• Member Since 8th Jan, 2014
  • offline last seen Apr 23rd, 2016

Starfall13


Artist and writer, also an editor if you need one. Formally known as SoMLP13.

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Princess Luna just wants to remember, for immortals treasure their memories and the castle in the Everfree is just one memory she can't lose, no matter the cost.

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Comments ( 7 )
CWA

Thrilling. :o Do Continue!

You get bonus points for nicknaming Celestial something other than Tia. :twilightsmile:

You wouldn't DARE kill Luna!

4895133 You'll just have to keep reading to find out.

4895195 suspense!!!

Get yourself an editor, mate! Is my hearty advice. The errors you have are not obvious, to my mind, but more in the way of missing words and tense/grammatical issues. An editor would help a lot.

That being said, this story has a great deal of promise, and I like the way you develop Luna through memories. I'm deeply curious as to where you are taking the plot. Please, do go on. :rainbowdetermined2:

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