4903677 At the time the grammar for the story description made the story confusing. I am glad to see that it has been improved.

faster the Sonic the Hedgehog

COME ON STEP IT UP!

Bluebitch what a rude and disrespectful way to talk about prince blueblood

Then before I could mention what the the internet was REALLY used for,

I think we all know what it's used for.

Upon waking up, I was greeted to an excited Twilight.

by

I grabbed the nearest piece of food and bit into it, electing several gasps.

eliciting

Blueblood ran out of theew faster the Sonic the Hedgehog

there, than

Twilight turning green in the facem

face,

I just hat to follow the sound of clanging metal...

had

Most ponies are raciest bigots.

speciesist

I've, kind ah turned rogue and ran. That's why I don't want to start over.

kinda

my names Chitsuki."

"Drone scout number 2-27," With a flash The Changeling re-donned its disguise. A pegasus with a tan coat and a now messy two-tone light and dark gray mane and tail. "Also know as Tattered Ribbon.

name's, known

Does this story get any better later on?

Because right now its intolerable.

Two flights of stairs, and one verbal beat down to a guard that would make a drill instructor proud, we reached the kitchen where both the princesses, the other five ponies, who along with Pinkie, I had decided to call their little group the Mane Six.

Poor guard I wonder what they did to deserve that.

"Miasma?" it tilted it's head in confusion. which by the way looked frigging cute.

Yes yyyeess I’m not the only one that changelings are and can be cute and adorable!!!!!