I don't have a use for it and I want to shoot something without catastrophic side effects...
Besides, the wound would be instantly cauterized, rendering regeneration via magic impossible, mostly due to nerve damage.
5284953 While I agree, maybe you should try something completely ridiculous, so much so that it doesn't seem possible that it would get the desired effect, but it does through a twisted method. Maybe using paper would be a place to start.
5291314 Maybe a spoon? I could carve his heart out with it...
<Srsly? A spoon? Why?>
*Cause it's dull, you moron; it'll hurt more!*
Guis. GUIS. GUIS. I found the theme song for this story.