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Good to see your work once more sir, now i play the waiting game for the next one.
I was so happy to this updated!!!!
Great chapter. Had to wince while reading about poor Raymond's leg though.
Also, the whole AJ x Raymond thing is pretty funny
Keep it up man, your characterizations are most definitely your strength. I am sad and worried about the coming storm, because having seen how you write these situations I know the xenomorph's assault on Equestria will be horrific beyond words.
I only hope our heroes, human and pony, can somehow manage to weather the storm.
They certainly won't manage it unchanged. That is almost inevitable.
991399 Oooh
Thanks for catching that for me! I would've never noticed...
991538 Glad you like it! I hope the next few chapters don't disappoint! There's still a few chapters until the crazyness really sets in so hang tight
997288 I knew someone would express distaste in that eventually. All I can say is that I sincerely hope the rest of the story makes up for it
However... if death is a problem for you, I suggest not reading part two, when the real crazyness starts: because, as you said before, I'm quite the bastard
So I spent my free time today reading all the way up to this chapter. To sum my feelings up, G'damn son it's gett'in good. Loved the party that Pinkie threw them, especially the theme for it. Also gotta admit that as much as I hate Jer, I like the the budding feelings that Pinkie has for him, especially her reaction to seeing Berry Punch hanging all over him . On that note I also love how AJ is starting have some inner conflict about one of the "space monkeys" as well . You certainly went to town on roughing up these two to boot, which in and of itself was a good read. Like I said on Fanfiction though, this is an Aliens story and as much I'd love to hope and wish that a certain beaten and broken human can settle down on a lovely lush planet with a certain farm mare by his side, I know better. I've seen on the movies and read the books and comics since I was a wee lad, there are bullseyes on all their backs and they don't know it yet. Here's hoping that a few of them are still alive when we reach the end.
1008182 Thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad you're liking it so far
As for character survival rate and a happy ending? We can only hope
Thanks again, and good luck with what you're working on! I can't wait to see what you post next
I just got the AVP game.
After reading this as well, it's gonna be so awesome!
I like dogs..........................Ah well still another excellent chapter.
Poor dog. The humans can't seem to catch a break. They keep getting torn up.
Finally got internet again and got the time to read some fics when I saw that you updated. This surely made my day. I can't wait for the next one to come out
1272604 I sincerely thank you for the comment, even though I have absolutely no idea what you mean.
Care to elaborate??
Are you referring to New India? Earth? Dream sequence?
Discord has a warped taste in women. Yeek
That bit where Big Mac slapped Applejack reminded me of this:
Y'know. I've gotta ask. Are you planning a sequel possibly involving a Predator invasion?
I can't help but worry, this queen seems far more intelligent than is normal. The last thing equestria needs is not a normal hive epidemic but a full blown Mother Queen (Queen Mother?) Outbreak, those bitches are nasty
God dammit, why'd you have to go to Rarity! I hate it when authors do that like when I was reading eragon. I don't care about roran, get back to the one with the dragon dammit!
It'd be amusing to see Luna's reaction to viewing such a dream of one of the humans.