"Oh yes," Trixie said in dawning recognition. "The one Trixie had picked for Trixie's harem but who vanished before Trixie could summon her to Trixie's bed chamber for the night. Such a missed opportunity..." Trixie coughed suddenly. "That is, Trixie means that Trixie was under the influence of dark magic at the time and that Trixie cannot be held responsible for Trixie's actions, for which Trixie is very sorry and has already apologized for. Surely Big Macintosh can find it within his enormous heart to forgive Trixie?"
Phew! Nice save! And really Trixie, it's nice that you've found a guy you're willing to offer yourself for, but try to keep some measure of dignity, would you?
"Trixie apologizes if Trixie was unclear," Trixie said after an awkward silence. "Trixie's intent was to invite Big Macintosh to mount Trixie right here in the mud, at this very moment," she explained helpfully.
Wow, subtle seduction technique there.
Maybe she could tone it down a little, she could be considered to be 'coming on a little strong'
4794430 Same here. One of my biggest pet peeves in shipping stories is the sudden change in who gets shipped, with no warning at all. You could be reading a story about your favorite shipping, but then it suddenly turns into a different shipping out of the blue. It's irritating and a good way to turn away readers.
I believe it is possible to be angry about someone sexually harassing your sister's notably sweet, sensitive and pleasant to be around friend without having a romantic interest in said friend. Doubly so when that someone admits she was planning to rape that friend, expresses sadness at missing the opportunity to do so and then dismisses the entire thing as not her fault.
Besides, Big Macintosh/Rainbow Dash makes so much more sense.
4794915 The former. Or at least she's never been talked to like that by somepony that mattered to her, since she generally doesn't care enough about ponies that object to the way she acts to get to that point with them in the first place. Trixie only really views others as important in relation to herself. Trixie likes or at least wants Big Macintosh so he matters, at least for the moment. Couple that with the size of Trixie's ego and the fact that she is really hot and charismatic and isn't used to being rejected when she makes advances on somepony and it hit her hard enough to hurt, whereas normally she would just ignore or not even notice criticism like that, or at most get annoyed or offended.
It isn't even really that she feels that much in the way of non lust related emotions towards him so much as that she's surrounded by ponies she doesn't care about at all and that tend to sound like the adults in a Charlie Brown cartoon as far as she's concerned, so the one pony she was favorably disposed towards and willing to get to know and pay attention to stood out that much more by contrast.
4796169 How so? I get that Trixie only cares about Trixie and what Trixie wants. I'm curious to know how she ended up like this. She wasn't born this way.
4796458 Well I mean I didn't create Trixie as a character and while I do have ideas for how my version of her turned out this way most of them I don't currently plan to have be a major part of the story.
Also to clarify I don't really see her as especially selfish or evil so much as actually being so incredibly arrogant that the things she says, does and thinks make perfect sense to her and it literally never occurs to her that they could be seen any other way.
Sorry of like when Eric Cartman commented that he thought the Special Olympics was wrong because it was cruel to force disabled people to flail around and humiliate themselves for his amusement.
Well, there's hope after all; the fact that she feels shame means that at the least she is not a Sociopath, just an impudent little braggart. Hope to see this progress further as the days go by.
5009946 I believe he's referring to the mention of pig genitalia. That's both unnecessary and off-putting. Trixie's face-palm inducing comments in relation to Big Mac equipment are well within the line of reasonable humor.
Ew, trixies comments on ajs family and then her intentions on fluttershy make me want to see her fail in gratitious fashion.
Are you sure this version of trixie isnt evil? If she was willing to kidnap fluttershy for a harem then she seems to be a character more worthy of jailtime for other ponies safety then being allowed to work in the community.
Im not sure about this trixie at all. She seems more like a villan then a character worth rooting for.
Well, looks likes Trixie struck out.
Phew! Nice save!
