Let's just say that voices in your head, and toasters, lead to Weird Things.
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what do Kittens have to do with anything?
Quick question, do we care for ribbon. Like at all?
5166455 I think kittens is his word for balls
Complaints Thus Far
-Characters are overly accepting and lacking in depth.
-Pacing is, as others have stated, lacking.
-Grammar (or lack thereof)
-Editing (seriously look back over your own work on a slow day and just fix what you notice is wrong, if NOTHING else.)
-Asspulls (Everything after Badname McGuyverpants got stuck in Ribbon's body)
-Badname Macguyverpants. Japanese names are overused and out of place.
-Mary Sue behavior characterized by lack of struggle or (significant) conflict and adoration or acceptance without reservation by other characters (particularly canonical main characters).
-A blood moon is nothing more than a lunar eclipse. Which by the way is a perfectly serviceable name without resorting to other languages (Eclipse).
-Characters intended as sympathetic or emotionally involving for the readers have barely been given a reason why we should care.
-Why the hell was a Ponyville blacksmith summoned to Canterlot?
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Sorry. can't resist.
Hehe nutshot a chaos god, very funny and very hilarious. Not the kittens, not the kittens! Lol Hey I got an idea why not put evil twilight into it.
forgot the quotes, capital L.
Missed the slash, adrenaline
PLEASE FIX THIS
534384
yes we do care about Ribbon