Let's just say that voices in your head, and toasters, lead to Weird Things.
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I don't really see why people dislike this
Though then again I probably have weird tastes or something
Oh well.
4876378
The the main six and the princesses are to accepting and out of character, the command prompt doesn't help. No one like a computer in there brain, it makes for a bad read. Or it needs a comedy tag
Others dislike for the sake of it or that it's another MMN story(which I like). Others dislike because it's a male in a female body which means (s)he is now a fillyfooler(I think its hot). But most of all, people dislike it because of poor grammar and the far-to-fast pacing. The only way to really improve that? writing more and having an editor. A good editor.
4876683 I will admit that I have problems with pacing and grammer
as to the acceptance fact, remember, Luna clearly knew Nightmares soul was destroyed, and the other ponies would have had a moth to digest that fact. even then, BOTH princesses were their as well as the Elements, so they were fairly certain that they could subdue her if she tried anything funny.
as for the command prompt, that was just a one time thing to show how her magic and abilities would integrate with her mind, beside, I believe you would prefer a command prompt in you head over a demon alicorn trying to take over your body.
as for the whole monkey see monky do thing, I liked the idea, and tried to give it my own spin.
and the gender swap dosn't matter if you dont swing. period. it also helps reduce the urge to ship.
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As the Command prompt is done, yes I would like that vary much but, it makes for a poor read. Try something like this...
Doing it this way gives you more words(if you did the 'feel' for all the powers) and slows the pacing a bit.
As for shipping? I'm a fan of Luna X Moon, even is it's not really Nightmare.
"Fuck logic, I have magic. Your argument is invalid."
Ahahahahahahahaha
I seriously have to ask. Why does everyone keep giving NMM batwings? SHE DOESN'T HAVE BATWINGS! HERS ARE TYPICAL ALICORN.
here's a pic
http://www.deviantart.com/art/Nightmare-Moon-308870848
It's a nice story so far but twilight, stfu.
Explain.
Twilight what are you doing here?
Explain.
Fuuuuuuuu
5166338 that's because bat wings are way cooler and help signifying something's evil
5166338
(old comment is old) Nightmare Moon's wings look (in that picture for example) like a mix between the standard feathery wings of a Pegasus, and those of a bat. The overall shape, however, is reminiscent of a high speed bird of prey such as a falcon. It's the lack of defined feathers on the outer edge ending in points that gives the bat-wing idea.
6488329 why is a guy turned female becoming a thing? Like wtf
Well, it's not just THAT. Pegasi can also manipulate the very weather, not just the clouds. Also, Earth Ponies have proficiency with their manes and tails much farther than others (if The Cutie Pox, Power Ponies and Bats! re any indication) and can grow plants faster than any farmer ever could hope to. Example? in the show, every time we see Sweet Apple Acres, the trees are burgeoning with fruit! methinks tis Earth Pony magic at work!.
How are pegasi/alicorns "manipulating clouds" to fly if there are no clouds around as in a room or on a clear sky? Their wing-mass ratio would have them beat like a hummingbird's even with hollow bones to fly or perform "force vectoring" maneuvers. This is why I like V-Pony's "Blue Angel" explination of their magic manipulating the water vapor in the atmosphere.
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5428297 while i agree they are cool is strongly disagree with the evil the bat mean those with connection to shadow not evil
"what is good and evil i ask there is only light and dark"
4876378 The pacing is way too fast and the guy doesn't question he gets lectured about it.
And this is confusing.
So a first-person story where the character identifies celestia closed the door with magic yet finds it unbeliavable at first.
feeling
by/with
hoping, kind of