And really Trixie, it's nice that you've found a guy you're willing to offer yourself for, but try to keep some measure of dignity, would you?
Wow, subtle seduction technique there.
Maybe she could tone it down a little, she could be considered to be 'coming on a little strong'
I hope you liked that reality check Trixie. Getting sentenced by Celestia should be sounding pretty good right about now.
Oh, no! Is this turning into FlutterMac now?
4794379 If this is turning into FlutterMac, I'm outta here. I'm reading this to see TrixieMac.
4794430 Same here. One of my biggest pet peeves in shipping stories is the sudden change in who gets shipped, with no warning at all. You could be reading a story about your favorite shipping, but then it suddenly turns into a different shipping out of the blue. It's irritating and a good way to turn away readers.
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I believe it is possible to be angry about someone sexually harassing your sister's notably sweet, sensitive and pleasant to be around friend without having a romantic interest in said friend. Doubly so when that someone admits she was planning to rape that friend, expresses sadness at missing the opportunity to do so and then dismisses the entire thing as not her fault.
Besides, Big Macintosh/Rainbow Dash makes so much more sense.
4794618 So wait, is this suddenly a RainbowMac story? I'm confused by what you mean.
4794796 I feel that you are focusing on the wrong thing here.
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I get what you are saying. However, I am giving this one or two more chapter(s).
I want to find out why that is the case. Is it because no one has ever mattered to her and/or she has never mattered to anyone?
4794915 The former. Or at least she's never been talked to like that by somepony that mattered to her, since she generally doesn't care enough about ponies that object to the way she acts to get to that point with them in the first place. Trixie only really views others as important in relation to herself. Trixie likes or at least wants Big Macintosh so he matters, at least for the moment. Couple that with the size of Trixie's ego and the fact that she is really hot and charismatic and isn't used to being rejected when she makes advances on somepony and it hit her hard enough to hurt, whereas normally she would just ignore or not even notice criticism like that, or at most get annoyed or offended.
It isn't even really that she feels that much in the way of non lust related emotions towards him so much as that she's surrounded by ponies she doesn't care about at all and that tend to sound like the adults in a Charlie Brown cartoon as far as she's concerned, so the one pony she was favorably disposed towards and willing to get to know and pay attention to stood out that much more by contrast.
4795032 Okay. I hope you explain in your story why Trixie is this way, if that's the case.
4795114 I thought the relevant parts would be apparent from the way her perspective is written
4796169 How so? I get that Trixie only cares about Trixie and what Trixie wants. I'm curious to know how she ended up like this. She wasn't born this way.
4796458 Well I mean I didn't create Trixie as a character and while I do have ideas for how my version of her turned out this way most of them I don't currently plan to have be a major part of the story.
Also to clarify I don't really see her as especially selfish or evil so much as actually being so incredibly arrogant that the things she says, does and thinks make perfect sense to her and it literally never occurs to her that they could be seen any other way.
Sorry of like when Eric Cartman commented that he thought the Special Olympics was wrong because it was cruel to force disabled people to flail around and humiliate themselves for his amusement.
Well, there's hope after all; the fact that she feels shame means that at the least she is not a Sociopath, just an impudent little braggart. Hope to see this progress further as the days go by.
Changed my mind about the fav, too much penis humor.
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Uhm, what humor? I only mention penises when it's relevant to the story.
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I believe he's referring to the mention of pig genitalia. That's both unnecessary and off-putting. Trixie's face-palm inducing comments in relation to Big Mac equipment are well within the line of reasonable humor.
Ew, trixies comments on ajs family and then her intentions on fluttershy make me want to see her fail in gratitious fashion.
Are you sure this version of trixie isnt evil? If she was willing to kidnap fluttershy for a harem then she seems to be a character more worthy of jailtime for other ponies safety then being allowed to work in the community.
Im not sure about this trixie at all. She seems more like a villan then a character worth rooting for.
Burn...savere burn. Someone get her some ice.