The Sparkle family are going on vacation. While family holidays are often difficult, Twilight knows this one is going to be particularly bad. Mostly because her father doesn't.
You are one of the few writers that let me feel the emotions you describe. And now I want to cry myself to sleep. Good job. I mean it in all seriousness. Can't wait to see more.
You handled this exceptionally well. Everything that happened just seemed to flow naturally. The characters, their responses to the situation. Everything just seemed so right.
WELP...can't say that I'm surprised she didn't see that coming. Love makes all other things, such as logic and sensibility, blinder than bats. Or intense, undeniable, animal lust, in Twilight's case.
...i'll admit, though I deeply enjoy this story, I though it would take a eternity more for Twilight to be forward with her feelings. I'm actually extremely glad that she just straight up said it so that the story can advance along and not drag at a snails pace like so many stories are want to do.
Aw man, I must admit I was completely taken in by Twilight's confession. I found myself hoping along with her and felt just a sliver of the agony she must have at the end.
Grimm you magnificent bastard, I was expecting a much sexier ending to that, but even if I didn't get that, you've once again pulled me into the story and punched me right in the feels. media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m4v4pzYl7a1r3zat8.gif I'll get you one day for this.
Hey Dad, you remember that time you cheated on Mom with a random stranger? Guess who!
I mean... where is he now? Spending time with his family? Nah. Being a lonely orphan, while the person who he closest to in the world expresses that anyone who would have romantic feelings for him is gross.
I guess it's not like she could have made the point that she's not attracted to him because he's like family though.
4995115 More 'sexy times' will be happening soon enough, never fear.
4995231 While I don't want to give any spoilers, I feel the need to point out the story doesn't have a sad/tragedy tag (and that's not just because I don't like those tags!).
4995619 The emphasis is on ponies being attracted to him. At some point Spike's gonna grow up, and Twilight's sure he can find a lovely lady dragon then. That said, the point of that comment is that Twilight's being highly hypocritical, and to show how she's feeling so intensely for her father that things she'd normally be concerned with like social taboos are falling by the wayside.
4995629 I'm... not sure I follow. Care to expand on that?
4995885 That's gonna be a little while coming, then. We're nearly at the end of what I'd consider the first 'act' of the story, with three acts overall.
4995986 Yeah... I'm probably more worried about wherever he is now. How does Twilight, maybe the only family Spike ever had, justify putting Spike somewhere else in order to be with her real family?
I know it's something for narrative convenience, though. He doesn't have a place in the story, therefore he's not there no matter what the imagined relationship Twilight has toward him, but the implications are pretty sad for him.
4995619 I hate to say it, but Spike is a different species. That doesn't make him less important, or less of a person, but look at your pet sometime, and ask yourself how you would feel if it could talk, and wanted to date you. I'm not saying cross species dating and breeding don't happen. I mean hell, griffons exist, which logically means at some point an eagle looked at a lion and...
4995619 Jeeze dude. Would you wanna bang a really smart dolphin? Even if that dolphin held degrees and owned a house or some shit, it's still not HUMAN.
4996328 4996105 Yeah, both good points. Although "really smart dolphin" is probably a bit of an overstatement about how different ponies are than dragons. Even if there was a really smart dolphin, they'd still live underwater and I don't, and they still can't talk or spend any time with me.
No, the problem with my comment isn't even that stuff, it's that Spike isn't important to the story, and there's no reason for him to be, so there's no reason to speculate on how happy/unhappy he is about not having a family or not being treated like an equal. It's just not important, and I probably shouldn'tve brought it up.
Once I started reading, I was strung along. It was a good confession, and they both displayed the platonic and romantic side of their feelings for each other. I'm just curious as to how the hell this is going to get resolved. My first guess is to invite Cadance into a quiet discussion, because this family dynamic just took it right up the ass with how much dysfunction just got injected into things.
5055667 As much as I hate the phrase when I'm on the other side of it, I'm afraid all I can say for certain is "when it's done". I'm aiming for late next week if possible, though I can't guarantee anything yet.
