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A New Lesson

Fluttershy is getting bullied and she faces a choice of whether or not to stay in Ponyville. But when her friends learn of what is happening to her, they decide to take matters into their own hoofs to ensure that their friend is able to stay

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Electric Mane Six

Electric Mane Six #1 · Apr 15th, 2012 · · ·

This is a good story, but you need to shape up on your punctuation and capitalization. This is a story, not a chatroom.

Also, I can't help but notice that you marked this as complete. I'm going to assume that's just a mistake, because that was no ending.

SpeedyAstro

SpeedyAstro #2 · Apr 15th, 2012 · · ·

^^^^^^^^^^^^
An OK story. But you need to BUMP UP your punctuation, capitalization and other things. This is a story, not a chatroom or a game.

Also, why is there no ending. That's probably a mistake, though. I'll leave you to that.

lordbababa

lordbababa #3 · Apr 16th, 2012 · · ·

I like what's here, but what exactly happens with the bullies?

kladdos

kladdos #4 · Apr 18th, 2012 · · ·

I like the story... so far? why does it say it's complete?
also, as the others say, you really need to work on you punctuation, caputalization and other things.
keep up the good work!