Applejack is set up on a blind date by Twilight, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and Rainbow Dash. She finds out that the mystery man is actually Gray, a pegasus that works at her orchard. They fall in love and eventually plan to get married. Before they can, however, the orchard is attacked by ravenous wolves. They have to use the help of all their friends to fight off this violent hoard, but it may not end all well.
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Tracking, fun start to begin with
here's a tip, Don't tell the whole story in the description, It removes any interest a potential reader will have in the narrative.
429191 Sorry for that. It told me to give a long description so I Figured if meant the entire thing. I'll be more careful about that in the future. Thank you
Short but sweet
You... kind of told the story in a nutshell in the description, what's the point for anyone to read it now?
Good story good sir.Its just the description you need to dealt with...
Thanks all yall. I was confused about how long they wanted it. Next time I make a story, I won't give the entire thing away.
Not too bad, heartwarming.
440924 Thank you.
I enjoyed this a lot. It needs improvement in some parts, but your writing is coming along nicely. Looking forwards to more stories from you.
450323 Thank you. Revision Ideas are always welcome (hint hint) and I do admit some parts of it were rushed. Sadly, not all of my writing it happy stuff. Dream World is a very dark piece I'm working on at the moment. You can check it out but there's only one chapter at the moment. Thanks again for your feed back.
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