Didn't disappoint this chapter, I took a while to notice you had a new one out. But I have to ask this, when will you decide to upload a new one? This is getting really intriguing. Forget the whole clop-concept, this has turned into something far more potent.
5175014 Ah, I'm not gonna fall into the trap of giving an estimate so soon after I last did it. I'm already three weeks overdue on my last suggestion! So all I'll say is it will come out when it's done, and if all goes well that should be sooner rather than later.
The last thing I want to do is rush a chapter and have it be disappointing, especially at such a crucial point in the story, and I'm afraid that means you're going to have to wait a little bit more.
Oh the drama! The suspense! The scandal!
It's like a soap opera!
Except ... you know ... Good.
Okay...
I'm totally speechless!!!
That was absolutely amazing. I love this story and it's prequel. My only word is wow!
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And not taking an entire year to tell an entire story arc.
This story updating has lifted my spirits more than anything right now!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! this chappy was INCREDIBLE!!!
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Are you kidding? I can get away with stringing this bad boy out 'til June at least!
That was sarcasm, before someone yells at me
You are one of the few writers that let me feel the emotions you describe. And now I want to cry myself to sleep. Good job. I mean it in all seriousness.
Can't wait to see more.
I don't even know what to say, with that cliff hanger... I'm just tense. Were it feasible to hold my breath til the next update, i would.
You handled this exceptionally well. Everything that happened just seemed to flow naturally. The characters, their responses to the situation. Everything just seemed so right.
Kudos.
4993466 I know right?
To think,
It was only a pic, how did it end up a fic
It was only a pic, it was only a pic~
WELP...can't say that I'm surprised she didn't see that coming. Love makes all other things, such as logic and sensibility, blinder than bats. Or intense, undeniable, animal lust, in Twilight's case.
Oh god... This is just SO wrong .... Yet so.... Enticing
That was amazing.
And that Cliff hanger. Dear Faust..
I love the story, the flow, the build-up, it's going to make the end all the more satisfying. And every characters are definitely being themselves.
I'm not sure how else to continue praising you, I want to, though.
This is the best TwilightxNightlight clopfic I've ever found through my journey through the seas of incest clopfics.
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I can't....look away!
Ah, the Princess of Love and her ever reckless advice. Never fails to move stories along! -evil smirk-
Well that could have gone better...
Shining Armor will come to the rescue! He always does!
Unfortunately it will be a sexy rescue.
I was expecting sexy times. My penis was disappointed.
Oh well, time to go read 'blindsided' for the 13th time since you announced the sequel.
...i'll admit, though I deeply enjoy this story, I though it would take a eternity more for Twilight to be forward with her feelings. I'm actually extremely glad that she just straight up said it so that the story can advance along and not drag at a snails pace like so many stories are want to do.
I must say, well played.
Aw man, I must admit I was completely taken in by Twilight's confession. I found myself hoping along with her and felt just a sliver of the agony she must have at the end.
Grimm you magnificent bastard, I was expecting a much sexier ending to that, but even if I didn't get that, you've once again pulled me into the story and punched me right in the feels.
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I'll get you one day for this.
Love the little nod to 4898190 there.
I like this. Night's reaction is logical for now. We'll se how this evolves in next chapters
Spike confirmed for social ostracization.
I mean... where is he now? Spending time with his family? Nah. Being a lonely orphan, while the person who he closest to in the world expresses that anyone who would have romantic feelings for him is gross.
I guess it's not like she could have made the point that she's not attracted to him because he's like family though.
I don't get it, half the time it's him/her and other just they. It's really weird.
Really enjoying this fic.
I'll post my final thoughts after the finale, wouldn't want to jump the gun...
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Well, hey, thanks a bunch!
4995115
More 'sexy times' will be happening soon enough, never fear.
4995231
While I don't want to give any spoilers, I feel the need to point out the story doesn't have a sad/tragedy tag (and that's not just because I don't like those tags!).
4995619
The emphasis is on ponies being attracted to him. At some point Spike's gonna grow up, and Twilight's sure he can find a lovely lady dragon then. That said, the point of that comment is that Twilight's being highly hypocritical, and to show how she's feeling so intensely for her father that things she'd normally be concerned with like social taboos are falling by the wayside.
4995629
I'm... not sure I follow. Care to expand on that?
4995885
That's gonna be a little while coming, then. We're nearly at the end of what I'd consider the first 'act' of the story, with three acts overall.
4995986
Yeah... I'm probably more worried about wherever he is now. How does Twilight, maybe the only family Spike ever had, justify putting Spike somewhere else in order to be with her real family?
I know it's something for narrative convenience, though. He doesn't have a place in the story, therefore he's not there no matter what the imagined relationship Twilight has toward him, but the implications are pretty sad for him.
4995619 I hate to say it, but Spike is a different species. That doesn't make him less important, or less of a person, but look at your pet sometime, and ask yourself how you would feel if it could talk, and wanted to date you. I'm not saying cross species dating and breeding don't happen. I mean hell, griffons exist, which logically means at some point an eagle looked at a lion and...
4995619 Jeeze dude. Would you wanna bang a really smart dolphin? Even if that dolphin held degrees and owned a house or some shit, it's still not HUMAN.
4996328
4996105
Yeah, both good points. Although "really smart dolphin" is probably a bit of an overstatement about how different ponies are than dragons. Even if there was a really smart dolphin, they'd still live underwater and I don't, and they still can't talk or spend any time with me.
No, the problem with my comment isn't even that stuff, it's that Spike isn't important to the story, and there's no reason for him to be, so there's no reason to speculate on how happy/unhappy he is about not having a family or not being treated like an equal. It's just not important, and I probably shouldn'tve brought it up.
Oh... my... This keeps getting better and better. Please don't stop.
Unless it's the end then it's ok to stop...
SO...... MUCH...... FEELS....... POOR..... TWI..... AND...... CRESCENT...... SPARKLE..........
4995986 Meh, if I can still be holding out for another chapter of friggin' Unicorn Diaries, I can wait however long this will take you.
Once I started reading, I was strung along. It was a good confession, and they both displayed the platonic and romantic side of their feelings for each other. I'm just curious as to how the hell this is going to get resolved. My first guess is to invite Cadance into a quiet discussion, because this family dynamic just took it right up the ass with how much dysfunction just got injected into things.
Throughout this, through all the drama surrounding Twilight, I almost forgot...
Why is that? There's still something missing here. Why did Night Light go there?
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*cough*
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But he didn't explain, at least not yet.
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Sorry, I wasn't saying he did, I was just backing up your point. He was kind of interrupted before he could say what he meant by that.
I really like this, a lot more than I probably should.
Oh shit Twilight what are you doing
Hot damn. The scandal. It's like finding a batter of cookie dough, and not even bothering to use something other than the ladle.
hot danm , the feels are real.....
Oh man, that drama... so good.
Any idea when the next chapter is coming out? I'd love to see where this story goes!
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As much as I hate the phrase when I'm on the other side of it, I'm afraid all I can say for certain is "when it's done". I'm aiming for late next week if possible, though I can't guarantee anything yet.
Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming. Yandere Twilight incoming.
And my body is more than ready for it.
YOU (expletive) TEASE!
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5056091 And this is why we try not to give guesstimates.
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I have learned my lesson. The rest is still coming, I promise! Just... not as soon as I'd like.
5163514 Keep plugging, Grimm. Been there. The story is entertaining enough to wait for.
Didn't disappoint this chapter, I took a while to notice you had a new one out. But I have to ask this, when will you decide to upload a new one? This is getting really intriguing. Forget the whole clop-concept, this has turned into something far more potent.
5175014
Ah, I'm not gonna fall into the trap of giving an estimate so soon after I last did it. I'm already three weeks overdue on my last suggestion! So all I'll say is it will come out when it's done, and if all goes well that should be sooner rather than later.
The last thing I want to do is rush a chapter and have it be disappointing, especially at such a crucial point in the story, and I'm afraid that means you're going to have to wait a little bit more.